PARTS OF SPEECH
All words may be classified into groups called parts of speech. There are 8 parts of speech namely: Nouns, pronouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, prepositions, conjunctions and interjections.
We shall now discuss these parts of speech one at a time:
A noun is the part of speech that names a person, a place, a thing or an idea. You use nouns every day when you speak or write. Every day you probably use thousands of nouns. Because nouns name the objects and people and places around you, it would be very difficult to talk about anything at all without them.
Many nouns name things you can see:
Persons Places Things
boy lake boot
student country shadow
John Kamau Nairobi chair
stranger Jupiter sweater
writer Kenyatta Market calendar
Barack Obama Sierra Leone short story
Some nouns name things you cannot see such as feelings, ideas and characteristics:
Feelings Ideas Characteristics
excitement freedom curiosity
fear justice cowardice
anger fantasy courage
happiness faith imagination
surprise evil self-confidence
What words in each sentence below are nouns?
Example: John is a dancer – John, dancer
- The students planned a party.
- Three boys performed songs.
- Excitement filled the air.
- Joyce Chepkemoi won a prize.
- Otieno lives in a house on my street.
Copy the nouns below and write whether it names a person, a place, a thing, or an idea.
Example: river – place
- Candle Guitar
- Wrestle China
- Joy Hatred
- Menengai Crater Masanduku Arap Simiti
Write down each noun in the following sentences.
Example: Kenya is a beautiful country – Kenya, country
- The musicians played drums and trumpets.
- Her family lives in a village.
- Petronilla enjoyed the trip.
- A festival was held in Kenyatta University.
- People in costumes filled the streets.
- Boys in Scouts uniforms were leading the parade.
- The holiday was a great excitement.
- A taxi brought the family to the airport.
- Maryanne built a huge castle in the wet sand.
- Her mother swam in the warm water.
There are different kinds of nouns:
Common and proper nouns
All nouns can be described as either common or proper. When you talk or write about a person, a place, a thing, or an idea in general, you use a common noun.
Example: Doctors work hard. They treat many patients.
A proper noun is the name of a particular person, place, thing, or idea. Proper nouns always begin with capital letters.
Example: Ephraim Maree is a doctor. He comes from Kirinyaga.
Note: When a proper noun is made up of more than one word, only the important words in the noun will begin with a capital letter. Do not capitalize words such as the, of, or for.
Example: Gulf of Mexico, Statue of Liberty, the Commander–in–Chief.
Common and Proper Nouns
Common Proper Common Proper
street Kerugoya city Raila Odinga
author South Africa ocean Wanjohi
policeman Asia bed Moi Avenue
country Indian Ocean wardrobe Lake Victoria
mountain England continent Dr. Frank Njenga
lake Mandela assistant Professor Saitoti
Proper nouns are important to good writing. They make your writing more specific, and therefore clearer.
Which words are proper nouns and should be capitalised? Which words are common nouns?
Example: kenya Proper: Kenya
- july student 11. america
- book kendu bay 12. business
- face john hopkins 13. day
- england life 14. east africa
- crocodiles johannesburg 15. calendar
List the common nouns and the proper nouns in each of the following sentences.
Example: Nancy welcomed the guests.
Proper: Nancy Common: guests
- Lucky Dube was a famous singer.
- This dancer has performed in London and Paris.
- His last flight was over the Mediterranean Sea.
- She worked as a nurse during the Second World War.
- Her goal was to educate students all over the world.
- It was the worst accident in the history of Europe.
- Bill Gates is best known for founding Microsoft.
- The Pilot was the first woman to cross that ocean alone.
- She grabbed a kettle and brought them water.
- Professor Wangari Maathai won a Nobel Peace Prize.
Singular and Plural Nouns
A noun may be either singular or plural. A singular noun names one person, place, thing, or idea.
Example: The farmer drove to the market in his truck.
A plural noun names more than one person, place, thing or idea.
Example: The farmers drove to the markets in their trucks.
Rules for forming plurals
The following are guidelines for forming plurals:
- To form the plural of most singular nouns, add -s.
Examples: Street–streets, house–houses, painter–painters, shelter–shelters, event-events, hospital–hospitals.
- When a singular noun ends in s, sh, ch, x, or z, add -es.
Examples: dress-dresses, brush-brushes, axe-axes, coach-coaches, box–boxes, bench-benches, dish-dishes, waltz–waltzes.
- When a singular noun ends in o, add -s to make it plural.
Examples: Piano-pianos, solo-solos, cameo–cameos, concerto–concertos, patio-patios, studio-studios, radio-radios, rodeo–rodeos.
- For some nouns ending with a consonant and o, add -es.
Examples: hero-heroes, potato-potatoes, echo-echoes, veto-vetoes, tomato-tomatoes.
- When a singular noun ends with a consonant and y, change the y to i and add -es.
Examples: Library – libraries, activity – activities, story – stories, city – cities, berry – berries.
- When a singular noun ends with a vowel (a,e,i,o,u) followed by y, just add -s.
Examples: Valley – valleys, essay – essays, alley – alleys, survey – surveys, joy – joys.
- To form the plural of many nouns ending in f or fe, change the f to v and add -es or s.
Examples: Wife – wives, thief – thieves, loaf – loaves, half – halves, shelf – shelves, leaf – leaves, scarf – scarves, life – lives, calf – calves, elf – elves.
- For some nouns ending in f, add –s to form the plural.
Examples: proof – proofs, belief – beliefs, motif – motifs, cliff – cliffs.
- Some nouns remain the same in the singular and the plural.
Examples: deer – deer, sheep – sheep, series – series, species – species, moose – moose, trout – trout.
- The plurals of some nouns are formed in special ways.
Examples: foot – feet, child – children, mouse – mice, man – men, woman – women, ox-oxen, tooth – teeth.
NB: If you don’t figure out the correct spelling of a plural noun, look it up in a dictionary.
What is the plural form of each of the following nouns? Example: scarf –scarves
- tooth cuff 17. moose 25. boss
- wife deer 18. child 26. fox
- giraffe cliff 19. echo 27. bunch
- hero auto 20. baby 28. ferry
- radio studio 21. sky 29. flash
- potato man 22. beach 30. ship
- belief roof 23. eye
- thief rodeo 24. Volcano
Write the plural form of each noun in brackets to complete each sentence correctly.
Example: I bought two ________________ from the shop. (loaf) loaves
- I used two different _______________ to cut the rope. (knife)
- She peeled the _______________ with a knife. (potato)
- They are feeding the noisy _____________. (goose)
- The tools are placed on the _____________. (shelf)
- Mukami cut a few _______________ for the salad. (tomato)
- The ______________ are playing in the field. (child)
- Some ______________ are hiding in the ceiling. (mouse)
- The ______________ of the buildings must be repaired. (roof)
- The music helped them imagine the strange _________. (story)
- Koech used creative ______________ to help young people sharpen their imagination. (activity)
Countable and Uncountable Nouns
These are nouns that take plurals and can be counted.
Egg – eggs One egg, three eggs, ten eggs
Potato – Potatoes Twenty potatoes
Onion – Onions Two hundred onions
Such nouns are known as COUNTABLE or COUNT NOUNS
These are nouns that do not take plurals and cannot be counted.
Examples: salt, butter, cooking fat, milk, bread, jam
We do not say:
Such nouns are known as UNCOUNTABLE or MASS NOUNS
Rewrite the words below in two columns, COUNTABLE and UNCOUNTABLE NOUNS
Plurals with uncountable Nouns
One way to express plurals of uncountable nouns is by use of expressions of quantity.
a piece of information – pieces of information
a loaf of bread – four loaves of bread
a tin of soup – three tins of soup
a piece of furniture – several pieces of furniture
a litre of milk – twenty litres of milk
a bottle of beer – ten bottles of beer
Supply an appropriate expression of quantity for the following uncountable nouns
- …………………………………..of cigarettes.
- …………………………….. of cooking oil
- …………………………….of jam.
- ……………………………….of butter.
- …………………………………of soda.
- …………………………………. of toothpaste
- ……………………………..of rice.
- five ……………………………….. of flour.
- two ……………………………….. of chocolate.
- four…………………….. of news.
Collective nouns are nouns that represent a group of people or things as a single unit.
Some collective nouns can take plural forms
crowd (s) flock (s)
group (s) herd (s)
team (s) committee (s)
Some collective nouns, however, cannot be used in the plural:
When I arrived at the airport, there were………1……… (crowd) of people blocking the entrance with their ……………..2………………( luggage ). Near the customs sections, several……………3…………….. (group) of officials were standing, checking the ………………4……………… (equipment) that was being loaded onto a trolley. Most people were standing, waiting for… ………….5…………….. (information) from the loudspeakers on the departures and arrivals of aircraft.
A compound noun is a noun that is made up of two or more words. The words that form compound nouns may be joined together, separated or hyphenated.
Joined: bookcase, blackboard, pushcart
Separated: high school, rabbit hutch, radar gun
Hyphenated: go-getter, mother-in-law, sergeant-at-arms
Compound nouns are usually a combination of two or more word classes. The most common combinations are as follows:
- Some are formed by joining a noun with another noun. Most of these compound nouns take their plurals in the last words.
tableroom(s) grass root(s) prize-fighter(s)
cupboard(s) policeman/men rubber-stamp(s)
bookcase(s) farmhouse(s) sanitary towel(s)
cowshed(s) fruit machine(s) shoulder blade(s)
- Some are formed by joining a verb and an adverb. Most of these compound nouns also take their plurals in the last words.
breakfast(s) push-up(s) rundown(s)
takeaway(s) knockout(s) slip-up(s)
- Some compound nouns are formed by joining an adjective and a noun. Most of these also take their plurals in the last words.
hotdog(s) polar bear(s) safe guard(s)
highway(s) remote control(s)
nuclear power right angle(s)
- Some are formed by joining a verb and a noun. Most of these also take their plurals in the last words.
driveway(s) playground(s) spend thrift(s)
breakdance(s) pushchair(s) go-getter(s)
password(s) spare wheel(s)
- Some ore formed by joining an adverb and a noun. Most of these also take their plural in the last words.
overdraft(s) overcoats(s) backyards(s)
backbencher(s) undercoat(s) backbone(s)
backlog(s) underwear(s) oversight(s)
- A few compound nouns are formed by joining an adverb and a verb. These ones also take their plurals in the last words.
outbreak(s) backlash(es) output(s)
outburst(s) outcast(s) input(s)
- A few others are formed by joining a noun and a verb. They also take their plurals in the last words.
- A number of compound nouns are formed by joining two nouns by use of hyphens and a short preposition in between. These compound nouns always take their plurals in the first words.
Underline the compound nouns in the following sentences and write down their plural forms where possible.
- John wants to be a quantity surveyor when he grows up.
- Rainwater had washed away all the top soil.
- The footballer was shown a red card by the referee.
- Neither candidate won the elections, forcing a runoff.
- The goalkeeper saved a penalty in the second half.
- He killed the wild pig with a sledge hammer.
- Njoroge’s tape-recorder was stolen yesterday.
- The theatregoer was disappointed with the show.
- Size 8’s latest song has caused an uproar.
- He attempted a creative writing workshop.
A possessive noun shows who or what owns something. A possessive noun can either be singular or plural.
Singular possessive nouns
A singular possessive noun shows that one person, place, or thing has or owns something. To make a singular noun show possession, add an apostrophe and s (‘s).
the feathers of the chick – the chick’s feathers
the hat that belongs to the man – the man’s hat
the child’s toy the fish’s fins
Mark’s bike the horse’s tail
Using possessive nouns is shorter and better than other ways of showing possession.
LONGER: The dog belonging to Papa is barking.
BETTER: Papa’s dog is barking.
Plural Possessive Nouns
A plural possessive noun shows possession or ownership of a plural noun.
The cars that belong to the teachers are parked here.
The teachers’ cars are parked here.
When a plural noun ends in s, add only an apostrophe after the s to make the noun show possession.
Not all plural nouns end in s. When a plural noun does not end in s, add ‘s to form the plural possession.
the shoes of the men – the men’s shoes
the food of the children – the children’s food
The noun following a possessive noun may either be the name of a thing or a quality.
Thing – Koki’s raincoat Brian’s umbrella
Quality – the judge’s fury Bob’s courage
Change the following phrases to show possession in a shorter way.
Example: the claws of the leopard
the leopard’s claws.
- the tail of the lion
- the dog that Cliff has
- the hat of my mother
- the book that Evans owns
- the pot that the child has
- the name of the doll
- the mobile phone that Lucy owns
- the shoes that Kimani has
- the teeth that the fox has
- the rabbit that my friend owns
Summary of rules of forming Possessive Nouns
- For singular a noun, add an apostrophe and s.
Example: Mr. Mukui’s car is a Toyota Corolla.
- For plural noun ending in s, add an apostrophe only.
Example: The victims’ property was stolen
- For a plural noun that does not end in s, add an apostrophe and s.
Example: The women’s boots were muddy.
Singular Noun Singular possessive Plural Noun Plural possessive
boy boy’s boys boys’
child child’s children children’s
mouse mouse’s mice mice’s
deer deer’s deer deer’s
Write the following phrases to show possession.
Example: teachers – pens = teachers’ pens
- cooks – aprons women – sports
- men – boots carpenters – nails
- countries – flags sailors – uniforms
- guests – coats musicians – instruments
- athletes – medal neighbours – pets
Rewrite the following sentences changing the BOLD words to plural possessive nouns.
Example: The players on the teams practised after school.
The teams’ players practised after school.
- Each day the wealth of the couple increased.
- There was a team of men and a team of women.
- The uniforms that the teams wore were new.
- Numbers were printed on the shirts of the athletes
- 5. Scores made by the team-mates were put on the scoreboard.
- The players enjoyed the cheers of their friends.
- The whistles of the coaches stopped the game.
- The eyes of the children were full of tears of joy.
- The soothing voices of their mothers calmed them.
- However, the houses belonging to their neighbours were destroyed.
A pronoun is a part of speech that takes the place of a noun. They include such words as I, we, he, she, they, me and us.
Pronouns enable you to avoid repeating the same names (nouns), when writing or speaking, which would otherwise make you sound very awkward and wordy. By using pronouns effectively, you can make your writing and speaking flow smoothly.
Pronouns can be classified into 6 types. These are personal, indefinite, demonstrative, interrogative, reflexive and intensive pronouns.
A personal pronoun is a word that is used in place of a noun or another pronoun. They are used to refer to nouns that name persons or things.
Awkward: Kamau put on Kamau’s gum boots. Then Kamau went to the shamba.
Improved: Kamau put on his gum boots. Then he went to the shamba.
In the above example, the personal pronoun his helps the writer avoid repeating the same noun. The pronoun he acts as a bridge to connect the two sentences.
Personal pronouns are further classified in terms of person and gender.
In terms of person, personal pronouns can be divided into three classes.
- First person – I, my, me, we, our and us.
These ones refer to the person(s) speaking.
Example: I always ride my bike to school.
- Second person – you, your, yours
These refer to the person(s) spoken to.
Example: I will call you tomorrow.
(iii) Third person – he, his, him, she, hers, her, it, its, they, their, them.
These ones refer to another person(s) or thing(s) that is being spoken of.
The personal pronoun it usually replaces a noun that stands for a thing or an animal. It is never used in place of a person.
Personal pronouns can also be classified by gender. Gender can either be masculine (referring to male people), feminine (referring to female people) or neuter (referring to animals or things).
Joseph cleaned his car. (his is the third person, masculine gender).
Isabel said the dress was hers (hers is the third person, feminine gender).
The dog wagged its tail. (its is the third person, neuter gender).
FORMS OF PERSONAL PRONOUNS
In English, personal pronouns have three forms: the subject form, the object form and the possessive form.
She is a painter. (subject form)
He praised her. (Object form)
It is her best painting. (Possessive form)
A subject pronoun takes the place of a noun as the subject of a sentence. These pronouns are:
- Singular forms – I, you, he, she, it
- Plural forms – we, you, they
Noun Subject Pronoun
The housegirl takes care of her. She takes care of her.
The dog guards the house. It guards the house.
Mark and Francis love swimming. They love swimming.
Subject pronouns also appear after forms of the linking verbs be.
The watchman today is he.
The composers were they.
Underline the subject pronouns in the following sentences.
Example: She ate a water melon
- They ate fish and chips.
- We like Italian food.
- It is delicious.
- The biggest eater was he.
- You helped in the cooking.
- The cooks were Tom and I.
Replace the underlined words with subject pronouns.
Example: Pio and Gama are friends – They
- The glasses were under the table.
- Emma fed the chicken.
- The pears were juicy.
- Uncle Ben and Lillian visited the orphans.
- The new waitress is Jane.
- The fastest runners were Tecla and Kirui.
- Lisa went to the hall.
- The chicken was slaughtered.
- Lucky Dube and Brenda Fasie were South African Singers.
- Samuel Wanjiru has won many athletics medals.
Object pronouns can replace nouns used after action verbs. These pronouns are:
- Singular – me, you, him, her, it
- Plural – us, you, them
The driver drove him. (Direct object)
The parents thanked us. (Direct object)
The reporters asked him many questions. (Indirect object)
In the above examples, the personal pronouns are the direct or indirect objects of the verbs before them.
Object pronouns can also replace nouns after prepositions such as to, for, with, in, at or by. That is, they can be objects of prepositions.
Gladys waved to them. (Object of a preposition)
The delivery is for me.
Ben went with them to the theatre.
Choose the correct pronoun in the brackets in the following sentences.
Example: Irungu photographed (us, we). = us
- Lisa asked (he, him) for a picture.
- Adam sketched Lisa and (I, me).
- He gave a photo to (us, we).
- Ann and (she, her) saw Dave and Bob.
- Adam drew Lisa and (they, them).
- Mark helped (I, me) with the packing.
- Loise praised (him, he) for his good work.
- Everyone spotted (they, them) easily.
- That night Mike played the guitar for (us, we).
- (We, Us) drove with (they, them) to the mountains.
A possessive pronoun shows ownership.
Example: My pen is black.
There are two kinds of possessive pronouns:
- Those used as adjectives to modify nouns. These possessive pronouns are:
Singular: My, your, his, her, its
Plural: Our, your, their
My shirt is yellow. Your food is on the table.
His bag is green. This is her dress.
Its fur is soft. These are our parents.
Pay your bills. They removed their bats.
The above possessive pronouns always appear before nouns to modify them. Hence, they are called modifiers.
- Those that stand alone and replace nouns in sentences. These possessive nouns are:
Singular: mine, yours, his, hers, its
Plural: ours, yours, their
The yellow shirt is mine. The food on the table is yours.
The green bag is his. This dress is hers.
Its is the soft fur. These crops are ours.
These bills are yours. Those hats are theirs.
Complete the following sentences by choosing the correct possessive pronoun from the brackets.
Example: The lazy girl completed (her, hers) home work. = her.
- (My, mine) journey to Mombasa was enjoyable.
- Florence said (her, hers) was the best.
- Are the pictures of Fort Jesus (your, yours)?
- (Her, Hers) were taken at Jomo Kenyatta Beach.
- Tomorrow we will make frames for (our, ours) pictures.
- (My, mine) class is planning a trip to Mt. Kenya.
- (Our, ours) trip will be taken on video.
- Micere is excited that the idea was (her, hers).
- Koki and Toti cannot hide (their, theirs) excitement.
- (My, mine) dream is to climb to the highest peak of the mountain.
POINTS TO NOTE
- The pronoun I is used as a subject or after forms of the linking verb be.
Subject: I travel by bus.
After the linking verb be: Yesterday, the prefects on duty were Victor and I.
- The pronoun me is used as an object after action verbs or words (prepositions) such as to, for, with, in, or at.
Object: Rose met me at the gate.
After prepositions: Rose waited for me at the gate.
You are coming with me.
- When using compound subjects and objects (i.e. subjects and objects comprising of a pronoun and a noun or another pronoun), always name yourself last.
Diana and I visited our grandmother yesterday.
Who appointed Chege and me?
Rose waited for her and me at the gate.
CONTRACTIONS WITH PRONOUNS
A contraction is a shortened form of two words. One or more letters are omitted and an apostrophe (’) is used in place of the letters left out.
A contraction is formed by combining pronouns and the verbs am, is, are, will, would, have, has, and had.
Pronoun + verb Contraction Pronoun + verb Contraction
I am I’m I have I’ve
He is he’s he has he’s
It is it’s it has it’s
You are you’re you have you’ve
They are they’re they have they’ve
I will I’ll I had I’d
You will you’ll you had you’d
We would we’d we had we’d
1.Some contractions look the same but are formed from different words.
he is, he has = he’s
we had, we would = we’d
2.Some possessive pronouns sound like contractions. Because the words sound alike, they are sometimes confused.
Possessive pronouns Contractions
Incorrect: The team celebrated it’s victory.
Correct: The team celebrated its victory.
Incorrect: Your late for the preps.
Correct: You’re late for the preps.
Incorrect: Whose the fastest runner in the world?
Correct: Who’s the fastest runner in the world?
Rules of using possessive pronouns and contractions correctly:
- If the word you want to use stands for two words, it is a contraction and needs an apostrophe.
- Never use an apostrophe in a possessive pronoun.
Write the contractions for the following word pairs. Example: It has = it’s
- You will 3. He had 5. You have
- We would 4. I am 6. They will
What pronoun and verb make up each of the following contractions?
Example: It’s = it is, it has
- I’ll 3. you’d 5. they’re
- we’re 4. he’s 6. she’d
Choose the correct word given in brackets in the following sentences.
- The Kenyan government has worked hard to improve (its, it’s) educational system.
- (Whose, Who’s) going to decide where the guests will sleep?
- (Their, They’re) learning French in their school.
- Only students (whose, who’s) scores are excellent will join national schools.
- (Its, It’s) been estimated that about 8 million Kenyans are living with HIV AIDS.
An indefinite pronoun is a pronoun that does not refer to a specific person or thing.
In English, there are singular indefinite pronouns, plural indefinite and both singular and plural indefinite pronouns.
Singular Indefinite Pronouns
another anything everybody neither one
anybody each everyone nobody somebody
anymore either everything no one someone.
An indefinite pronoun must agree with its verbs and in number with its possessive pronoun. The above indefinite pronouns are used with singular verbs. They are also used with singular possessive pronouns.
Agreement with verbs
Correct: Everyone has heard of Lake Turkana.
Incorrect: Everyone have heard of Lake Turkana.
Correct: Nobody knows what happened to Samuel Wanjiru.
Incorrect: Nobody know what happened to Samuel Wanjiru.
Correct: Everything about the old man remains a mystery.
Incorrect: Everything about the old man remain a mystery.
Agreement in number with possessive pronouns
Correct: Neither believed his/her eyes.
Incorrect: Neither believed their eyes.
Correct: Each strained his/her neck to see.
Incorrect: Each strained their neck to see.
Plural indefinite pronouns
both many few several
These indefinite pronouns use plural verbs and possessive pronouns.
Correct: Few know about Lake Olbolosat.
Incorrect: Few knows about Lake Obolosat.
Correct: Both stand by what they believe.
Incorrect: Both stands by what they believe.
Plural possessive pronouns
Correct: Several reported their findings.
Incorrect: Several reported his/her findings.
Both singular and plural indefinite pronouns
all some any none
These indefinite pronouns may be singular or plural, depending on their meaning in the sentence.
All of my story is true. – singular
All of the guests are here. – plural
None of the lake is foggy. – singular
None of the photos are spoiled. – plural.
Underline the indefinite pronouns in the following sentences and then write the correct form of the verb or possessive pronoun in the brackets.
- All the photographs of the killer (is, are) unclear.
- (Has, Have) anybody seen my camera?
- Many (believes, believe) a monster lives in the lake.
- Each of the photographs (make, makes) people want more.
- All of the evidence (indicates, indicate) that he was killed by his wife.
- Everyone has taken (his, their) payment.
- Several eyewitnesses volunteered to give (his, their) accounts.
- Anyone can lose (her, their) eyesight.
- Another reported (his, their) case to the police.
- Somebody left (her, their) handbag in the lecture hall.
A demonstrative pronoun is used to single or point out one or more persons or things referred to in the sentence. These pronouns are this, that, these, and those.
This and these point to persons or things that are near.
This is a gazelle.
These are the students of Kianjege West Secondary School.
That and those point to persons or things that are farther away.
That is the city square.
Those are the lodging rooms.
This and that are used with singular nouns. These and those are used with plural nouns.
Pick the correct demonstrate pronouns from the choices given in the brackets in the following sentences.
- (This, That) is the canteen we are entering now.
- (This, That) is the dispensary across the street
- (These, Those) are beautiful flowers on the counter over there.
- Are (those, these) chocolate bars on the far counter?
- I think (these, those) are called Vuvuzelas.
An interrogative pronoun is used to ask a question. These pronouns are who, whose, whom, which and what.
Who is the mayor of this town?
Whose is the red car?
Which is her blouse?
What did she ask you?
Whom should I trust with my secret?
USING WHO, WHOM, AND WHOSE
Who, whom, and whose are often used to ask questions. Hence, they are interrogative pronouns.
WHO is the subject form. It is used as the subject of a verb.
Who taught you how to play the guitar? (Who is the subject of the verb taught.)
WHOM is the object form. It is used as the direct object of a verb or as the object of a preposition.
Whom did you meet? (Whom is the object of the verb did meet).
For whom is this trophy? (whom is the object of the preposition for).
WHOSE is the possessive form. It can be used :
- To modify a noun
Whose umbrella is this? (whose modifies the noun umbrella)
- Alone as the subject or object of a verb
Whose are those water melons? (whose is the subject of the verb are)
Whose did you admire? (whose is the object of the verb did admire)
Pick the correct interrogative pronouns from the brackets in the following sentences.
- (Who, Whom) owns that shop?
- (Who, Whom) can we ask the way?
- (Which, What) did they ask you?
- (Which, What) are the objects on the table called?
- To (who, whom) does the boutique belong?
Complete the following sentences with who, whom, or whose.
- ________________ knows the origin of the Luos?
- ________________ did you ask about it?
- To _______________ did you give the letter?
- _________________ is the most attractive painting?
- _________________ is likely to receive the Chaguo la Teeniez award?
- For ______________ did you buy this doll?
- _________________ skill in dancing is the best?
- _________________ is the officer-in-charge here?
- _________________ are you looking at?
10._________________ are those healthy Merino sheep?
REFLEXIVE AND INTENSIVE PRONOUNS
Reflexive and intensive pronouns end in -self or –selves. These are myself, yourself, herself, himself, itself, ourselves, and themselves. There is, however, one difference between reflexive and Intensive pronouns.
A reflexive pronoun refers to an action performed by the subject of the sentence. The meaning of the sentence is incomplete without the reflexive pronoun.
Monicah bought herself a new dress.
(The meaning of the sentence is incomplete without the reflexive pronoun because we do not know for whom Monicah bought the dress).
An Intensive pronoun is used to emphasise a noun or a pronoun. It does not add information to a sentence, and it can be removed without changing the meaning of the sentence.
I myself pulled the boy out of the river.
(If you remove myself, the meaning of the sentence does not change)
Identify the Reflexive and Intensive pronouns in the following sentences, labelling them accordingly.
- I myself have never tried mountain climbing.
- He himself was taking the cows to graze in the forest.
- My sister Annastasia mends her clothes herself.
- She often challenges herself by doing strenuous activities.
- You may ask yourself about the sanity of beer drinking competition.
SPECIAL PRONOUNS PROBLEMS
- Double subjects
We all know that every sentence must have a subject. Sometimes we incorrectly use a double subject – a noun and a pronoun – to name the same person, place, or thing.
Jane she is my cousin. Jane is my cousin.
She is my cousin.
Her scarf it is pretty. Her scarf is pretty.
It is pretty.
Jane and she should not be used as subjects together.
The subject her scarf should not be used together with it.
Use only a noun or a pronoun to name a subject.
- Pronouns and their Antecedents
The antecedent of a pronoun is a noun or another pronoun for which the pronoun stands.
A personal pronoun, you will remember, is used in place or a noun. The noun is the word to which the pronouns refer and it is therefore its antecedent.
The noun usually comes first, either in the same sentence or in the sentence before it.
We met Mureithi. He is the medical doctor.
(He stands for Mureithi. Mureithi is the antecedent).
The students had come to school with their mobile phones.
(Their stands for students. Students is the antecedent).
Pronouns may be the antecedents of other pronouns.
Does everybody have his booklet?
(everybody, which is a singular indefinite pronoun, is the antecedent of his).
All of the students have brought theirs.
(All, which is a plural indefinite pronoun, is the antecedent of theirs).
Now, a pronoun must agree with its antecedent in number. Agree here means that the pronoun must be the same in number as its antecedent. The word number means singular or plural.
If the pronoun is singular, the word that it stands for must be singular, and it must be plural if the word it stands for is plural.
Correct: The scientists tested their new discovery.
(Scientists is plural; their is plural.)
Incorrect: The scientists tested his new discovery.
Correct: Mr. Kiama turned on his TV.
(Mr Kiama is singular; his is singular)
Correct: Nobody left her workstation.
(Nobody is singular, her is singular)
NB: When the antecedent refers to both males and females, it is best to use the phrase his or her.
- Use of we and us with nouns.
Phrases such as we students and us girls are often incorrectly used. To tell which pronoun to use, drop the noun and say the sentence without it.
Problem: (We, Us) boys study hard.
Solution: We study hard. = We boys study hard.
Problem: The DC praised. (us, we) students.
Solution: The DC praised us. = The DC praised us students
- Using the pronoun Them
The word them is always a pronoun. It is always used as the object of a verb or a preposition, never as a subject.
Correct: The president greeted them. (direct object of the verb greeted)
Correct: She gave them a sandwich. (Indirect object of the verb gave)
Correct: The information was useful to them. (object of the preposition to)
Incorrect: Them they arrived late.
- Using Those
Although we previously said that those is used as a demonstrative pronouns, it is sometimes used as an adjective i.e. a word that modifies a noun or a pronoun. If a noun appears immediately after it, those is now an adjective, not a pronoun.
Those are the new desks that were bought. (Those is a pronoun, the subject of the verb are).
Those desks are attractive. (Those is an adjective modifying the noun desks).
Each of the following sentences has a double subject. Write each correctly.
- Papa Shirandula he is a good actor.
- Many people they find him funny.
- The show it was on television for many years.
- Their daughter she is also in that show.
- The shoes they are beautiful.
- People they like our hotel.
- My brother he drives a matatu.
- Our hotel it is open seven days a week.
- The TV it is very clear today.
- My brother and sister they work in Nairobi.
Pick the correct pronoun in the brackets in the following sentences.
- (We, Us) students started a school magazine last month.
- Many careers are unpromising. (Them, Those) are the ones to avoid.
- One of (them, those) motivational speakers was especially interesting.
- A financial analyst told (we, us) students about his work.
- Finding jobs was important to (we, us) graduates.
A verb is a word that:
- expresses an action
- expresses the state that something exists, or
(iii) links the subject with a word that describes or renames it.
Hence, there are two kinds of verbs. These are action verbs and linking verbs.
Action verbs express actions. They show what the subject does or did. Most verbs are action verbs.
Cats drink milk.
The ball flew over the goal post.
The farmer tills the land.
Robert ran to the house.
The action may be one that you can see.
They crowned their new King.
The action may be one that you cannot see.
She wanted recognition.
Whether the action can be seen or not, an action verb says that something is happening, has happened, or will happen.
A linking verb links the subject of a sentence with a word or words that :
- express(es) the subject’s state of being
She is here. (expresses state of being)
She seems ready. (state of being)
- describe(s) or rename(s) the subject.
Anna is a nurse. (a nurse describes Anna)
Joyce is cheerful. (cheerful describes Joyce)
The road is bumpy. (bumpy describes the road)
A linking verb does not tell about an action.
Common linking verbs
Am look grow are feel remain
is taste become was smell sound
were seem will be appear
NB: Some verbs can be either linking verbs or action verbs.
The crowd looked at the mangled car. – ACTION
The driver of the car looked shocked. – LINKING
The chef smelled the food. – ACTION
The food smelled wonderful. – LINKING
Identify the verb in each of the following sentences. Then label each verb Action or Linking.
- Queen Elizabeth of England seems an interesting historical figure.
- We watched the Olympic games on television.
- The crowd cheered loudly.
- She seems calm.
- PLO Lumumba is a quick thinker.
- The hunter aimed the arrow at the antelope.
- The referee blew the whistle to start off the game.
- She was very tired after the journey.
- She is careful when crossing the road.
- The country seems prosperous.
In some sentences, the verb is more than one word. It is in form of a phrase, which is called a verb phrase. A verb phrase consists of a main verb and one or more helping verbs. The main verb shows the action in the sentence.
The helping verb works with the main verb. Helping verbs do not show action.
Mark Francis has passed the examinations.
He will be admitted to a national school.
His parents are happy with him.
Common helping verbs
am will can would is shall could
must are have may was has should
were had might
Some verbs, such as do, have and be can either be used as main verbs or as helping verbs.
As main verbs As helping verbs
I will do the job. I do like the job.
Who has a pen? He has lost his pen.
They are my friends. They are coming today.
Sometimes helping verbs and main verbs are separated by words that are not verbs.
I do not ride a bicycle any more.
Can we ever be friends again?
We should definitely apologise for the mistakes.
Indicate H.V. under the Helping verb and M.V. under the Main verb in the following sentences.
- The school choir is singing a new song.
- The football season has finally begun.
- This car just can travel very fast.
- He had waited for this chance for years.
- My parents will be visiting us soon.
- Our friends have come for a visit.
- You must buy your ticket for the game.
- Sarah has chosen Kenyatta University for her degree course.
- She is hitting her child with a rubber strap.
- I will go for the game next week.
The time of an action or the state of being is expressed by different forms of the verb. These forms are called the tenses of the verb.
There are three main forms of a verb: the present, the past, or the future.
The Present Tense
A verb which is in present tense indicates what the subject of the sentence is doing right now.
The teacher sees the students.
The verb sees tells that the teacher is seeing the students now. To show the present tense, an -s or -es is added to most verbs if the subject is singular.
If the subject is plural, or I or You, the -s, or -es is not added.
The bird hatches in the nest.
The stream flows down the hill.
The boys rush for their breakfast.
We talk a lot.
Rules for forming the Present Tense with Singular Subjects
- Most verbs: add –s
get – gets play – plays eat – eats
- Verbs ending in s, ch, sh, x, and z: add -es
pass – passes mix – mixes punch-punches buzz – buzzes push – pushes
- Verbs ending with a consonant and y: change the y to i and add -es
try – tries empty – empties
Write the correct present form of each verb in the brackets in the following sentences.
- She carefully ________________ the map. (study)
- A fish _______________ in the water near me. (splash)
- She _______________ her hands. (wash)
- He ______________ to the classroom. (hurry)
- Bryan and I ____________ the assignment. (discuss)
The Past Tense
A verb which is in past tense shows what has already happened.
Tito liked his grandmother’s story.
The verb liked tells that the action in the sentence happened before now.
Rules for forming the Past Tense
- Most verbs: Add -ed play – played
talk – talked
climb – climbed
- Verbs ending with e: Add -d praise – praised
hope – hoped
wipe – wiped
- Verbs ending with a consonant and -y: Change the y to i and add –ed bury – buried
carry – carried
study – studied
- Verbs ending with a single vowel and a consonant: Double the final consonant and add-ed stop – stopped
man – manned
trip – tripped
Write the past tense forms of each of the verbs in brackets in the following sentences.
- John _____________ his house burn into ashes. (watch)
- The baby _____________ loudly. (cry)
- The teacher ______________ at the naughty student. (yell)
- The chef ______________ a delicious cake. (bake)
- We ______________ for a present for our grandmother. (shop)
The Future Tense
A verb which is in future tense tells what is going to happen.
Evans will take his car to the garage.
She will probably come with us.
The verbs will take and will come tell us what is going to happen. Hence, they are in future tense.
To form the future tense of a verb, use the helping verb will or shall with the main verb.
Write the future tense forms of the verbs in the following sentences.
- We write in exercise books.
- The train stopped at the station.
- He decides what he wants to do.
- They practise in the football field.
- Rats multiply very fast.
The above three forms of tenses can further be divided into:
- The simple tenses – Present simple tense
– Past simple tense
– Future simple tense
- The perfect tenses – Present perfect tense
– Present perfect progressive – Past perfect tense
– Future perfect
– Future perfect progressive
- The progressive tenses – Present progressive tense
– Past progressive tense
– Progressive tense
– Future perfect progressive tense.
The simple Tenses
The most common tenses of the verb are the simple tenses. You use them most often in your speaking and writing.
- Present simple tense.
Look at the following sentences.
- I know
- He goes to school every day.
- The sun rises from the east.
All the above sentences contain a verb in the present simple tense. This tense is used for different purposes.
- To state a personal fact
Example: I know Kisumu.
(ii) To point out a regular habit.
Example: He goes to school every day.
(iii) To state a known scientific fact
Example: The sun rises from the east.
Complete the following sentences putting the verbs in brackets in the present simple tense.
- They _________ their new principal. (like)
- Every morning, she ______________ her teeth. (brush)
- The earth ______________ on its own axis. (rotate)
- Twice a year, he _______________ his family. (visit)
- Air ____________ when heated. (rise)
- Past Simple Tense
The past simple tense is used when an action has been completed.
We cleaned our classrooms yesterday.
He drove the car this morning.
She planned the whole incident.
Write down the past simple tense of the following words and then use each of them in sentences of your own.
- Future Simple Tense
The future simple tense places the action or condition in the future. It is formed by using the word shall or will before the present form of the main verb.
We shall need help with her load.
She will eat the bananas alone.
The dancers will entertain them.
Use the following words in future simple tense in sentences of your own.
The Perfect Tenses
The perfect tenses are used to show that an action was completed or that a condition existed before a given time. The perfect tenses are formed using has, have, or had before the past participles, that is, verb forms ending in -ed.
- Present Perfect Tense:
Ceasar has just finished his homework.
Kamau and Njoroge have now agreed to meet.
- Present Perfect Continuous Tense
Kibet has been working in his shamba for two hours.
We have been swimming in this pool for ten minutes.
- Past Perfect Tense
We had completed the work by the time the supervisor came.
Nobody knew that she had already remarried.
- Past Perfect Continuous Tense
I had been trying to contact him for two hours before he finally appeared.
Mrs. Masumbuko had been feeling unwell the whole week before she decided to visit a doctor.
- Future Perfect Tense
Agege will have sold his goats by two p.m.
By next term, twenty students will have dropped from this school.
- Future Perfect Continuous
The players will have been playing for twenty minutes by the time the President arrives.
By the end of this term, she will have been living with her aunt for five years.
Rewrite the following sentence changing the verb into present perfect, present perfect progressive, past perfect, past perfect progressive, future perfect and future perfect progressive tenses. Make any necessary changes to make the sentences meaningful.
John comes here every year.
The Progressive Verb Forms
The progressive form of the verb shows continuing action.
I am singing
She was dancing.
The progressive form is formed using various forms of the verb be plus the present participle, that is, a verb form that ends in –ing.
- Present Progressive Tense
I am reading a book about Red Indians.
Her mother is preparing dinner.
- Present Perfect Progressive
He has been cleaning his car since morning.
They have been exercising for a week now.
- Past Progressive Tense
She was cooking supper when I arrived.
They were fighting fiercely when the police arrived.
- Past Perfect Progressive Tense
Sonko had been wearing an earing for years before he removed it.
Onyancha had been killing children before he was finally discovered.
- Future Progressive
He will be tilling the land next week.
Joyce and Joan will be washing clothes all morning.
- Future Perfect Progressive
The children will have been sleeping for two hours by the time their parents arrive.
John will have grown a beard by the time he is twelve.
Rewrite the following sentence changing the verb into present progressive, present perfect progressive, past progressive, past perfect progressive, future progressive and future perfect progressive tenses. Make any necessary changes to make the sentences meaningful.
Jane plays the guitar well.
SUBJECT – VERB AGREEMENT
A verb and its subject must agree in number. To agree means that if the subject is singular, the verb must be in singular form. If the subject is plural, the verb form must be plural.
The baby cries every morning. – SINGULAR
The babies cry every morning. – PLURAL
Rules for subject-verb Agreement
- Singular subject: Add -s or -es to the verb
The man drives a bus.
She teaches in a primary school.
He studies his map.
- Plural subject: Do not add -s or -es to the verb
The men drive buses.
They teach in primary schools.
We study our maps.
- For I or You: Do not add -s or -es to the verb
I hate books.
You like dogs.
I admire actors.
When a sentence has a compound subject, that is, two subjects joined by and, the plural form of the verb is used.
John and James work at Naivas Supermarket.
The teachers and the students respect one another a lot.
Subject-verb Agreement with be and have
The verbs be and have change their forms in special ways in order to agree with their subjects.
Various ways in which be and have change in order to agree with their subjects
He, she, it
Put appropriate Present tense verbs in the blank spaces in the following sentences. Ensure that the subject agrees with the verb and that the sentence makes sense.
- The dogs _______________ their owners.
- She ______________ at the door.
- They ______________ the road at the Zebra-crossing.
- Many blind people ___________________ dogs as guides.
- We ________________ dogs every day.
- Mark always _______________ his house.
- I often _______________ with June.
- Mwangi __________________ his aunt in Mombasa.
- Jane and he ________________ next month.
- The directors ______________ the company.
REGULAR AND IRREGULAR VERBS
We have learned in the previous chapter how to form the past tense and how to use helping verbs to show that something has already happened. We saw that for most verbs, we form the past tense and participles by adding -d or -ed to the verb. Verbs that follow this rule are called Regular Verbs.
The farmer planted his crops last month. – past tense
The crops have been planted recently. – past participle.
For all regular verbs, the past and the past participles are spelled alike. They are made up by adding -d or -ed to the present form of the verb.
The spelling of many regular verbs changes when –d or -ed is added, that is, the last consonant is doubled before adding -d or -ed. For those ending -y, it is dropped and replaced with –i:
Write the present, past and past participles of the following verbs. Remember to change the spelling appropriately where necessary.
- prevent 6. aid
- donate 7. relieve
- hurry 8. share
- worry 9. enrol
- train 10. save
Some verbs do not form the past by adding -d or –ed. These verbs are called irregular verbs. There are only about sixty frequently used irregular verbs. For many of these, the past and the past participles are spelled the same but some are different.
He saw great misery all around him. – past
He has seen great misery all round him. – past participle
Common irregular Verbs
|Verb||Past tense||Past participles|
|( had) begun
For a few irregular verbs, like hit and cut, the three principal parts are spelled the same. These ones offer no problems to learners. Most problems come from irregular verbs with three different forms. For example, the irregular verbs throw and ring.
throw threw had thrown
ring rang had rung
If you are not sure about a verb form, look it up in the dictionary.
Write the past tense and past participles of the following irregular verbs and then use each of them in sentences of your own.
- arise fall
- tear blow
- wear freeze
- lay fly
- see write
ACTIVE AND PASSIVE VERB FORMS
A verb is in active voice when the subject of the sentence performs the action.
Our teacher punished us for making noise in class.
Players arrived for their first match early in the morning.
In the above sentences, the subject is who performed the action. Hence, the verbs of these sentences are in active voice.
The word passive means “acted upon”. When the subject of the sentence receives the action or expresses the result of the action, the verb is in passive voice.
We were punished by the teacher for making noise.
He was helped by a passer-by.
In the above sentences the subjects we and he receive the action.
When we do not know who or what did the action, or when we do not want to say who or what did it, we use the passive voice.
The passive form of a verb consists of some form of be plus the past participle.
Baabu explored the sea. The sea was explored by Baabu.
Be + past participle
The captain helped him. He was helped by the captain.
Write the verbs from the following sentences and then label each one Active or Passive.
- The guest of honour presented prizes to the best students.
- The cattle were taken home by the herders.
- The health officer ordered the slaughter house closed.
- Peace and order has been restored in the area by the youth wingers.
- The workers cleared the farm.
- The crop was harvested by the hired workers.
- The government stressed the importance of unity among tribes.
- The farmers were urged to redouble their efforts in food production.
- The K.I.E is developing support materials for the 8-4-4 system of education.
- A fishing pond was started by the Wildlife Club in the school.
TRANSITIVE AND INTRANSITIVE VERBS
Some sentences express a complete thought with only a subject and an action verb.
The sun shines.
Subject Action verb
In other sentences, a direct object must follow the action verb for the sentence to be complete. A direct object is a noun or a pronoun that receives the action of the verb.
The goalkeeper caught the ball.
Subject action verb direct object
A Transitive verb is an action verb that must take a direct object for the sentence to express a complete thought. A direct object answers the question what? or whom?
The captain steered the ship. (Steered what? the ship)
The teacher praised the students. (Praised whom? The students)
Transitive verbs cannot be used alone without direct objects in sentences; they would not have complete meanings.
What are the action verbs and the direct objects in the following sentences?
- He carried his bag with him.
- The two friends discussed the examination paper.
- We took a trip to Nakuru last month.
- The water splashed me.
- He gave interesting facts about whales.
- We searched the house for rats.
- They cheered the team noisily.
- My brother bought a camera.
- Njoroge admires Papa Shirandula.
- We viewed the shouting star at midnight.
An Intransitive verb is an action verb that does not require a direct object for the sentence to have complete meaning.
The ship sailed.
Subject action verb
The child smiled.
Subject action verb
They do not answer the questions what? or whom? Sometimes they answer the questions how? or how often?
The ship sailed smoothly. (How did it sail? Smoothly)
The child smiled repeatedly. (How often did the child smile? Repeatedly)
Both transitive and intransitive verbs
Some verbs can be used both transitively and intransitively.
We cheered our team noisily. (Transitive)
We cheered noisily. (Intransitive)
He broke the window pane. (Transitive)
The glass broke. (Intransitive)
NB: Only transitive verbs can be changed from active to passive voice.
He kicked the ball. The ball was kicked by him.
She bought a new dress A new dress was bought by her.
She wailed loudly ??
They danced well ??
Indicate at the end of each of the following sentences whether the underlined verb is Transitive or Intransitive.
- Some whales sing songs.
- We gave our books to the gatekeeper.
- She cried bitterly.
- He made a sketch of the giraffe.
- John danced to the music.
- The bird flew in the air.
- They located the lost ship.
- She pleaded with him mercifully.
- The children heard the sound from the cave.
- It rained heavily.
TROUBLESOME PAIRS OF VERBS
Some pairs of verbs confuse learners of English because their meanings are related but not the same. Others confuse them because they sound similar, but their meanings are different. Others are similar in appearance but different in meanings.
|The pairs||Meaning||Present tense||Past tense||Past participle||Examples of its usage|
|To be in a seated position
To put or place
|Sit on that chair.
Set the cage down.
|To rest in a flat position
To put or place
|The cat lies on the table.
Lay the cloth on the table.
|To move upward
To move something upward or to lift
|The children rise up early in the morning.
The scout raised the flag.
|To allow or permit
To depart or to allow to remain where it is
|Let the bird go free.
Leave this house now!
Leave the door closed.
|To gain knowledge or skill
To help someone learn or to show how or explain
|I learned a lot in school.
That teacher taught me in Biology.
|To be able
To be allowed
|I can ride my bike well.
You may go out.
Pick the correct verb from the ones given in brackets in the following sentences.
- Studying spiders closely can (learn, teach) us how they get their food.
- An insect that (lays, lies) motionless on a leaf can become prey to some other animal.
- The lion will (lay, lie) there waiting for its prey.
- The monster spider (sits, sets) patiently near its web.
- Experience has (taught, learned) me not to take things for granted.
- A bird (raises, rises) its body using its wings.
- This (raises, rises) another question,
- Nature has (learned, taught) spiders new tricks.
- The watchman instantly (raises, rises) the alarm when there is danger.
- The trappers have (lain, laid) fresh traps for the porcupines.
An adjective is a word that describes or modifies a noun or a pronoun. To describe or modify means to provide additional information about nouns or pronouns. To modify further means to change something slightly.
Writers and speakers modify an idea or image by choosing certain describing words, which are called adjectives. Hence, these adjectives are also called modifiers. Adjectives are like word cameras. They are words that describe colours, sizes and shapes. Adjectives help you capture how the world around you looks and feels.
- What kind?
The powerful gorilla knocked down the hunter.
The old man walked slowly.
- How many?
Three zebras were resting.
He has few friends.
- Which one(s)?
This painting is attractive.
These farmers are clearing the field.
There are 5 main kinds of adjectives, namely:-
- Descriptive adjectives
- Definite and indefinite adjectives
- Demonstrative adjectives
- Interrogative adjectives
- Articles and possessive adjectives
Descriptive adjectives tell us the size, shape, age, colour, weight, height, make, nature and origin of the nouns they are describing.
Examples of descriptive Adjectives:
Descriptive adjectives are of two types:
- Common descriptive adjectives – these are adjectives that give general features of somebody or something. They are the adjectives of size, shape, age, colour, weight, height, make and nature. Refer to the examples in the diagram above.
- Proper adjectives – These ones are formed from proper nouns. They are always capitalized. They always appear last in a string of adjectives modifying the same noun, just before the noun itself.
The Japanese ambassador
A Mexican carpet
An Italian chef
Note that when a proper adjective comprises of two words, both are capitalized.
A South African farmer
A North American cowboy
Find the adjectives in the following sentences and indicate what types they are.
- Alaska is the largest state in the USA.
- The Alaskan Senator is Lord John Mc Dougal.
- Kenya is the tallest mountain in Kenya.
- Alaska has a tiny population of one and a half million people.
- Northern Province has small, scattered towns.
- A trip to Northern Kenya will take you across vast wilderness.
- American tourists are fond of wild animals.
- There is a huge lake in the Rift Valley Province.
- I sent a letter to my Australian pen pal.
- I have a beautiful Egyptian robe.
A demonstrative adjective tells which one or which ones. They are used before nouns and other adjectives.
There are 4 demonstrative adjectives in English: This, that, these and those. This and these are used to refer to nouns close to the speaker or writer. That and those refer to nouns farther away. This and that are used before singular nouns while these and those are used before plural nouns.
This picture is very beautiful.
That one is not as beautiful.
These drawings are very old.
Those ones were painted in Uganda.
Choose the word in brackets that correctly completes each of the following sentences.
- My bus left the station before (that, those) matatus.
- (Those, These) chairs behind me were occupied.
- My seat has a better view than (this, that) one over there.
- (Those, That) man should fasten his seat belt.
- (This, That) car is old, but that one is new.
- (These, Those) clouds are far away.
- (This, That) window next to me has a broken pane.
- (That, This) chair near me is broken.
- My car is moving faster than (these, those) buses over there.
- (These, Those) goats grazing over there are my uncle’s.
Definite and indefinite adjectives
These are adjectives which tell how many or how much. They give the number or the quantity, either specific or approximate, of the noun in question.
Three elephants were killed by the game rangers.
He bought several houses in Kileleshwa.
Don’t put much sugar in the tea!
Adjectives that are in form of numbers are used with countable nouns:
Two calves were born yesterday.
Five chimpanzees performed funny tricks.
Many children like dinosaurs.
A definite or indefinite adjective may look like a pronoun, but it is used differently in a sentence. It is an adjective used to modify a noun.
Adjectives that are in form of quantity are used with uncountable nouns.
Do you have any water in the house?
How much flour did you buy?
The interrogative adjectives are used with nouns to ask questions. Examples are what, which, and whose.
What movie do you want to see?
Which leaves turn colour first?
Whose son is he?
An interrogative adjective may look like an interrogative pronoun but it is used differently. It is an adjective, used to modify a noun.
Underline the adjectives in the following sentences.
- Twenty bulls were slaughtered for the wedding.
- Few people know the name of our president.
- They stole all the money in the safe.
- There isn’t much sugar in the dish.
- Numerous disasters have hit China this year.
- What game is playing on TV tonight?
- Whose car is that one over there?
- Which house was broken into?
- I don’t know what misfortune has faced him.
- Nobody knows which table was taken.
Articles and Possessive Pronouns
Two special kinds of adjectives are the articles and the possessive pronouns.
Articles are the words a, an and the. A and an are special adjectives called indefinite articles. They are used when the nouns they modify do not refer to any particular thing.
A student rang the bells. (No specific student)
An orange is good for your health. (No specific orange)
A is used before a noun that begins with a consonant sound. An is used before a noun that begins with a vowel sound. Note that it is the first sound of a noun, not the spelling, that determines whether to use a or an.
An hour an heir
The is a special adjective known as the definite article. It is used to refer to particular things.
The tourist was robbed. (A particular tourist).
The team began practising at 8 o’clock. (A particular team).
All articles are adjectives. The is used with both singular and plural nouns, but a and an are used with singular nouns
The tourist, the tourists, a tourist
The adjective, the adjectives, an adjective
Choose the correct article from the choices given in brackets in the following sentences.
- (A, An) mountain climber climbed Mt. Elgon.
- He went up a cliff and was stranded on (a, an) jagged rock.
- No one knew (a, the) route he had taken.
- (The, An) climber’s friend called the local police.
- The police began the search within (a, an) hour.
- A police dog followed (a, the) climber’s scent.
- A helicopter began (a, an) air search of the mountain.
- The dog followed the climber’s scent to (a, the) jagged edge of the cliff.
- A climber from (a, the) police team went down the jagged rock.
- (A, An) rope was tied to the climber and he was pulled to safety.
The words my, her, its, our and their are possessive pronouns, but they can also be used as adjectives. These modifiers tell which one, which ones or whose?
My brother likes Sean Paul, but his sister does not.
Of his songs, Ever Blazing is his favourite.
Our school produces heroes, its fame is widespread.
Write the adjectives from the following sentences and the nouns they modify.
- In her lifetime, Brenda Fasie composed many songs.
- Her early songs entertained her fans all over the world.
- Our first performance was successful.
- Her coughing grew worse with time.
- They agreed that it was their best goal in ten years.
Position of adjectives in sentences
- Most adjectives appear immediately before the nouns they are modifying e.g.
Descriptive: The beautiful house belongs to my uncle.
Demonstrative: That house belongs to my uncle.
Numerals: Two houses were burned down.
Articles: The house on fire belongs to her sister.
Possessive pronouns: Their house was burned down.
- Predicate Adjectives
Some adjectives appear after the nouns that they are modifying. These adjectives are always used after linking verbs that separate them from the words they modify. An adjective that follows a linking verb and that modifies the subject is called a predicate adjective.
Joyce seemed lonely.
Her brother was upset.
He became concerned.
Identify the predicate adjectives in the following sentences.
- Her early songs were often quiet and serious.
- One of her songs, Vulindlela, is very popular.
- The dark city below the sky seems calm and peaceful.
- Her performance in K.C.S.E. was brilliant.
- The West African singer Kofi Olominde is extraordinary.
COMPARING WITH ADJECTIVES
We have seen that adjectives describe nouns. One way in which they describe nouns is by comparing people, places or things.
To compare two people, places or things, we use the comparative form of an adjective. To compare more than two, we use the superlative form of the adjective.
ONE PERSON: Kimenju is tall.
TWO PERSONS: Kimenju is taller than James.
THREE OR MORE: Kimenju is the tallest of all.
The comparative form of the adjective is used to compare one thing, person or place with another one. It is formed in two ways.
- For short adjectives, add –er.
great + er = greater sweet + er = sweeter
big + er = bigger light + er = lighter.
- For longer adjectives, the comparative is formed by using the word more before them.
More handsome more remarkable
More attractive more hardworking
Most adjectives ending in -ful and -ous also form the comparative using more.
More successful more curious more ferocious
More beautiful more generous more prosperous
The superlative form of the adjective is used to compare a person, a place or a thing with more than one other of its kind.
Elephants are the largest animals in the jungle.
However, they are the most emotional animals.
The superlative form of an adjective is formed in two ways.
- By adding -est to the short adjective
great + est = greatest sweet + est = sweetest
big + est = biggest light + est = light
- For longer adjectives, use most before them.
most mysterious most awkward
most successful most attractive
The ending -er in the comparative becomes -est in the superlative while more becomes most.
Adjective comparative superlative
strong stronger strongest
quick quicker quickest
adventurous more adventurous most adventurous
co-operative more co-operative most co-operative
Summary of rules comparing with adjectives:
|1.||For most short adjectives:
Add -er or -est to the adjective
|bright dark smart
brighter darker smarter
brightest darkest smartest
|2.||For adjectives ending with e:
Drop the e and add -er or -est
|safe nice wide
safer nicer wider
safest nicest widest
|3.||For adjectives ending with a consonant and y:
Change the y to i and add -er or -est
|Busy crazy happy
Busier crazier happier
Busiest craziest happiest
|4.||For single-syllable adjectives ending with a single vowel and a consonant:
Double the last consonant and add -er or -est
|Flat slim fat
Flatter slimmer fatter
Flattest slimmest fattest
|5.||For most adjectives with two or more syllables: Use more or most||careful generous
more careful more generous
most careful most generous
Points to note about Adjectives:
- A comparative is used to compare two persons, or things or two groups of persons or things.
A rat is smaller than a mouse.
Buffaloes are larger than domestic cows
- A superlative is used to compare a thing or a person to more than one other of its kind.
Lions are the bravest of all animals.
Elephants are the largest of all herbivores.
- You must use the word other when comparing something with everything else of its kind.
Leopards are more ferocious than any other cat.
- Do not use both -er and more, or -est and most.
Incorrect: Men die more earlier than women.
Correct: Men die earlier than women.
Incorrect: My father is the most oldest of the three brothers.
Correct: My father is the oldest of the three brothers.
Write the adjectives in brackets in the following sentences correctly.
- My next sculpture will be even ___________________ (beautiful).
- That was the ________________ cartoon I have ever watched (funny).
- English is my ____________ subject of all (enjoyable).
- Job is the ______________ person in his family. (energetic)
- She is the ______________ of the three nurses. (helpful)
- That story sounds ____________ than fiction. (strange)
- He is _______________ than a cat. (curious)
- Her school grades are ______________ than mine. (high)
- You are _______________ than Maria. (creative)
- My next test will be _______________ than this one. (simple)
Some adjectives have special forms for making comparisons. That is, they do not form their comparatives by use of -er or more, or their superlatives by use of -est or most. Instead, these adjectives change the words completely to form comparatives and superlatives.
Adjectives Comparative Superlative
good better best
well better best
bad worse worst
ill worse worst
little less or lesser least
much more most
many more most
far farther farthest
Example of use in sentences:
The presentation of our play was good.
Our second performance was better.
But our last performance was the best.
Write the correct forms of the adjectives in brackets in the following sentences.
- The comedy was the ________________ show of the three. (good)
- Mary had a _________________ cold yesterday. (bad)
- It was her ____________ performance this year. (good)
- Her illness is getting _____________ every day. (bad)
- The old woman received the _____________ amount of money from the MP. (little)
- Smoke your cigarette _______________ away from the children. (far)
- There was ______________ noise in the classroom than yesterday. (little)
- The musician said that that was a very ______________ year for him. (good)
- This year’s songs were much ______________ than last year’s. (good)
- He has the _____________ pairs of shoes in the school. (many)
SPECIAL PROBLEMS WITH ADJECTIVES
- Those and Them
Those is an adjective if it is followed by a noun. It is a pronoun if it is used alone.
Those thieves are daring! (Adjective modifying thieves)
Those are thieves! (Pronoun)
Them is always a pronoun. It is used only as the object of a verb or as the object of a preposition. It is never used as an adjective.
We followed them. (Object of a verb)
They caught one of them. (Object of a preposition)
We heard them thieves breaking the door. (Incorrect)
- The extra Here and There with demonstrative adjectives
It is incorrect to use the demonstrative adjectives this, that, those, and these with here and there before the nouns they modify.
“This here job”
“That there house”
“These here books”
“Those there carpets”
The adjectives this and these include the meaning of here whereas the adjectives that and those include the meaning of there. Saying this here is like repeating oneself.
- Kind and sort with demonstrative adjectives
Kind and sort are singular and hence should be used with singular demonstrative adjectives this and that.
I like this kind of story.
She likes that sort of food.
Kinds and sorts are plural and should be used with plural demonstrative adjectives these and those.
Those sorts of horror movies scare me.
These kinds of sports are for strong people.
Choose the correct adjectives from the ones given in brackets in the following sentences.
- A robot is one of (those, them) machines that looks and acts human.
- (These, This) sorts of machines are very strange.
- (This, This here) church was built in 1921.
- (Them, Those) mushrooms are very delicious.
- (Them, Those) soldiers won the battle.
- People call (these, this) kinds of songs Soul.
- John needed a name for (them, those) songs.
- (This, this here) play is called Aminata.
- Human beings have a fascination with (those, that) kind of machine.
- (These, This) sort of a car is meant for ministers.
An adverb is a word that describes a verb, an adjective, or another adverb. Adverbs tell how, when, where, or to what extent an action happens.
HOW: The man walked quickly.
WHEN: It will rain soon.
WHERE: We shall meet here at 2 p.m.
TO WHAT EXTENT: He is extremely rude.
HOW WHEN WHERE TO WHAT EXTENT
happily sometimes underground fully
secretly later here extremely
together tomorrow there quite
carefully now inside very
sorrowfully finally far rarely
painfully again upstairs
fast often downstairs
hard once somewhere
slowly first forward
hurriedly next behind
quietly then above
Adverbs used to describe verbs
Adverbs that describe verbs tell how, when, where and to what extent an action happened.
HOW: John waited patiently for his turn.
WHEN: He is now walking into the office.
WHERE: He will eat his lunch there.
TO WHAT EXTENT: He is very pleased with himself.
Adverbs make the meaning of the verb clearer.
He will eat his lunch. (Without adverb)
He will eat his lunch there. (The adverb makes it clear where the action of eating will take place.)
Write the adverbs in the following sentences and then indicate whether the adverb tells how, when, where, or to what extent.
- The tourist travelled far.
- They cheerfully greeted their grandmother.
- Tina hurried downstairs when she heard the knock.
- He worked carefully and skilfully.
- She was extremely agitated.
- The scientist looked curiously at the creature.
- Soon the bell was rung.
- The hall was fully occupied.
- They hugged their grandmother adorably.
- He brought the cake down.
Adverbs used to describe adjectives
Adverbs that tell to what extent can be used to describe adjectives.
The cave was very dark.
The tea was extremely hot.
Other adverbs used with adjectives
Just nearly somewhat most
These adverbs make the adjectives they are describing more understandable and precise.
The tomb was dark. (Without adverb)
The tomb was fully dark. (The adverb fully describes the extent of the darkness).
Identify the adverb in each of the following sentences and then indicate the adjective it describes.
- He is a highly successful businessman.
- The extremely cold weather made me shiver.
- They are quite difficult to deal with.
- The house is barely visible from here.
- He is a very old man by now.
- She is mysteriously secretive about her activities.
- Jackline is horribly mean with her money.
- The book was totally exciting.
- The secretary was completely mad when the money was stolen.
- The boss is never punctual for meetings.
Adverbs used to describe other adverbs
Some adverbs that tell to what extent are used to describe other adverbs.
The student spoke very softly.
The cold subsided very gradually.
These adverbs make the adverbs they are describing more understandable and clear.
She spoke rudely. (Without adjective modifier)
She spoke extremely rudely. (extremely describes the extent of her rudeness).
Identify the adverbs modifying other adverbs in the following sentences.
- The mourners covered the casket with earth very gradually.
- He appeared on her surprisingly quickly.
- The sun appeared somewhat closer that day.
- He drinks extremely irresponsibly.
- The driver sped the car totally carelessly.
Specific categories of Adverbs
- Adverbs of time – These answer the question when?
He joined the class yesterday.
Today, I will go to the cinema.
- Adverbs of place– These answer the question where?
Mrs. Kilome has gone out.
The bus stop is near the post office.
- Adverbs of frequency: These answer the question how often?
She often leaves without permission.
He always works hard.
- Adverbs of manner: These answer the question how?
Many ran fast to catch the bus
He painted the house badly.
- Adverbs of degree. These answer the question how much?
Luka is extremely intelligent.
She is very ill.
FORMATION OF ADVERBS
Many adverbs are formed by adding -ly to an adjective.
Slow + -ly = slowly quiet + -ly = quietly
Sometimes the addition of -ly to an adjective may require changing the spelling in the adjective.
Easy + -ly = easily (y changes to i)
Full + -ly = fully (ll changes to l)
Other adverbs are complete words on their own. That is, they are not formed from other words.
fast tomorrow soon first later
next inside somewhere quite
- Soon and quite can be used only as adverbs.
The school will soon open.
The holiday was quite well spent.
- Some other modifiers, like late or first, can either be used as adverbs or adjectives.
The visitors arrived late. (adverb)
The late arrivals delayed the meeting. (adjective)
The robbers had gotten there first. (adverb)
The first house was already broken into. (adjective)
- When you are not sure whether an adjective or an adverb has been used in a sentence, ask yourself these questions.
(i) Which word does the modifier go with?
If it goes with an action verb, an adjective or another adverb, it is an adverb.
The story teller spoke quietly. – used with an action verb.
The story teller was very interesting. – used with an adjective.
The story teller spoke extremely slowly. –used with another adverb.
But if it goes with a noun or a pronoun, it is an adjective.
The quiet story teller spoke. – used with a noun.
He was quiet. – with a pronoun.
(ii) What does the modifier tell about the word it goes with?
If the modifier tells when, where, how, or to what extent, it is an adverb.
He will come tomorrow. – When?
He will come here. – Where?
He will come secretly. – How?
He will be very cautious. – To what extent?
But if it tells which one, what kind, or how many, it is an adjective.
He will steal this cow. – Which one?
He will carry a sharp spear. – What kind?
He will be jailed for ten years. – How many?
(iii) Adverbs and predicate adjectives
You will recall that we said that an adjective appears after a linking verb and modifies the subject.
He became successful. (successful modifies he)
You seem tired. (tired modifies you)
You appear sick. (sick modifies she)
You look great! (great modifies you)
They sound bored. (bored modifies they)
It feels wet. (wet modifies it)
The oranges taste sweet. (sweet modifies oranges)
The baby grows big. (big modifies baby)
She smells nice. (nice modifies she).
Sometimes the verbs in the sentences above are used as action verbs. In this case, they are followed by adverbs, not adjectives. They modify the verbs and tell how, when, where, or to what extent.
The singer looked up.
We tasted the chocolate eagerly.
The principal appeared suddenly.
(iv) Good and well
Good and well have similar meanings, but differ in their use in a sentence.
Incorrect: He narrates the story good.
Correct: He narrates the story well.
Good is always an adjective and modifies nouns or pronouns. It is never used to modify a verb.
He is a good narrator. (Adjective modifying the noun narrator)
Well can be used as either an adjective or an adverb.
I feel well. (As an adjective)
He drives well. (As an adverb)
Choose the correct form of the words in brackets in the following sentences.
- Luos tell you (quick, quickly) that they are not Bantus.
- Over the months, the snow (gradual, gradually) melted.
- Rice tastes especially (good, well) with avocado.
- The popularity of video games has grown (rapid, rapidly).
- The name of the town may sound (strange, strangely) to some people.
- These puppies look a little (odd, oddly).
- The idea of breaking the door does not sound (reasonable, reasonably).
- Visitors eat Nyama Choma very (rapid, rapidly).
- If Nyama Choma has been prepared (good, well), it tastes even better than chicken.
- Since fish is high in protein and low in fat, it is bound to keep you (good, well).
COMPARING WITH ADVERBS
We have seen that we can use adjectives to compare people, things or places.
Adverbs can also be used to compare actions. And like adjectives, we use the comparative form of an adverb to compare two actions and the superlative form of an adverb to compare more than two actions.
ONE ACTION: Maree swims fast.
TWO ACTIONS: Maree swims faster than Ciku.
THREE OR MORE: Maree swims fastest of all.
Just like adjectives, adverbs have special forms or spelling for making comparisons.
THE COMPARATIVE FORM
The comparative form of the adverb is used to compare one action with another. It is formed in two ways:
- For short adverbs, add –er.
The bird flew higher than the helicopter.
The president arrived sooner than we expected.
- For most adverbs ending in -ly, use more to make the comparative.
She visited him more frequently than Martin.
The tractor towed the lorry more powerfully than the bull-cart.
THE SUPERLATIVE FORM
The superlative form is used to compare one action with two or more others of the same kind.
Of the three athletes, Kipruto runs the fastest.
The lion roars the loudest of all the big cats.
Adverbs that form the comparative with –er form their superlative with -est. Those that use more to form comparative use most to form superlative.
Adverbs Comparative Superlative
long longer longest
fast faster fastest
softly more softly most softly
politely more polite most polite
Points to Remember
- Use the comparative to compare two actions and the superlative to compare more than two.
Comparative: He sat nearer to the window than him
Superlative: He sat nearest to the window than all the others.
- Do not leave out the word other when comparing one action with every other action of the same kind.
Incorrect: The lion roared louder than any lion.
Correct: The lion roared the loudest of all.
- Do not use both -er and more or -est and most.
Incorrect: The dancer moved more faster than before.
Correct: The dancer moved faster than before.
Summary of rules for comparing with Adverbs
|1 1.||For most adverbs
Add -er or -est to the adverb
|hard late deep
harder later deeper
hardest latest deepest
|2||For most adverbs comprising of two or more syllables: Use more or most with the adverb||Skilfully firmly rudely
more skilfully more firmly most rudely
most skilfully most firmly most rudely
Write each of the following sentences using the correct form of the adverb.
- Does she cry ______________ (often) than the baby does?
- She crosses the river _____________ (slowly) than her son does.
- James jumps into the swimming pool _____________ (quickly).
- Charles swims _____________ (skilfully) than all of us.
- Of all the athletes, Tecla Lorupe is ____________ (fast).
- The antelope disappeared _____________ (swiftly) than the gazelle.
- Chicharito scored the goal _____________ (accurately) of all.
- Mange and Marto stayed in the hall ______________ (long) of all.
- Sarah walks _____________ (gracefully).
- Ng’ang’arito sang ____________ (sweetly) of all participants.
A preposition is a word that shows the relationship between other words in a sentence.
The cat lay under the table.
The preposition under connects the verb lay with table. Under points out the relationship between lay and table.
Hence a preposition is a word that links another word or word group to the rest of the sentence. The noun or pronoun after the preposition is called the object of the preposition. The table is the object of the preposition under in the above sentence. The preposition under relates the verb lay to the noun table.
She gave it to me.
(The preposition to relates the pronoun me with the action gave).
I liked the bike with the metal handles.
The preposition with relates the noun handles with the noun bike.
about before except on toward
above behind for onto under
aboard below from out underneath
across beneath in outside until
after beside inside over up
against between into past upon
along beyond like since with
among by near through within
around down of throughout without
at during off to
From the above list of prepositions, you will note that some of them tell where, others indicate time, others show special relationships like reference or separation.
Changing one preposition with another in a sentence changes the meaning of the sentence.
The cat lay under the table.
The cat lay on the table.
Lying under the table means below the surface of the table but on means above the surface.
Write the preposition in each of the following sentences and say what relationship it indicates.
- Sometimes they lie on the ground.
- They have grown maize for food.
- The children played with the dolls.
- A man found some treasure in the cave.
- They make clothes from cotton.
Use the most appropriate preposition to complete the sentences below.
- Driving had been my dream ________________ years.
2._____________ 1990, I bought a second-hand car.
3.______________ that year, I learned how to drive.
- I rolled the car ________________ the road _____________ more than two kilometres.
- I was really thrilled ______________ the experience.
A prepositional phrase consists of a preposition, its object and any words that modify the object.
The school children waited for the green light.
In this sentence, the preposition is for, its object is light, and the modifier, or adjective, is green. The entire preposition phrase modifies the verb waited.
Sometimes two or more nouns or pronouns are used as objects in a prepositional phrase.
He needs a worker with diligence and a good character.
The preposition with has two objects: diligence and character.
Identify the prepositional phrase in each of the following sentences. Underline the preposition once and its objects twice.
- Donkeys help people in many ways.
- They bring happiness to the people around them.
- In large cities, they help to carry water.
- On farms, they carry heavy loads.
- How could you travel across a river?
- You might swim to the other side.
- You might cross at a shallow place.
- You can cross by boat.
- Bridges are a better solution to the problem.
- Most bridges are built over water.
Types of prepositional phrases
Prepositional phrases can either be:
(i) Adjective prepositional phrases – these prepositional phrases, just like adjectives, modify nouns and pronouns.
A scout leader wears a uniform with many badges.
In this sentence, with many badges is an adjective prepositional phrase modifying the noun uniform.
(ii) Adverb prepositional phrases – these ones, just like adverbs, modify verbs, adjectives or other adverbs.
Scouts rain for many hours.
(The adverb prepositional phrase for many hours modifies the verb train.)
They are active in all public functions.
(The adverb prepositional phrase in all public functions modifies the adjective active.)
The scout leader commands forcefully with a loud voice.
(The adverb prepositional phrase with a loud voice modifies the adverb forcefully.)
We have seen that the object of a preposition is the noun or pronoun that follows the preposition. When the object of the preposition is a pronoun, we use an object pronoun like me, you, him, her, it, us, and them. (And not a subject pronoun like I, he, she, we, and they).
Correct: I gave a present to her.
Incorrect: I gave a present to she.
Correct: I gave a present to Jane and her.
Incorrect: I gave a present to Jane and she.
Choose the pronoun in brackets that correctly completes each of the following sentences.
- The dog chased after Travis and (her, she).
- Cleaning the house was a tasking job for Evans and (I, me).
- We planned a family picture of our parents and (us, we).
- The victory belonged to (he, him).
- Michael and Bernard stood behind Mom and (she, her).
- The crowd around (we, us) started cheering.
- My little sister ran behind Sammy and (I, me).
- The toys belong to Karen and (him, he).
- Johnny sat between James and (me, I).
- I went to the cat race with Jim and (she, her).
Sometimes one prepositional phrase immediately follows another.
The thief entered the house through the door on the right.
(through the door modifies the verb entered and tells where. on the left modifies the noun door and tells which one.)
A prepositional phrase can be at the beginning, in the middle, or at the end of a sentence.
BEGINNING: At dusk we closed the shop.
MIDDLE: The chief of the area was helpful.
END: The path went through the village.
Preposition or Adverb?
Sometimes the same word can be used as either a preposition or an adverb. How can you tell the difference between the two?
PREPOSITION: He has a box inside the house.
ADVERB: They ran inside.
You can tell the difference by remembering the following:
(i) A preposition never stands alone. It is always followed by its object, a noun or a pronoun.
The helicopter flew past the airport. (Preposition)
The aircraft was parked inside the hangar. (Preposition)
(ii) An adverb is never followed by a noun or a pronoun, may be by an adverb.
The helicopter flew past. (Adverb)
The aircraft was parked inside. (Adverb)
The helicopter flew past noisily. (Adverb)
Therefore, if a word begins a prepositional phrase, it is a preposition. If it stands alone or is followed by an adverb, it is an adverb.
Some words that can be used either as prepositions or adverbs.
above down over
along in out
around Inside outside
below near under
by off up
Indicate after each of the following sentences if it has a preposition or an adverb.
- Jack stood outside the shop.
- He was curious and went inside.
- He saw strange things in every corner.
- An old coat and several sweaters lay over a chair.
- Blue and green umbrellas stood above the fire place.
- He looked up suddenly.
- He sat down heavily.
- Then he lifted the curtain and peeped outside.
- A jogger ran by
- Jack ran out.
Negatives are words that mean “no” or “not”. These words are adverbs and not prepositions!
She has no more work.
There are none left.
Other common negatives
not nowhere nobody aren’t haven’t
never nothing no one doesn’t wouldn’t
The combination of a verb and not also form a contraction which is also a negative. The letters n’t stand for not.
They won’t be able to attend the funeral.
He couldn’t make a speech.
A sentence should have only one negative. Using double negatives in a sentence is usually incorrect. A double negative is the use of two negative words together when only one is needed.
We don’t need no money. We don’t need any money.
She hasn’t bought nothing. She hasn’t bought anything.
Mark hasn’t no homework. Mark hasn’t any homework. Or
Mark has no homework.
When you use contractions like don’t and hasn’t, do not use negative words after them. Instead, use words like any, anything, and ever.
We don’t have any work.
He hasn’t any work.
I won’t ever respond to the summons.
Other negatives include hardly, barely, and scarcely. They are never used after contractions like haven’t and didn’t.
Incorrect: We couldn’t hardly continue with the work. Correct: We could hardly continue with the work.
Incorrect: The child can’t barely walk.
Correct: The child can barely walk.
Write the following sentences choosing the correct negatives from the ones given in brackets.
- They (have, haven’t) nothing to eat.
- Isn’t (anyone, no one) at home?
- Didn’t you (ever, never) swim in that river?
- There isn’t (anybody, nobody) weeding the farm.
- Ann and Martin haven’t (anywhere, nowhere) to sleep.
- Our friends (had, hadn’t) none of the fun.
- Isn’t (anybody, nobody) watching Tahidi High?
- Hasn’t (anyone, no one) thought of washing the utensils?
- Tabby (hasn’t, has) had no luck.
- We haven’t (ever, never) tried.
A conjunction is a word that connects words or groups of words. Like prepositions, conjunctions show a relationship between the words they connect. But, unlike prepositions, conjunctions do not have objects.
There are 3 main categories of conjunctions;
- Coordinating conjunctions
- Subordinating conjunctions
- Correlative conjunctions
Coordinating conjunctions connect related words, groups of words, or sentences. There are three coordinating conjunctions: and, but and or. And is used to join words, groups of words, or sentences together. But shows contrast while or shows choice.
The bull and the cart are inseparable. (Connects two subjects).
The cart carries the farmer and his tools. (Connects two direct objects).
The food was hard and tasteless. (Connects two predicate adjectives).
Each night, the dancers danced in a circle or in several other patterns. (Connects two prepositional phrases).
Some people died in the fracas, but most managed to escape, alive. (Connects two sentences).
Complete each of the following sentences using the most appropriate coordinating conjunction
- Bats and insects fly, ____________ only birds have feathers.
- Eagles build nests on cliffs ______________ in tall trees.
- Parrots live in wild places _______________ in zoos.
- Swallows ______________ sparrows often build nests in buildings.
- Hummingbirds are tiny __________ very brave.
- Many birds fly south in winter, ______________ others do not.
- Their feathers keep them warm ____________ dry.
- A bird can fly forward _____________ backward.
- Many birds shed old feathers ______________ grow new ones.
- Their legs are weak ____________ their wings are strong.
Subordinating conjunctions connect two or more clauses to form complex sentences. (Refer to Part Two of this handbook). Subordinating conjunctions introduce subordinate clauses. They include because, since, if, as, whether, and for.
If I go home, my dog will follow me.
(The subordinating conjunction if connects the subordinate clause I go home with the main clause my dog will follow me.)
The stayed inside the church because it was raining.
He was always rude since he was a child.
The rain fell as they entered the building.
The pastor asked the congregation whether they were happy.
The man rejoiced for he had won a prize.
Join the following pairs of sentences using the most appropriate subordinating conjunctions.
- They arrived late. It was raining heavily.
- John worked hard. He wanted to buy a house.
- I won’t carry the umbrella. You need it.
- I drove the car madly. I was late for the meeting.
- He will come. The meeting ends.
Correlative conjunctions are conjunctions that are used in pairs to connect sentence parts. These include either ….. or, neither ….. nor, not only……. but also, whether ……. or and both …… and.
Both boys and girls attended the conference.
People brought not only food but also clothes for the victims of the floods.
The students ride either on bicycles or motorbikes.
The sailor had to decide whether to sail on or head back when the weather changed.
Neither John nor James was moved by the shocking news.
Join the following pairs of sentences using the correlative conjunctions in brackets.
- The vehicles stopped for repairs. The vehicles stopped for fuel. (either…..or)
- The drivers knew they had to travel more than fifty kilometres. If they did not travel more than fifty kilometres, they would have to endure harsh storms. (either….or).
- Many people build their own homes. Many people grow their own food. (not only…but also)
- Men wanted to buy the pictures. Women also wanted to buy the pictures.(both…. and)
- Maize is an important part of a Kenyans’ diet. Meat is important too. (both… and)
An interjection is either a single word or a short group of words that is used to express a feeling or emotion. Interjections can express such feelings as urgency, surprise, relief, joy, or pain. An interjection that expresses strong emotion is often followed by an exclamation mark. An interjection that expresses mild emotion is usually followed by a comma.
Let’s go! We can’t sleep before we find the missing boy. (urgency)
Phew! I was afraid we would never find him. (relief)
Oh, you have grown so big. (surprise)
Well, I have never been so happy. (joy)
Identify the interjection in the following sentences and indicate what feeling or emotion it expresses.
- Say, have you heard about Nameless and Jua Kali, the famous Kenyan musicians?
- Wow! Seeing the calf being born was exciting.
- “All right!” I yelled to him. “This is not the right thing to do.”
- Boy! Some people felt wonderful being in the air balloon, but I felt nervous.
- Oh, did that boat rock back and forth for a while.
FORMATION AND ORIGIN OF WORDS
Some words in the English language have unique origins and formations.
- Sound words (onomatopoeias)
Some of the words imitate the sounds they represent. These words are called sound or onomatopoeic words. For example, the words bang and crash describe a loud, sudden noise. The word murmur describes a low, soft noise that keeps going.
Many English words imitate noises made by animals. For example, the word chirp imitates the short, high sound made by a small bird or a cricket.
Other examples of sound (onomatopoeic) words
beep gobble neigh squeal
blast growl purr tick
buzz hiss quack zip
clang honk rip
clatter hum roar
crack meow smash
crunch moo splash
Write a sound word for each of the following descriptions.
- The sound of something breaking
- The loud, deep sound of a lion.
- The sound of a clock.
- The sound of an angry dog.
- The sound of a loud bell.
- The sound made by a duck.
- The sound of a bottle opening.
- The sound of a cat drinking milk.
- The sound of a bomb exploding.
- The sound of a snake.
- Words that come from names of people and places (Eponyms)
Some of the words in the English language come from the names of people and places.
|Sandwich||Two or more slices of bread with meat between them.||John Montagu, the fourth Earl of Sandwich, who liked eating meat between slices of bread.|
|Maverick||A person who breaks from conventional actions||Samuel Maverick, a Texas cattle owner who refused to brand the calves of one of his herds as per the requirements.|
|Saxophone||A musical wind instrument||Adolphe Sax, the Belgian inventor of the musical instrument.|
|Madras||A cotton cloth with a design or pattern on plain background||Madras, a city in India, where it was invented.|
|Rugby||A game||Rugby school, England, where rugby was invented.|
|Tarantula||A large, hairy spider||Taranto, a town in Italy where Tarantulas are found.|
|Shylock||A greedy money-lender||The relentless and vengeful money- lender in Shakespeare’s play, The Merchant of Venice.|
|Sousaphone||A musical instrument||John Phillip Sousa, an American composer who invented the Sousaphone.|
There are many more words in the English language which originated from names of people or places.
Find out from your dictionary the origins and meanings of the following English words.
- lima bean 6. guppy 11. guillotine
- cardigan 7. cheddar 12. macadam
- bloomer 8. quisling 13. pasteurisation
- canary birds 9. silhouette 14. watt
- Ferris wheel 10. Marxism 15. ohm
- Words formed from blending two or more words (portmanteau words)
Some words in the English language are a blend of two or more words or morphemes.
|Smog||Smoke + fog||A combination of smoke and fog in the air.|
|Fantabulous||Fantastic + fabulous||Incredible, astonishing, unbelievable, wonderful|
|Brunch||Breakfast + lunch||A late breakfast taken some hours before lunch|
|Wikipedia||Wiki + encyclopaedia||A website|
|Comcast||Communication + broadcast||A television system that more than the usual number of lines per frame so its pictures show more detail.|
|Spork||Spoon + fork||An eating utensil that is a combination of a spoon and a fork.|
|Skort||Skirt + shorts||An item of clothing that is part skirt and short.|
|Simulcast||Simultaneous + broadcast||To broadcast a programme on television and radio at the same time|
|Cyborg||Cybernetic + organism||A fictional or hypothetical person whose physical abilities are superhuman|
|Motel||Motor + hotel||A roadside hotel|
Identify the words that are blended to form the following words. Find out their meanings from your dictionary.
- slithy 6. breathalyser
- chortle 7. cable gram
- galumph 8. camcorder
- bash 9. edutainment
- blog 10. email
- Words formed by use of prefixes and suffixes
Some words are formed by addition of prefixes and suffixes to other words.
A prefix is a word part that is added to the beginning of a word to form another word or to change its meaning. The word to which the prefix is added is called the base word.
Prefix Base word New word
un friendly unfriendly
pre pay prepay
A prefix changes the meaning of the base word. For example, the prefix un-above means “not”. Hence, unfriendly means “not friendly”. Each prefix has its own meaning.
More examples of common English prefixes
before, in advance
opposing, against, the opposite
opposition, opposite direction
put into or on
after in time, or order
before in time, place order or importance
favouring, in support of
|misspell – to spell incorrectly
revisit – visit again
preschool – before school
anti-aircraft, antibiotic, aticlimax
unacceptable, unreal, unhappy, unmarried
Give the meaning of the following prefixes and write two examples each of words in which they are used. Use your dictionary.
- ultra- infra-
- syn- hypo-
- sub- hemi
- peri- ex-
- out- dia-
A suffix is a word part that is added to the end of a base word to form a new word or to change its meaning.
Enjoy + able = enjoyable
Each suffix has its own meaning. The suffix “able” means “capable of”. Hence enjoyable means “capable of being enjoyed”.
Common English suffixes
state or quality
act or process of
place or state of being
state of being
state of being
make or become
capable of being
having the quality of
having the nature of
Add an appropriate suffix to each of the following words and then give the meaning of the new word.
- hope 6. green
- read 7. wear
- child 8. fear
- grey 9. kind
- play 10. wash
Words in English language have various meanings depending on their usage in sentences.
Homographs are words which are spelled the same but have different meanings. They usually appear as separate entries in a dictionary.
The man dug a well in his compound.
They worked well together.
In the first sentence, the noun well means “a spring of water”. In the second sentence, the adverb well means “in a good manner”.
Examples of common homographs in the English Language
|(V) to support or carry
(N) an animal
|I will bear the burden.
The bear killed the hunter.
|(V) to plant seed
(N) female pig
|The farmer sowed the seeds.
The sow is very fat.
|(V) to guide
(N) a metal
|The mother duck can lead her ducklings around.
Gold is heavier than lead.
(V) turning something around
(N) moving air
|The tiger was now so close that I could smell it.
“Will you please close that door?”
Wind your watch.
The wind howled through the woodlands.
|(V) to determine the age
(N) to “go out”
(N) a kind of fruit
(N) a calendar time
|Can you date this sculpture?
I have a date with Mary.
Dates are grown in South Africa.
What is the date today?
(V) to choose not to eat food
|He is a fast runner.
The Christians fast just before Easter.
|(N) animal skin
(V) to conceal
|He is tanning the hide.
They hide their money under their pillows.
|(N) woven trap made of rope or cord
(Adj) amount remaining after deductions.
|They caught fish using a net.
His net pay is thirty thousand shillings per month.
|pick||(N) a kind of tool
(V) to choose
|He used a pick to dig the hole.
Pick the dress that you want.
Some homographs are spelled the same but pronounced differently.
The wind is strong today.
This path winds through the hills.
Write two meanings of the following homographs and use each of them in sentences of your own.
- pen 6. act
- tire 7. arms
- dove 8. block
- wound 9. box
- mean 10. bank
Homophones are words that sound the same but have different spellings and meanings.
She will buy music composed by my favourite artist.
Homophones are often confused when writing by many students because of similarity in pronunciation.
Examples of common homophones in English
|(V) the walkway
|I quickly walked down the aisle.
He grew up on the isle of Elba.
(Adv) not silently
|His mother allowed him to stay up late.
She read the story aloud.
|(V) past tense of “eat”
|She ate a quick lunch.
I bought eight tickets.
|(N) a round object used in games
(V) to cry
|He took the ball to the beach.
Please don’t bawl! It’s not that bad.
|(V) to stand something
|He can’t bear exams.
He stood outside in the rain completely bare.
|(N) the bottom
support of something
(N) the lowest pitches in music
|We need a new base for that lamp.
I sang bass in the church choir.
More examples of homophones
awe, oar, or, ore
cent, scent, sent
cite, site, sight
doh, doe, dough
ewe, yew, you
for, fore, four
Give the homophones and the meanings of the following words.
- in 6. knight
- heard 7. knows
- horse 8. tick
- hey 9. rung
- need 10. sees
Synonyms are words that have almost the same meaning but different spelling and pronunciation.
Slender–thin finish–end sick–ill
Some words have several synonyms. For example, happy has such synonyms words like light-hearted, pleased, and cheerful.
Synonyms help vary the writing, just like pronouns do. For example, the word happy and its synonyms help vary the writing.
Daniel felt happy – Daniel felt light-hearted.
She was happy with her grade – She was pleased with her grade.
They sang a happy song – They sang a cheerful song.
Examples of common synonyms in English
enormous, huge, immense
hint, trace, tip
Give the synonyms of the following words:
1.start 6. collect
2.come 7. assist
3.lengthy 8. build
4.shattered 9. reply
5.Fix 10. purchase
Antonyms are words that have opposite meanings. Antonyms also add variety to your writing.
Cold-hot heavier – lighter fearful – brave.
Some words have more than one antonym. Some of these antonyms can be formed by adding a prefix to a base word.
Kind – cruel, unkind like – hate, dislike
Examples of common antonyms in English
|absent – present
absurd – sensible
abundant – scarce
accidental – intentional
accuse – defend
accurate – incorrect
admit – deny
advance – retreat
after – before
alien – native
alone – together
always – never
amuse – bore
anger – kindness
applaud – boo
asleep – awake
beautiful – ugly
beg – offer
below – above
bitter – sweet
buy – sell
careful – careless
cease – begin
civilian – military
closed – open
condemn – praise
crooked – straight
dangerous – safe
dead – alive
deep – shallow
destroy – create
drunk – sober
east – west
|enemy – friend
evil – good
exhale – inhale
expensive – cheap
fail – succeed
fat – skinny
fertile – barren
floor – ceiling
former – latter
funny – serious
generous – stingy
genuine – fake
guilty – innocent
humble – arrogant
husband – wife
illegal – lawful
import – export
indoor – outdoor
inferior – superior
intelligent – stupid
joy – grief
kind – mean
king – commoner
lazy – industrious
lock – unlock
majority – minority
man – woman
merciful – cruel
moist – dry
nervous – calm
obey – disobey
original – copy
patient – impatient
|permit – forbid
polite – rude
positive – negative
private – public
push – pull
question – answer
quick – slow
reckless – cautious
rival – friend
sane – insane
servant – master
sick – well
simple – complex
slavery – freedom
smart – dumb
solid – gas
spend – save
stranger – friend
strong – weak
sudden – gradual
suffix – prefix
tame – wild
temporary – permanent
thaw – freeze
tough – tender
unique – common
vacant – occupied
victory – defeat
villain – hero
war – peace
young – old
Give the antonyms of the following words:
- easy 6. sweat
- whisper 7. stationary
- triumph 8. strengthen
- dull 9. precious
- dangerous 10. naked
- IDIOMS AND SAYINGS
An idiom is a phrase that has a special meaning as a whole. The meaning of an idiom is different from the meanings of its separate words.
It was raining cats and dogs.
(The idiom raining cats and dogs does not mean that cats and dogs were falling out of the sky! It means “raining heavily”.)
I put my foot in my mouth today.
(The idiom put my foot in my mouth means “to say the wrong thing”. Sometimes the context in which an idiom is used can give a hint of its meaning.)
Jeff is talking through his hat when he says that he can spell every word in the English language.
(This idiom clearly means that Jeff cannot possibly spell every word in the English language. Hence, the idiom talking through his hat means talking nonsense.)
More examples of idioms in the English language
|It was a blessing in disguise.
|Something good that is not recognised at first.
|He is a doubting Thomas.
|A sceptic who needs physical or personal evidence in order to believe something.|
|That scandal was a drop in the bucket.
|A very small part of something big or whole.
|The punishment was a slap in the wrist.
|A very mild punishment.
|The thief received a taste of his own medicine.||He was mistreated the same way he mistreats others.|
Don’t add fuel to the fire!
When something is done to make a bad situation even worse than it is.
The principal is just all bark but no bite.
When someone is threatening and/or aggressive but not willing to engage in a fight.
The theory is all Greek to me.
Meaningless and incomprehensible.
We are all in the same boat.
When everyone is facing the same challenges.
|The house cost him an arm and a leg.
|Very expensive. A large amount of money.
|The teacher has an axe to grind with the bursar.||To have a dispute with someone.
Joyce is the apple of my eye.
Someone who is cherished above all others.
|The boy did the work at the drop of a hat.
|Willing to do something immediately
|The politician is a back seat driver.
|People who criticize from the sidelines
|They were back to square one in their search for the treasure.||Having to start all over again.
The government has to go back to the drawing board on the issue of the New Constitution.
When an attempt fails and it’s time to start all over again.
|17||The exam was a piece of cake.
|A task that can be accomplished very easily.
|The investigator realised he was barking the wrong tree.||A mistake made in something you are trying to achieve.|
|Stop beating around the bush.
|Avoiding the main topic, not speaking directly about an issue.|
|I will bend over backwards to see you through school.
|Do whatever it takes to help.
Willing to do anything.
|22||She was caught between a rock and a hard place.
|Stuck between two very bad options.
|You are biting off more than you can chew.||To take on a task that is way too big.
John decided to bite his tongue.
To avoid talking.
Tom has a cast iron stomach.
Someone who has no problems, complications, or ill effects with eating or drinking anything.
That is a cock and bull story.
An unbelievable tale.
|I will have to win, come hell or high water.||Any difficult situation or obstacle.
Don’t cry over spilt milk.
When you complain about a loss from the past.
|He likes crying wolf.
|Intentionally raise a false alarm.
|Tim is a dark horse.
|One who was previously unknown and now is prominent.|
|Kinyua is a devil’s advocate.
|Someone who takes a position for the sake of argument without believing in that particular side of the argument.|
|My father drinks like a fish.||To drink very heavily.|
|This problem is driving me up the wall.||To irritate or annoy very much.|
|The students had a field day with the visiting guests.||An enjoyable day or circumstance.
|The food was finger licking good.||Very tasty food or meal.|
|He changed from rags to riches.||To go from being very poor to being very wealthy.|
|I need to get over it.
|Move beyond something that is bothering you.|
She got up on the wrong side of the bed
To someone who is having a horrible day.
|39||Joan is a good Samaritan.
|Someone who helps others when they are in need without expecting a reward.|
|40||I have a gut feeling she will die.
|A personal intuition you get, especially when you feel something may not be right.|
|41||The player lost his head when he missed the goal.||Angry and overcome by emotions.|
|42||He was head over heels in love with her.||Very excited and joyful, especially when in love.|
|43||He gave her a high five when he won the contest.||Slapping palms above each other’s heads as a celebration gesture.|
|44||Let us hit the books!
|To study, especially for a test or exam.
|45||I will hit the hay now.
|Go to bed or go to sleep.
|46||The preacher hit the nail on the head.
|Do or say something exactly right.
|47||She hit the sack after a hard day’s work.
|Go to bed or sleep.
|48||Hold your horses, the speaker is coming.||Be patient.
|49||The certificate was an icing on the cake after the monetary reward.||When you already have it good and get something on top of what you already have.|
|50||The girl became careless in the heat of the moment.||Overwhelmed by what is happening at the moment.|
|51||The policeman kept an eye on him.||Carefully watch somebody.|
|52||He kept his chin up during the burial.
|To remain joyful in a tough situation.|
|53||The old man kicked the bucket.
|54||Lend me your ear.
|To politely ask for someone’s full attention.
|55||You let the cat out of the bag.
|To share a secret that wasn’t supposed to be shared.
|56||The by-election was not a level playing field.||A fair competition where no side has an advantage.
He ran all over like a chicken with its head cut off.
To act in a frenzied manner.
|58||Mr. Gumo is a loose cannon.
|Someone who is unpredictable and can cause damage if not kept in check.
|59||I am not interested in his mumbo jumbo.
|Nonsense or meaningless speech.|
|60||She is the new kid on the block.
|Someone new to the group or area.
|61||He started off on the wrong foot.
|Getting a bad start on a relationship or task.
|62||The accused man is now off the hook.
|No longer have to deal with a tough situation.
|63||I said that off the record!
|Something said in confidence that the speaker doesn’t want attributed to him or her.
|64||I was on pins and needles.
|Anxious or nervous especially in anticipation of something.|
|65||The prefects sit on the fence when there is a strike.||Undecided.
|66||The dog appeared out of the blue.
|Something that suddenly and unexpectedly occurs or appears.|
|67||You will get the job over my dead body.
|When you absolutely will not allow something to happen.|
|68||Mark is fond of passing the buck to his brother.||Avoid responsibility by giving it to someone else.
|69||Dennis is a peeping Tom.
|Someone who observes people in the nude or sexually active people, mainly for his own gratification.|
|70||“Pipe down! We have heard you!
|To shut up or be quiet.
|71||You are pulling my leg.
|Tricking someone as a joke.
|72||Rise and shine! It’s time to go to school.
|Time to get out of bed and get ready for work or school.|
|73||The businessman has run out of steam nowadays.
|To be completely out of energy.
|74||The convict was saved by a bell.
|Saved at the last possible moment.
|75||He was a scapegoat for the amorous politician.
|Someone else who takes the blame.
|76||The naughty boy got away scot-free.
|To escape and not have to pay.
|77||She was sick as a dog.
|To be very sick (with flu or a cold).
|78||He has a sixth sense.
|A paranormal sense that allows you to communicate.|
Common idiomatic expressions and sayings
- A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush. – Having something that is certain is much better than taking a risk for more, because chances are you might lose everything.
- A fool and his money are easily parted. – It’s easy for a foolish person to lose his/her money.
- A house divided against itself cannot stand. – Everyone involved must unify and function together or it will not work out.
- A leopard can’t change his spots. – You cannot change who you are.
- A penny saved is a penny earned. – By not spending money you are saving money (little by little).
- A picture paints a thousand words. – A visual presentation is far more descriptive than words.
- Actions speak louder than words. – It’s better to actually do something than just talk about it.
- Curiosity killed the cat. – Being inquisitive can lead you into a dangerous situation.
- Don’t count your chickens before they hatch. – Don’t rely on it until you are sure of it.
- Don’t look a gift horse in the mouth. – When someone gives you a gift, don’t be ungrateful.
- Don’t put all your eggs in one basket. – Do not put all your resources in one possibility.
- Drastic times call for drastic measures. – When you are extremely desperate you need to take extremely desperate actions.
- Elvis has left the building. – The show has come to an end. It’s all over.
- Every cloud has a silver lining. – Be optimistic, even difficult times will lead to better days.
- Great minds think alike. – Intelligent people think like each other.
- Haste makes waste. – Doing things quickly may result in a poor ending.
- Idle hands are the devils’ tools. – You are more likely to get it trouble if you have nothing to do.
- If it’s not one thing, it’s another. – When one thing goes wrong, then another, and another ….
- It takes two to tango. – A conflict involves two people and both must cooperate to have it resolved.
- It’s a small world. – You cannot hide from your evil deeds in this world.
- Let bygones be bygones. – To forget about a disagreement or argument.
- Let sleeping dogs lie. – To avoid restarting a conflict.
- Never bite the hand that feeds you. – Don’t hurt anyone that helps you.
- Practice makes perfect. – By constantly practising, you will become better.
- Rome was not built in one day. – If you want something to be completed properly, then it’s going to take time.
- The bigger they are, the harder they fall. – The bigger and stronger opponent may be more difficult to beat, but when he does, he suffers a much bigger loss.
- Variety is the spice of life. – The more experiences you try the more exciting life can be.
- When it rains, it pours. – Since it rarely rains, when it does it will be a huge storm.
- You are what you eat. – In order to stay healthy, you must eat healthy foods.
- You can’t judge a book by its cover. – Decisions shouldn’t be made primarily on appearance.
Give the meaning of the italicized idioms in the following sentences.
- I was completely at sea when the Prime Minister visited my house.
- Jane has her hands full. She can’t take on more work.
- Do you have a bone to pick with me?
- I can’t make heads or tails of this story.
- The test was as easy as pie.
- I am sick and tired of doing nothing at work.
- I am broke! I have to borrow some money.
- She dropped me a line yesterday.
- He filled in for her when she fell sick.
- My business is in the red.
A phrase is a group of words without a subject or a predicate or both and does not express a complete thought. Therefore, a phrase can never stand on its own as a complete sentence. Using different kinds of phrases enables a writer or a speaker to create informative and descriptive sentences that vary in structure. Phrases combine words into a larger unit that can function as a sentence element.
The most common kinds of phrases in English are: Noun phrases, verb phrases, prepositional phrases, gerund phrases and participial phrases.
- NOUN PHRASES
A noun phrase consists of a noun and all its modifiers. It can function as a subject, object, or complement in the sentence. The modifiers may include articles, prepositions and adjectives.
(a) Noun phrases as subjects
The lazy old man sleeps all day long.
Some school boards reward teachers who produce good results.
(b) Noun phrases as objects
Teachers rejected the proposed performance contracts.
Critics opposed the controversial marriage bill.
(c) Noun phrases as complements
Teaching is a valuable profession.
Sheila is a hardworking no-nonsense lady.
Identify the noun phrases in each of the following sentences and indicate whether it functions as a subject, object or complement.
- I saw a TV show yesterday.
- Playful animals really fascinate me.
- Yesterday, I had a thrilling adventure.
- Swimming is an exciting activity.
- Twenty university students were expelled last month.
- She is a certified public health officer.
- Many of the soldiers were killed in the battle.
- The old woman carried a heavy load of firewood on her back.
- Peter seems a very complicated man to understand
- A devastating earthquake hit China yesterday.
- VERB PHRASES
A verb phrase consists of a main verb and its helping verbs. It can function as the predicate of a sentence. The predicate tells what the subject does or is. (It tells something about the subject).
John was born in Malindi.
This problem may have contributed to the collapse of the economy.
Without highly-trained workers, many Kenyan companies would be forced to close down.
Sometimes the parts of a verb phrase are separated from each other by words that are not verbs.
He is finally buying a new house.
Salesmen must occasionally travel long distances.
Some words are joined with other words to make contractions.
He hasn’t turned up for the meeting. (has + not)
We couldn’t tell what had killed the cow. (could + not)
I’ve ordered them to leave the house. (I + have).
NB: The word not and the contraction n’t are adverbs. They are never part of a verb or verb phrase.
Write the verb phrase in each of the following sentences.
- We should have taken pictures of the wild animals.
- You must have seen the posters of the event.
- They should have been told to come with flowers to plant in the school compound.
- Mr. Muchira would have told some interesting stories.
- Scientists must’ve visited the Menengai Crater.
- He must have seen some wonderful places.
- Many advocates do fear the new Chief Justice.
- The scouts have often made camp here.
- The bull fighters would sometimes stampede noisily.
- I could have read the book if he had allowed me.
- PREPOSITIONAL PHRASES
A prepositional phrase is made up of a preposition, the object of the preposition, and all the words between them. It often functions as an adjective or adverb, but it can function as a noun as well.
We carried the fruits in our school bags. (Adverb telling where)
The plane flew through the cloud. (Adverb telling where)
Almost half of Africa’s population suffers from water – related diseases. (Adverb modifying suffers).
The water supply in the United States is expected to decline dramatically. (Adjective modifying water supply).
The best time to practise water conservation is before a water shortage. (Noun functioning as a complement).
In sentence 1 above, the preposition is in, the object of the preposition is bags, and the modifiers or adjectives are our and school.
Sometimes two or more nouns or pronouns are used as objects in a prepositional phrase.
He needs a wife with diligence and a good character.
Diligence and character are objects of the preposition with.
When prepositional phrases function as adjectives and adverbs in sentences, they are called adjectival and adverbial phrases respectively.
(a) An adjectival prepositional phrase modifies nouns or pronouns.
The woman wears shoes with sharp heels. (An adjectival phrase modifying the noun shoes)
The man with a funny-looking dog crossed the road. (An adjectival phrase modifying the noun man)
(b) An adverbial prepositional phrase modifies verbs, adjectives, or other adverbs.
Soldiers train for many months. (An adverbial phrase modifying the verb train)
People are lazy in the afternoons. (An adverbial phrase modifying the adjective lazy.)
She arrived late in the night. (An adverbial phrase modifying the adverb late).
Sometimes one prepositional phrase immediately follows another.
The man led him through the door on the left.
Note that the prepositional phrase through the door is an adverbial phrase modifying the verb led and tells where? The second prepositional phrase on the left is an adjectival phrase modifying the noun door and tells which one?
A prepositional phrase can be at the beginning, in the middle, or at the end of a sentence.
At dusk, we began to walk home.
The map of the area was very helpful.
The path went by a forest and a large lake.
Underline the prepositional phrases in the following sentences and indicate what type each of them is.
- The oldest building is found in Mombasa.
- Five companies around the country have bought new fire engines.
- The barking of the dog scared the strangers.
- Bulls are bred for hard work.
- Most bridges are built over water.
- Travellers were spared many miles of travel.
- I went by bus to the market.
- At the market, I saw beautiful and unusual people.
- I also saw a display of colourful clothes.
- She took him through the lesson with professional expertise.
- GERUND PHRASES
A gerund is a verb form used as a noun. It is formed by adding –ing to the present tense of a verb. Gerunds can be used as subjects, direct objects, objects of prepositions, and complements.
Subject: Fishing is a popular activity in Nyanza Province.
(Fishing is a gerund, the subject of the verb is)
Direct object: The sport involves riding. (riding is a gerund, the direct object of the verb involves)
Object of preposition: The sport is similar to fencing. (fencing is a gerund, the object of the preposition to).
A gerund phrase includes a gerund, its modifiers, objects or complements. It always functions as a noun.
Becoming a Tusker Project fame finalist was Msechu’s lifetime dream. (The gerund phrase is the subject of the sentence.)
Msechu dreamt all his life about winning the top award. (The gerund phrase is an object of the preposition about).
One of Msechu’s biggest disappointments was losing to Alpha. (The gerund phrase is a complement).
The game involves jumping over hurdles. (The gerund phrase is an object of the verb involves).
Underline the gerund or gerund phrases in the following sentences and label each one subject, direct, object, object of preposition, or complement accordingly
- In early days, golfing was a game for the rich.
- The rich were mostly interested in protecting their status.
- Playing golf with a commoner would mean lowered status.
- Much of the rich people’s time was spent playing the game.
- Training thoroughly improved a golfer’s accuracy in the game.
- There he learned about playing the game.
- Later, he started contesting with other junior golfers.
- At fifteen or sixteen, he began playing with the professionals.
- Participating in international tournaments was the golfer’s dream.
- But the greatest dream was winning an in international title.
- PARTICIPIAL PHRASES
A participle is a verb form that always acts as an adjective. There are two types of participles:
(a) The past participle – it is usually formed by adding –d, or -ed to the present tense.
Fooled, the shopkeeper bought fake products. (Fooled is a past participle modifying the noun shopkeeper)
Shaken, he dashed to the police station.
(Shaken is a past participle modifying the pronoun he)
The participles of irregular verbs, however, do not follow the above rule: run-run, throw-thrown.
(b) The present participle – it is usually formed by adding -ing to the present tense of any verb.
Smiling, the conman stepped out of the shop. (Smiling is a present participle modifying the noun conman).
Using participles is a simple way of adding information to sentences and to vary sentences beginnings.
A participial phrase consists of a present or past participle and its modifiers, objects, or complements. It always functions as an adjective.
Rounding the corner, the conman met two policemen.
(Rounding the corner is a present participial phrase modifying the noun conman).
Surprised by the appearance of the conman, the policemen started blowing their whistles.
(Surprised by the appearance of the conman is a past participial phrase modifying the noun policemen).
A participle or participial phrase is not always at the beginning of a sentence. Sometimes it may appear in the middle but it should be near the noun or pronoun it modifies.
The skilled policemen, seeing a chance of a lifetime, arrested the conman.
The conman, losing control, fought the policemen fiercely.
Points to note
Both the gerund and the present participle are created by a adding –ing to the present tense of a verb. BUT how can you tell whether a word is a gerund or a participle? It all depends on how the word is used in a sentence.
(i) A participle is used as a modifier in a sentence.
Gaining courage, the conman attempted to escape. (Gaining courage is a participial phrase modifying conman).
(ii) A gerund is used as a noun in a sentence.
Gaining courage made the conman look aggressive. (Gaining courage is a gerund phrase, the subject of the verb made).
Underline the participial phrases in the following sentences, indicating whether it is a past or present participial phrase and the noun or pronoun it modifies.
- Defying all odds, Kisoi Munyao attempted to climb to the highest peak of Mt. Kenya for seven times.
- Failing each time, he refused to give up.
- Seeing his passion to scale the peak, the government offered him financial assistance.
- The climber ascended slowly, making steady progress.
- Pleased with his progress, he camped at eleven thousand feet.
- The climber, determined to hoist the Kenyan flag, progressed on the following morning.
- Slipping on the snow, Munyao fell on a dry tree trunk.
- A rope worn from too many climbs then broke.
- One of his hot water bottles, slipping to the bottom of the cliff, broke into pieces.
- Munyao, overcome with joy, finally hoisted the flag at Point Batian.
- INFINITIVE PHRASES
An infinitive is a verb form that usually appears with the word to before it. To is called the sign of the infinitive.
to lift to eat to launch to register
To is a preposition if it is followed by a noun or noun phrase, but it is a sign of the infinitive if it is followed by a verb or verb phrase.
Joseph longed for a flight to the moon. (Prepositional phrase)
Not until 1985 was he able to succeed. (Infinitive)
An infinitive phrase consists of an infinitive and its modifiers, objects or complements. It can function as a noun, adjective, or adverb.
To write clearly and concisely can be difficult sometimes. (Infinitive phrase functioning as a noun and the subject of the sentence).
Proofreading your writing is a good way to ensure the absence of typing mistakes. (Infinitive phrase functioning as an adjective modifying the noun way).
To greatly increase the amount of stress in your life, leave your writing task until the night before it is due. (Infinitive phrase functioning as an adverb modifying the verb leave).
Underline the infinitive phrases in each of the following sentences and state whether it is functioning as a noun, adjective or adverb.
- To climb Mt. Kenya was the dream of Kisoi Munyao.
- The freedom hero decided to climb the mountain on the eve of the country’s independence.
- He was one of the first Kenyans to try this risky climb.
- His determination helped him to make rapid progress to reach Point Batian.
- Munyao was able to reach the peak with very limited climbing gear.
- To reach Point Batian was Munyao’s ultimate goal.
- At first few other climbers bothered to listen to Munyao.
- He was even forced to finance much of his expedition himself.
- Munyao worked hard to achieve his dream of hoisting the Kenyan flag.
- His success made it easier for other climbers to scale the tallest mountain in Kenya.
What is a sentence?
A sentence is a group of words that expresses a complete thought. A complete thought is clear. A sentence always begins with a capital letter. It ends with a full stop (.), a question mark (?) or an exclamation mark (!).
Ted sent me a letter.
Jane slept soundly.
A sentence fragment does not express a complete thought. The reader or listener cannot be sure what is missing in or the meaning of a sentence fragment.
He or she will be left wondering: What is this about? What happened?
Fragment: The huge boat. (What happened?)
Sentence: The huge boat sails down the river.
You can correct a sentence fragment by supplying the missing information.
Subjects and predicates
The two fundamental parts of every English sentence are the subject and the predicate.
A subject can be described as the component that performs the action described by the predicate. It tells who or what does or did the action. It may also name the topic.
The predicate tells about the subject. It tells what the subject does or is.
(Who or what) (What is said about the subject)
The antelope jumped over the high fence.
Pigs eat anything is sight when hungry.
In a sentence, a few key words are more important than the rest. These key words make the basic framework of the sentence. The verb and its subject are the key words that form the basic framework of every sentence. The rest of the sentence is built around them.
Sentence Key words
The young kids jumped playfully. kids, jumped
Their faces shone brightly. faces, shone
To find out the subject, ask who or what before the verb.
Who jumped playfully? – kids
What shone brightly? – faces
To find out the verb, ask what after the subject.
The young kids did what? – jumped
Their faces did what? – shone
The key word in the subject of a sentence is called the simple subject. For example, kids, faces. The complete subject is the simple subject plus any words that modify or describe it. For example, The young kids, Their faces.
The key word in the predicate is called the simple predicate. For example, jumped, shone. The complete predicate is the verb plus any words that modify or complete the verb’s meaning. For example, jumped playfully, shone brightly.
The simple subjects and predicates may sometimes be more than one word. For simple subjects, it may be the name of a person or a place.
Barack Obama won the US presidential race.
South Africa is the home of many bats.
The simple predicate may also be more than one word. There may be a main verb and a helping verb.
Tanya has acted in many TV shows.
She will be performing again tonight.
An object in a sentence is a word or words that complete the meaning of a sentence. It is involved in the action but does not carry it out. The object is the person or thing affected by the action described in the verb. It is always a noun or a pronoun and it always comes after the verb.
The man climbed a tree.
Some verbs complete the meaning of sentences without the help of other words. The action that they describe is complete.
The temperature rose.
Some other verbs do not express a complete meaning by themselves. They need to combine with other words to complete the meaning of a sentence.
Christine saw the snake.
Rose wears goggles.
He opened the door.
In the above examples, the snake, goggles and the door are the objects as they are the things being affected by the verbs in the sentences.
(Refer to the topic on Transitive and Intransitive Verbs under the main topic VERBS in Chapter One).
Which groups of words are sentences and which ones are sentence fragments?
- A huge storm was coming.
- Behind the wattle tree.
- After the earthquake.
- The wind broke several houses.
- Surprised by a loud noise.
- Winds of high speed.
- Rescue workers arrived.
- From different parts of the world.
- Many people were injured.
- In the weeks after the earthquake.
Direct and indirect objects
Objects come in two types, direct and indirect:
The direct object is the word that receives the action of a verb.
Christine saw a snake. ( a snake receives the action of saw)
Rose wears goggles. (goggles receives the action of wears)
Sometimes the direct object tells the result of an action.
Tecla won the race.
She received a trophy.
To find the direct object first find the verb. Then ask whom or what after the verb.
Christine saw a snake. Rose wears goggles
Verb: saw verb: wears
Saw what? a snake wears what? goggles
Tecla won the race She received a trophy
Verb: won verb: received
Won what? the race received what? a trophy
Remember, we said earlier that a verb that has a direct object is called a transitive verb and a verb that does not have an object is called an intransitive verb. We also said that a verb may be intransitive in one sentence and transitive in another. Other verbs are strictly intransitive, e.g. disagree.
The indirect object refers to a person or thing who receives the direct object. They tell us for whom or to whom something is done. Others tell to what or for what something is done.
I gave him the book.
He is the indirect object as he is the beneficiary of the book.
Direct object or adverb?
Direct objects are sometimes confused with adverbs. The direct object tells what or whom as we have seen earlier. Adverbs on the other hand tell how, where, when or to what extent. They modify the verbs.
Brian Swam slowly. (slowly is an adverb telling how)
Brian Swam a tough race. (race is a direct object telling what).
Verbs can also be followed by a phrase that tells how, when, or where. This kind of a phrase is never a direct object but an adverbial phrase.
Brian swam across the pool. (across the pool tells where Brian Swam).
Therefore, to decide whether a word or a phrase is a direct object or adverb, decide first what it tells about the verb. If it tells how, where, when or to what extent, it is an adverb. If it tells what or whom, it is a direct object.
Identify the objects or the adverbs/adverbial phrases in the following sentences. If the sentence has two objects, indicate the direct object and the indirect object.
- Nanu sings pop music.
- Nanu sings sweetly.
- He spoke very quietly.
- I have read that book three times.
- She has gone to the bank.
- David gave her a present.
- David disagreed bitterly.
- The player sat on his heels.
- She made a list of the items to buy.
- They offered him help.
Some sentences do not take objects or adverbs (or adverbial phrases) after the verbs. Instead, they take complements. A complement is the part of the sentence that
gives more information about the subject (subject complement) or about the object (object complement) of the sentence.
Subject complements normally follow certain verbs like be, seem, look, etc.
He is British. (British gives more information about he)
She became a nurse. (a nurse gives more information about she)
Object complements follow the direct objects of the verb and give more information about those direct objects.
They painted the house red. (red is a complement giving more information about the direct object house)
She called him an idiot. (an idiot is a complement giving more information about the direct object he).
The complement often consists of an adjective (e.g. red) or a noun phrase (e.g. an idiot) but can also be a participle phrase.
I saw her standing there. (standing there is a complement telling more about her).
Pick out the complements in the following sentences and indicate whether subject, object or participial complements.
- The tourist is a German citizen.
- She seems a very arrogant lady.
- You look tired.
- They painted the car green.
- James nicknamed Lucy the queen.
- I saw him stealing the mango.
- They beat the thief senseless.
- The priest looks a kind person.
- We left her crying.
- Job left her trembling.
TYPES OF SENTENCES
Sentences can be categorised in terms of structure or in terms of purpose.
- IN TERMS OF STRUCTURE
Sentences can be categorised into 3 main types:
- Simple sentences
(ii) Compound sentences
(iii) Complex sentences.
- SIMPLE SENTENCES
A simple sentence contains a single subject and predicate. It describes only one thing, idea or question, and has only one verb. It contains only an independent (main) clause. Any independent clause can stand alone as a sentence. It has a subject and a verb and expresses a complete thought.
Jack plays football.
Even the addition of adverbs, adjectives and prepositional phrases to a simple sentence does not change its structure.
The white dog with the black collar always barks loudly.
Even if you join several nouns with a conjunction, or several verbs with a conjunction, it remains a simple sentence.
The dog barked and growled loudly.
- COMPOUND SENTENCES
A compound sentence consists of two or more simple sentences joined together using a co-ordinating conjunction such as and, or or but.
The sun was setting in the west and the moon was just rising.
Each clause can stand alone as a sentence.
The sun was setting in the west. The moon was just rising.
Every clause is like a sentence with a subject and a verb. A coordinating conjunction goes in the middle of the sentence; it is the word that joins the two clauses together.
I walked to the shops, but my wife drove there.
I might watch the film, or I might visit my aunt.
My friend enjoyed the film, but she didn’t like the actor.
Two simple sentences should be combined to form one compound sentence only if the ideas they express are closely related. If the ideas are not closely related, the resulting sentence may not make sense.
Incorrect: The car is old, and Dan likes sociology.
Correct: The car is old, but it functions superbly.
Punctuating compound sentences
When writing some compound sentences, a comma is used before the conjunction. The comma tells the reader where to pause. Without a comma, some compound sentences can be quite confusing.
Confusing: Jane studied the specimen and her sister took notes.
(The sentence might cause the reader to think that Jane studied both the specimen and her sister).
Better: Jane studied the specimen, and her sister took notes.
(The comma makes the sentence to be clear).
Sometimes the parts of a compound sentence can be joined with a semicolon (;) rather than a comma and a conjunction.
Jane studied the specimen; her sister took notes.
Never join simple sentences with a comma alone. A comma is not powerful enough to hold the sentences together. Instead use a semicolon.
Incorrect: My father enjoyed the meal, he didn’t like the soup.
Correct: My father enjoyed the meal; he didn’t like the soup.
Correct: My father enjoyed the meal, but he didn’t like the soup.
- COMPLEX SENTENCES
A complex sentence contains one independent (main) clause and one or more subordinate (dependent) clauses. They describe more than one thing or idea and have more than one verb in them. They are made up of more than one clause, an independent clause (that can stand by itself) and a dependent clause (which cannot stand by itself).
The picture looks flat because it is colourless.
(The picture looks flat is the independent (main) clause whereas because it is colourless is the subordinate (dependent) clause)
What is a clause?
A clause is a group of words that contains a verb and its subject. There are two types of clauses – main clauses and subordinate clauses.
A main clause is a clause that can stand as sentence by itself. A compound sentence contains two or more main clauses, because it is made up of two or more simple sentences. Each of these simple sentences is a main clause.
Robots operate machines, and they solve many labour problems.
Robots operate machines and they solve many labour problems are both main clauses. They are also simple sentences. Main clauses are sometimes called independent clauses.
Subordinate clauses are clauses that do not express a complete thought. So they cannot stand by themselves.
If technology will improve When robots can do the work
While electronics will work After the system is complete
None of the above clauses express a complete thought. They are sentence fragments that leave the reader wondering then what?
Subordinate clauses are introduced by subordinating conjunctions such as if, when, while, and after.
Other examples of subordinating conjunctions:
Although because so that until
as before than whatever
as if in order that though wherever
as long as provided till whenever
as though since unless where
Now we can understand a complex sentence better. We have said that it contains one main clause and one or more subordinate clauses.
Main clause subordinate clause
The bell started ringing before we were out of bed.
The battery needs recharging so that it can work tonight.
The subordinate clause can sometimes appear before the main clauses.
When the power failed, the computer stopped.
Before you know it, your flat screen television will be stolen.
The subordinate clause can also sometimes appear in between the sentence.
The medicine man, who knew many tricks, cheated the man that he had been bewitched.
TYPES OF SUBORDINATE CLAUSES
Subordinate clauses may be used in sentences as adjectives, adverbs and nouns in complex sentences. Such clauses are called adjectival, adverbial and noun clauses respectively. They add variety to one’s writing. They can also make one’s writing more interesting by adding details.
Without subordinate clause: The bushman told us about the hidden cave.
With subordinate clause: The bushman, who knew the forest well, told us about the hidden cave.
- Adjectival clauses
An adjectival clause acts as an adjective in a sentence, that is, it modifies a noun or a pronoun.
The bushman, who knew the forest well, told us about the hidden cave.
(who knew the forest well is an adjectival clause that modifies the noun bushman).
The bushman told us a legend that involved the cave.
(that involved the cave is an adjectival clause that modifies the noun legend).
An adjective clause usually comes immediately after the noun it modifies.
People still search for the treasure that the pirate hid.
As can be seen from the above examples, adjectival clauses, like adjectives, modify nouns or pronouns answering questions like which? or what kind of?
Adjective Adjective clause
The red coat the coat which I bought yesterday
Like the adjective red, the adjectival clause which I bought yesterday modifies the noun coat. Note than an adjectival clause usually comes after what it modifies while an adjective comes before.
Besides use of subordinating conjunctions, adjectival clauses can be introduced by relative pronouns. Relative pronouns are the words who, whom, whose, that and which. These words relate the subordinate clauses to the word it modifies in the main clause.
The books that people read were mainly religious.
Some fire-fighters never meet the people whom they save.
The meat which they ate was rotten.
In the last sentence, the relative clause (called so because it is introduced by the relative pronoun which) which they ate modifies the noun meat and answers the question which meat?
They are searching for the one who borrowed the book.
The relative clause who borrowed the book modifies the pronoun one and answers the question which one?
Besides relating the adjectival clause to a noun or pronoun in the main clause, a relative pronoun may also act as the subject, object, predicate pronoun, or object of a preposition in the clause.
Subject: This is the forest that has a secret cave.
(that is the subject of has)
Object: The map, which you saw, guides the way.
(which is the object of saw)
Object of a preposition: The map leads to the cave of which the bushman spoke.
(which is the object of the preposition of)
In informal writing or speech, you may leave out the relative pronoun when it is not the subject of the adjectival clause, but you should usually include the relative pronoun in formal academic writing.
Formal: The books that people read were mainly religious.
Informal: The books people read were mainly religious.
Formal: The map which you saw guides the way.
Informal: The map you saw guides the way.
But never omit the relative pronoun if it is in the clause.
Correct: This is the forest that has a secret cave.
Incorrect: This is the forest has a secret cave.
Commas are put around adjectival clauses only if they merely add additional information to a sentence.
The map, which you saw, shows the way.
This adjective clause can be left out without affecting the grammatical structure of the sentence. It is merely adding information to the sentence by telling us which map?
The map shows the way.
(ii) Adverbial clauses
An adverbial clause is a subordinate clause which takes the place of an adverb in a sentence. Just like adverbs and adverbial phrases, adverbial clauses answer the questions where, when, how, to what extent, with what goal/result and under what conditions. In addition, an adverbial clause may tell why.
Note how an adverb clause can replace an adverb and an adverbial phrase in the following example:
Adverb: The Prime Minister gave a speech here.
Adverbial phrase: The Prime Minister gave a speech in the afternoon.
Adverbial clause: The Prime Minister gave a speech where the workers were striking.
Usually, an adverbial clause is introduced by a subordinating conjunction like because, when, whenever, where, wherever, since, after and so that.
Note that a subordinate adverb clause can never stand alone as a complete sentence.
after they left dining hall
The above adverbial clause will leave the reader asking what happened after they left the dining hall?
Adverbial clauses express relationships of cause, effect, place, time and condition.
Adverb clauses of cause answer the question why?
Njoroge wanted to kill his uncle because he had murdered his father.
Adverbial clauses of effect answer the question with what goal/result?
Njoroge wanted to kill his uncle so that his father’s murder would be avenged.
Adverbial clauses of time answer the question when?
After Njoroge’s uncle married his mother, he wanted to kill him
Adverbial clauses of condition answer the question under what conditions?
If the uncle cooperates, Njoroge may decide to pardon him.
Adverbial clauses of place answer the question where?
Njoroge organised a demonstration where his father’s murder occurred.
Note that an adverbial clause can appear either before or after the main clause of the sentence.
(iii) Noun clauses
A noun clause is a clause which takes the place of a noun or a noun phrase. It can be used in any way that a noun is used. That is, it can act as the subject, object, object of a preposition, or predicate noun in a sentence. Just like a noun, a noun clause answers the questions who, when, or what?
Noun: Kamau is unknown
Noun phrase: Their destination is unknown
Noun clause: Where they are going is unknown.
The noun clause where they are going is the subject of the verb is.
Noun: I know French.
Noun phrase: I know the three ladies.
Noun clause: I know that Latin is no longer spoken as a native language.
In the first sentence, the noun French acts as the direct object of the verb know. In the third sentence, the entire clause that Latin is no longer spoken as a native language is the direct object of the verb know.
As objects of the preposition
Noun: He talked about him.
Noun phrase: He talked about the funny items.
Noun phrase: He talked about what you bought at the supermarket.
In the first sentence the pronoun him is the object of the preposition about. In the third sentence, what you bought at the supermarket is the object of the preposition about and answers the question about what?
As predicate nouns
Her first day in school was what shaped her life.
The adverbial clause what shaped her life gives more information about the subject of the sentence Her first day in school.
Words often used to introduce noun clauses
that when whose
what whatever whoever
how who whoever
You cannot tell the kind of a clause from the word that introduces it. You can tell the kind of clause only by the way it is used in a sentence. If the clause is used as a noun, it is a noun clause. If the clause is used as a modifier, it is an adjectival clause or an adverbial clause.
Whoever built the house was not an expert. (Noun clause as a subject)
No one knew where he came from. (Noun clause as a direct object)
He left the construction site whenever he wished. (As an adverbial clause)
This is the layout which he left behind. (As an adjectival clause).
Identify the following sentences as simple, compound or complex. If it is a complex sentence, indicate whether it has an adjective, an adverb or a noun subordinate clause.
- The hotel is not very old.
- The hotel is not very old; it was constructed in 1987.
- It has a strange name, but it attracts many tourists.
- Whoever broke the mirror will have to pay for it.
- The Gor Mahia fans hope that the team will win again.
- Did I tell you about the author whom I met?
- They are searching for the man who stole the cow.
- People began riding horses at least five thousand years ago.
- Some people watch the moon as though it affects their lives.
- Some superstitions were developed when people felt helpless about the world around them.
- The parachute was really a sail that was designed for skiing.
- The moon orbits the earth every 291/2 days.
- My dog loves bread crusts.
- I always buy bread because my dog loves the crusts.
- Whenever lazy students whine, Mrs. Ndegwa throws pieces of chalk at them.
- The lazy students whom Mrs. Ndegwa hit in the head with pieces of chalk complained bitterly.
- My dog Shimba, who loves bread crusts, eats them under the kitchen table.
- A dog that drinks too much milk will always be alert.
- You really do not want to know what Aunt Lucy adds to her stew.
- We do not know why, but the principal has been away from school for two months.
- IN TERMS OF PURPOSE
We have seen how sentences are categorised into simple, compound and complex depending on their internal structures. Now, we shall see how they can be categorised in terms of purpose.
There are five kinds of sentences classified according to their end marks and the different jobs they do:
- Declarative sentences
- Interrogative sentences
- Exclamatory sentences
- Imperative sentences
- Conditional sentences
- Declarative sentences
A declarative sentence simply states a fact or argument without requiring either an answer or action from the reader or listener. It is punctuated with a simple period. (fullstop)
Nairobi is the capital of Kenya.
He asked which path leads back to the park.
Deserts are dry.
The declarative sentence is the most important type of sentences. You can write an entire essay or report using only declarative sentences, and you should always use them more often than any other type. Some declarative sentences contain indirect questions but this does not make them into interrogative sentences.
He asked which path leads back to the park.
- Interrogative sentences
An interrogative sentence asks a direct question and always ends in a question mark.
How many roads lead into Mombasa city?
Does money grow on trees?
Do you like deserts?
Note that an indirect question does not make a sentence interrogative.
When was Professor Saitoti the Vice President of Kenya?
I wonder when Professor Saitoti was the Vice President of Kenya.
A direct question requires an answer from the reader or listener, while an indirect question does not. A special type of direct questions is the rhetorical question. A rhetorical question is one that you do not expect the reader or listener to answer.
Why did the Mau Mau war take place? Some people argue that it was simply a way of Kenyan Africans saying “enough is enough”.
Rhetorical questions can be very effective way to introduce new topics or problems in one’s writing or speech. But if you use them too often, you sound patronising or even monotonous or mediocre!
- Exclamatory sentences
An exclamatory sentence expresses strong feeling, emphasis or emotion. It is actually a more forceful version of a declarative sentence that is marked at the end with an exclamation mark.
It was so cold!
How beautiful this picture is!
You look so lovely tonight!
Exclamatory sentences are very common in speech and sometimes in writing (but rarely).
Note that an exclamation mark can appear at the end of an imperative sentence, but this does not make it into an exclamatory sentence.
- Imperative sentences
An imperative sentence gives a direct command to someone. This sentence can end either with a period or with an exclamation mark, depending on how forceful the command is.
Read this book tomorrow.
Always carry water.
Wash the windows!
You should not usually use an exclamation mark with the word “please”.
Close that door, please!
Please close that door.
In an imperative sentence, you is always the subject. It is usually not stated in the sentence. We say that you is the “understood” or “implied” subject.
(You) Please bring my camera.
(You) Take your medicine before going to bed.
- Conditional sentences
A conditional sentence expresses what one would do if a condition were or were not met.
The condition in the conditional if-clause will determine the fulfilment of the action in the main clause.
If I had a million dollars, I would buy a Hummer.
John would be very successful if he had more brains.
In sentence 1, the condition of having a million dollars will determine whether the speaker will buy a hummer or not. In sentence, the condition of John not having more brains determines that he is not very successful.
Label each of the following sentences declarative, imperative, exclamatory, interrogative or conditional
- There is a terrible storm tonight.
- Try to cover yourself with a blanket.
- How strong the winds are!
- If the storm continues, we shall have to go down into the bunker.
- Do you think it will rip off the roof?
- Look at that that flash of lightning!
- What an amazing sight that is!
- The night looks dark and scary.
- Please tell the children to stop screaming.
- Susan will sit beside me if the storm continues.
- We are hopeful all will be well.
- Dive under the table if it breaks the roof.
- How will I find my way?
- Can I take a glass of water?
- John wants to know what will happen if our house collapses.
- There goes the thunder!
- We shall have to move to another city if we get out of this alive.
- Tell me a good city where we can move to.
- The storm is subsiding.
- Hooray! Safety at last!
DIRECT AND INDIRECT SPEECH
Direct speech is used to give a speaker’s exact words. It is also referred to as direct quotation. Direct speech is always enclosed within quotation marks.
Hemedi announced, “My aunt works in a biscuit factory.”
“Creating jobs will be my first priority,” the governor said.
A comma always separates the quoted words from the speaker’s name, whether the name comes before or after the quotation
Jim asked, “Who are you voting for?”
“I don’t know yet,” answered Carol.
A direct quotation always begins with a capital letter
Senator Karaba said, “You must believe in the new constitution.”
When a direct quotation is divided by speech tags, the second part of the quotation must begin with a small letter.
“Register to vote,” said the senator, ‘before the end of the day”.
If the second part of the quotation is a complete sentence, the first word of this sentence is capitalized.
“I did register,” said Carol. “It took only a few minutes”
Commas and full stops are placed inside quotation marks
“Last night,” said Joyce,” I listened to a debate.”
Quotation marks and exclamation marks are placed inside a quotation mark if they belong to the quotation. If they do not, they are placed outside the quotation.
Joyce asked, “Whom are you voting for?”
Did Carol say, “I don’t know yet’’?
I can’t believe that she said, “I don’t know yet’!
Speech tags may appear before, in the middle or at the end of the direct speech.
He said, “You know quite well that you have to vote.”
“You know quite well,” he said, “that you have to vote.”
“You know quite well that you have to vote,” he said.
Rewrite the following sentences correctly in direct speech. Ensure you punctuate them accordingly.
- John said there was a terrible accident in Nairobi.
- Petro added it happened in Umoja Estate.
- It involved a train and a bus added John.
- Sarah asked did anyone die.
- No one died, but the railway line was destroyed answered Peter.
- Over the months said John the railway line has been rebuilt.
- How lucky that no one died exclaimed Sarah.
- I think they should put a railway-crossing sign board Petro said it would help bus drivers a lot.
- Or they should put bumps on both sides of the railway line to slow down the buses John suggested
- Who knows what might happen next wondered Sarah
Indirect speech is used to refer to a person’s words without quoting him or her exactly. It is also referred to as indirect quotation or reported speech. The original spoken words are not repeated. The exact meaning is given without repeating the speaker’s words.
Direct speech: The governor said, “Creating new jobs will be my first priority.”
Indirect speech: The governor said that creating new jobs would be his first priority.
Several changes do occur when changing a sentence from direct to indirect speech
- Quotation marks
Quotation marks are left out when writing a sentence in direct speech.
Direct: Hemedi announced, “My aunt works in a biscuit factory”
Indirect: Hemedi announced that his aunt worked in a biscuit factory.
- Tense – The tense of a verb in the direct sentence will change in indirect speech
- Simple present changes to past simple
Direct: John said, “She goes to school early.”
Indirect: John said that she went to school early.
- Simple past changes to past perfect
Direct: John said, “She went to school early.”
Indirect: John said that she had gone to school early.
- Present progressive changes to past progressive
Direct: “The baby is eating a banana,” the nurse said.
Indirect: The nurse said that the baby was eating a banana.
- Present perfect changes to past perfect
Direct: “South Sudan has become a republic,” the new president declared.
Indirect: The new president declared that South Sudan had become a republic.
- Past progressive changes to past perfect progressive
Direct: “I was dreaming when the fire started,” the boy said.
Indirect: The boy said the he had been dreaming when the fire started.
- Future simple changes to modal
Direct: “I will visit you tomorrow,” my desk mate said.
Indirect: My desk mate said the he would visit me the following day.
- May changes to might
Direct: I may also visit you too,” I replied.
Indirect: I replied that I might also visit him too.
Sometimes the verb in indirect speech does not change tense. This occurs in sentences that are universal truths
Direct: Our Geography teacher said “The earth rotates round the sun.”
Indirect: Our Geography teacher said that the earth rotates round the sun.
- Words referring to place also change
Direct: “I live here,” retorted the old man.
Indirect: The old man retorted that he lived there.
Direct: “This place stinks,” noted the boy.
Indirect: The boy noted that that place stunk.
- Words referring to time also change
Direct: “I will visit you tomorrow,” he shouted.
Indirect: He shouted that he would visit me the following/next day.
Direct: “He died last year,” the policeman reported.
Indirect: The policeman reported that he had died the previous year/ the year before.
- Demonstrative pronouns also change:
Direct: “This book is mine,” Jane claimed.
Indirect: Jane claimed that that book was hers.
Direct: “These are hard times,” observed the president.
Indirect: The president observed that those were hard times.
- Pronouns also change
Direct: “My car is better than yours,” the teacher bragged.
Indirect: The teacher bragged that his/her car was better that his/hers/theirs.
Change the following sentences from Direct to Indirect speech.
- “Did you see the fire at the West gate Mall?” asked Joel.
- Njagi said, “Ten fire-engines arrived in fifteen minutes.”
- Patty exclaimed, “It destroyed an entire block of building!”
- “One fire fighter was slightly injured,” said Joel.
- Njagi said, “Several people working in the building escaped unhurt.”
- “Tell me what will happen to them,” said Patty.
- “Other people are giving them food and clothes,” replied Joel.
- Njagi added, “They are resting in the school for now.”
- “These terrorists will finish us!” exclaimed Patty.
- “Don’t worry,” Joel said “They will be apprehended tomorrow.”
A question tag or a tag question is a phrase that is added at the end of a statement to turn into a question. When a speaker uses a question tag at the end of a statement, he/she is seeking for approval, confirmation or correction.
APPROVAL: I look smart today, don’t I? Yes you do.
CORFIRMATION: These are the new students, aren’t they? Yes they are.
CORRECTION: I paid your money yesterday, didn’t I? No you didn’t.
Many learners face a problem of supplying the correct question tags to sentences. This is because they fail to observe the following rules of question tags:
- A comma must be put to separate the statement with the question tag. A question mark must be placed at the end of the question tag.
Rufftone has released a new album, hasn’t he?
He is pushing for a decision by tomorrow, isn’t he?
- The auxiliary verb in the statement must be repeated in the question tag
Nelson Mandela was in prison for 27 years, wasn’t he?
The people of South Africa have lost a great hero, haven’t they?
- When there is no auxiliary verb in the statement, the appropriate form of the auxiliary verb Do must be used in the question tag
Mark Francis wakes up very early, doesn’t he?
Peter Bryan bought an I-pad phone, didn’t he?
- The subject in the statement must be repeated in the question tag. If it is a noun in the statement, it changes to the appropriate pronoun. If it is a pronoun in the statement, it remains a pronoun in the question tag.
Fatou Bensouda is a prosecutor in ICC, isn’t she?
She does her work meticulously, doesn’t she?
- When the statement is positive (i.e. It does not have the word not in it), the question tag must be negative (i.e. must use the negative word not) and vice versa.
David Rudisha has broken another record, hasn’t he?
Catherine Ndereba hasn’t been very active, has she?
Douglas Wakiihuri does not run any more, does he?
Ezekiel Kemboi entertains the audience after winning, doesn’t he?
You will note from the above examples that the auxiliary verb is usually contracted (joined) with the negative indicator not when using question tags. However, this does not apply when using primary auxiliary verb am and the modal auxiliary verbs will and shall. Am does not allow contraction with not, will and shall usually change their forms to allow contraction.
WRONG: I am the next speaker, amn’t I?
CORRECT: I am the next speaker, am I not?
WRONG: They will be late for church, willn’t they?
CORRECT: They will be late for church, won’t they?
WRONG: We shall attend the Memorial service, willn’t we?
CORRECT: We shall attend the memorial service, shan’t we?
- Whereas there is no inversion in the statement, inversion must occur in the question tag i.e. the auxiliary verb comes before the subject
President Uhuru Kenyatta has won the case, hasn’t he?
Subject verb verb subject
He can now relax and attend to his duties, can’t he?
Subject verb verb subject
- For sentences that are in form of requests and commands, the question tags will commonly take the auxiliary verb will or shall followed by the appropriate pronoun.
Please help me with your pen, will you?
Let us go for a swim, shall we?
Bring me that chair, will you?
Stop that noise, will you?
Kneel down right away, will you?
Those are the rules that govern question tags and if followed well, the learners will not have any problems with question tags.
Supply the appropriate question tags in the following sentences.
1.The marriage caused a rupture in her relationship with her mother, _____________?
2.She didn’t think anyone would be interested in a woman like her, _______________?
3.The troops are on standby in case chaos erupt, _________?
4.The Prime Minister must take a firm stand against extremists in his party, _________?
5.I am the best so far, ____________________?
6.The amendments will strengthen the bill, __________?
7.The new tax is tantamount to stealing from the poor, ____?
8.Please send all your remarks to Prof Kibwana as soon as possible, _______________?
9.She raised the gun and pulled the trigger,______________?
10.We need to learn to prioritize, __________________?
11.Get out of this room now, ___________________?
12.We’ve made a reservation for next week, ____________?
13.They couldn’t conceal the secret any more, ___________?
14.We shall not accept anything less, __________________?
15.I am not a conman, __________________?
16.Jonny wanted to pursue a career in theatre, __________?
17.Sharon’s parents claim that the house is legally theirs, ____________?
18.I haven’t told you my name, _________________?
19.Come and visit us tomorrow, __________________?
20.Time will tell whether he made the right choice, _______?
CAPITALIZATION AND PUNCTUATION
Capitalization is the writing of a word with its first letter as an upper case and the remaining letters in lower case. The following are the cases when capitalization is used:
Abbreviations begin with a capital letter.
- Titles of persons
Prof. George Saitoti Mr. Stephen Kiama
Dr. Ephantus Maree Mrs. Teresa Ndegwa
Lt. James Conary Ms. Jacinta Atieno
Note that all the above abbreviations end with a period. Miss is not an abbreviation, so it doesn’t end with a period.
- Words used as addresses
St. (street) Blvd. (Boulevard)
Ave. (Avenue Rte. (Route)
Rd. (Road) Apt. (Apartment)
- Words used in businesses
Co. (Company) Inc. (Incorporation)
Corp. (Corporation) Ltd. (Limited)
- Some abbreviations are written in all capital letters, with a letter standing for each important word.
P.O. (Post Office) USA (United States of America)
P.D. (Police Department) E.A. (East Africa)
- Initials of names of persons
E.W. Gichimu D.M. Weyama
W.W. Muriithi Everlyne A. Kira
- Titles of books, newspapers, magazines, TV shows and movies.
The Minister’s Daughter (book) Tahidi High (TV show)
The Daily Nation (newspaper) Harry Potter (movie)
Drum Magazine (magazine) The Day of the Jackal (book)
Capitalize the first and last words only. Do not capitalize little words such as a, an, the, but, as, if, and, or, nor etc.
- Titles of shorts stories, songs, articles, book chapters and most poems.
Half a Day (short story)
Three Days on Mt. Kenya (short story)
The Noun Clauses (chapter in a book)
Grass Will Grow (a poem)
- Religious names and terms
God Allah Jesus the Bible the Koran
Do not capitalize the words god and goddess when they refer to mythological deities.
- Major words in geographical names
Continents – Africa, Asia, Europe, Australia
Water bodies – the Indian Ocean, the Atlantic Ocean, the Nile River, RiverTana, Lake Victoria.
Landforms – the Rocky Mountains, the Aberdares Mountains, the Rift Valley, the Sahara Desert.
Political Units – the Kirinyaga County, the Central Province, Inoi Sub-location.
Public Areas – Nairobi National Park, Wajee Nature Park.
Roads and Highways – Jogoo Road, Kenyatta Avenue, Uganda Road.
- Names of organisations and institutions
Kianjege West Secondary School, United Nations, University of Nairobi, Nairobi Women’s Hospital
Note that here you capitalize only the important words. Do not capitalize such words such as a, in, and of. Do not capitalize such words as school, college, church and hospital when they are not used as parts of names.
There will be a beauty contest at school.
- Months, days and holidays
June Labour Day
Kenyatta Day Mashujaa Day
Do not capitalize names of seasons: autumn, summer, winter, spring
- Languages, races, nationalities and religions
Chinese Kikuyu Christianity Caucasian
Bantu Nigerian Muslim Oriental
- The first word of every sentence
What an exciting day it was!
- The pronoun I
What should I do next?
- Proper Nouns
Lang’ata Cemetery Ann Pauline Nyaguthii
Kangaita Women’s Group Muhigia Teachers Sacco
- Proper Adjectives
We ate at an Italian restaurant.
She is a German.
- The first word in greetings and the closing of a letter
Dear Mark, Yours sincerely,
Dear Bryan, Yours faithfully,
My dear Mum, Very truly yours,
Jamlick exclaimed, “This book would make a great movie!”
“Where,” asked the stranger, “is the post office?”
“It’s late,” Billy said. “Let’s go home!”
- First word of each main topic and subtopic in an outline
- Parts of speech
(i) Proper nouns
Correct all errors of capitalization in the following sentences.
- this play is a revision of shakespeare’s earlier play, the merchant of venice.
- john kiriamiti wrote my life in crime
- i admire women who vie for parliamentary seats
- benard mathenge and his wife have travelled to america.
- my grandmother grew up in witemere.
- the nile river is one of the largest rivers in africa.
- each year tourists visit maasai mara national park.
- the tv show papa shirandula has attracted many viewers.
- uganda and kenya have signed an agreement over the ownership of migingo islands.
- our country got its independence in december 1963.
- on christmas day, all my relatives gathered at my home.
- waiyaki is a fictional character in ngugi wa thiongo’s novel, the river between.
- the city of mombasa gets its water from river tana.
- i would like to become a famous writer like sydney sheldon.
- they captured the stark beauty of hell’s gate national park in their movie.
Punctuation is the system of symbols that we use to separate sentences and parts of sentences, and to make their meaning clear. Each symbol is called a punctuation mark. For example (. , ! – : etc)
Punctuation marks can be grouped into:
- End marks
- The comma
- The semicolon and the colon
- The hyphen
- The apostrophe
- Quotation mark
- End Marks
There are three kinds of end marks: the full stop (.), the question mark (?), and the exclamation mark (!). End marks show where sentences end.
- The full stop (.)
A full stop is used to end a complete sentence. We use a full stop to end:
(i) A declarative sentence- a sentence that makes a state
The highest skyscraper in Nairobi is Times Tower.
(ii) An imperative sentence – a sentence that makes a request or tells someone to do something.
Please climb the stairs carefully.
Note: An imperative sentence is followed by an exclamation mark when it expresses a strong emotion.
(iii) At the end of an indirect question – one that tells what someone asked, without using the person’s exact words.
The naughty boy wanted to know why there was no mid-term break.
Other uses of the full stop
Full stops are also used:
(iv) After initials and after most abbreviations
L.L. Coo J. Mr. Sammy Njagi 11:00 A.M.
Sept. Wed. 2hr. 12min
Note that some abbreviations do not require full stops:
M (metres) FM (frequency modulation) Km kilometres)
(v) After each number or letter that shows a division of an outline or precedes an item in a list.
- Parts of speech 1. Water – borne diseases
- Nouns 2. Air-borne disease
- Types of nouns 3. Sexually – transmitted diseases
- Uses of nouns 4. Skin diseases
- Verbs 5. Hereditary diseases
- Types of verbs 6. Lifestyle diseases
- Uses of verbs 7. Infectious diseases
(vi) Between numerals representing dollars, cents, before a decimal and in percentages
$ 25.65 165.42 25.3%
- The question mark (?)
The question mark is used at the end of an interrogative sentence (a sentence that asks a question).
When was the Times Tower built?
Who built it?
- The Exclamation mark (!)
The exclamation mark is used at the end of the exclamatory sentence and after an interjection. (An exclamatory sentence expresses strong feeling, emotion or emphasis. An interjection is a word or group of words that expresses strong feelings).
Exclamatory sentence: Oh, what a tall building it is!
Interjections: Superb! Fantastic! Impressive!
An exclamation mark can also be used at the end of an imperative sentence that expresses strong feeling.
Sit! And stay in that chair if you know what’s good for you!
- The comma (,)
There are a number of uses of the comma in English. A comma generally tells the reader where to pause. They are used:
(i) To separate words in a series except the last
The three or four items in a series can be nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, phrases, independent clauses, or other parts of sentences.
Nouns: John, Jim, Jack walk to school every day.
Verbs: He located, patched, and sealed the leak in the tyre.
Adverbs: She walked quickly, steadily, and calmly.
Prepositional phrases: He walked through the park, over the bridge, and onto the streets.
Independent clauses: The match was over, the crowd cheered, and Barcelona received the first- place trophy.
Adjectives: The fresh, ripe fruit was placed in a bowl.
Note in the above examples that a comma must be used just before the conjunction.
(ii) Before the conjunction in a compound sentence
Some students were taking their lunch, but others were studying.
Marto photographed the accident scene, and he sold the pictures to the newspaper.
Would she be a lawyer, or would she be a doctor?
Note: A comma is not required in very short compound sentence in which the parts are joined by and. However, always use a comma before the conjunctions but and or.
Marto photographed the accident scene and Toni reported it.
Marto photographed the accident scene, but Toni reported it.
Note also: A comma is not required before the conjunction that joins the parts of a compound verb unless there are more than two parts.
Mary entered and won the beauty contest.
That camera focuses, flashes, and rewinds automatically.
(iii) After introductory words phrases or clauses
Special elements add specific information to a sentence, but they are not essential. A comma is used to separate a special element from the rest of the sentence.
Word: Cautiously, he entered the building.
Phrase: After his failure, he disappeared from the public scene.
Clause: Because he had practised daily, he presented his new song perfectly.
Note: If the pause after a short introductory element is very brief, you may omit the comma.
At first he was unsure of his singing ability.
Finally it was his turn.
Commas are also used after introductory words such as yes, no, oh and well when they begin a sentence.
Well, it’s just too cold out there.
No, it isn’t seven yet.
Oh, you have spilled the milk.
(iv) With interrupters
Interrupters are words that break, or interrupt the flow of thought in a sentence. The commas are used before and after the interrupter to indicate pauses.
I didn’t expect, however, to lose the job.
So many people assumed, unfortunately, that he sings as well as he does.
He was chosen, nevertheless, as the new band leader.
(v) To set off nouns of direct address
Yes, Kamau, you can borrow my book.
Serah, do you know where I kept my phone?
How is your leg, grandpa?
(vi) To set off the spoken words in a direct sentence or quotation from the speech tag
Jackson said, “After my injury I had to learn to walk again.”
“The therapists urged me to keep trying,” he continued.
If the speech tag interrupts the spoken words, commas are used after the last word of the first part of the spoken words and after the last word in the speech tag.
“After a while,” he added, “I was walking without a cane”.
Note: When a sentence is indirect or reported, no commas are used.
He added that after a while he was walking without a cane.
(vii) When writing dates
Place a comma after the day of the month.
July 3, 1965 December 12, 2010
(viii) When referring to geographical location
Place a comma between the name of the town or city and the name of the state, district, or country.
Kibingoti, Kirinyaga County Mombasa, Kenya
(ix) After the salutation and closing of a friendly or business letter
Dear Rose, Yours sincerely,
- The semicolon (;) and the colon (:)
The semicolon (;)
The semicolon is used:
(i) To separate the parts of a compound sentence when no conjunction is used
Mountain climbing is exciting; it can also be dangerous.
Note that the semicolon replaces the comma and the coordinating conjunction. Conjunctions that are commonly replaced by semicolons are and, but, or, for, and nor. (ii) Before a conjunctive adverb that joins the clauses of a compound sentence
(Conjunctive adverbs are words like therefore, however, hence, so, then, moreover, nevertheless, yet, consequently, and besides).
The competition takes place in July; however, I prefer August.
(iii) To separate the parts of a series when commas occur within the parts
Last year I flew to Johannesburg, South Africa; Cairo, Egypt; and Kingston, Jamaica.
The colon (:)
The colon is used:
(i) To introduce a list of items
My school bag contains the following items: exercise books, text books, pencils, pens, a geometrical set, and a packet of crayons.
(ii) After the greeting of a business letter
Dear Mr. Mututho:
(iii) Between numerals that represent hours and minutes and between chapter and verse in a biblical reference
9:00 A.M. 6:00 P.M. Exodus 2:1-3
- The Hyphen (-)
The hyphen is used:
(i) To divide a word at the end of a line of writing
When walking along the streets of Naivasha, he met Waina-
Note that only words with two or more syllables may be divided at the end of a line and words should be divided only between syllables. Never divide a word of one syllable and do not divide words to leave a single letter at the end or beginning of a line.
- In compound adjectives that come before the nouns they modify and in certain compound nouns
Samuel Wanjiru was a world–famous athlete.
She is my sister–in–law.
(iii) In compound numbers from twenty-one through ninety-nine and in fractions
seventy–three relatives one–quarter full
- The Apostrophe (’)
The apostrophe is used:
(i) To form the possessive of a singular noun
Add an apostrophe and an s.
the baby’s cot James’s car Joseph’s radio
(ii) To form the possessive of a plural noun that does not end in s
Add an apostrophe and an s.
children’s men’s women’s
(iii) To form the possessive of a plural noun that ends in s
Add only the apostrophe.
(iv) To form the possessive of an indefinite pronoun
Use an apostrophe and an s.
everybody’s somebody’s nobody’s
Note: Never use an apostrophe with a possessive pronoun like our, yours, hers, theirs.
(v) In names of organisations and business
Show possession in the last word only.
the United Nations’ brochure
(vi) In hyphenated terms
Show possession in the last word only.
My mother-in-law’s photograph album
(vii) In cases of joint ownership
Show possession in the last word only.
Peter and Patrick’s Limousine
(viii) In forming contractions
In contractions, apostrophes replace omitted letters.
she’s = she is aren’t = are not I’m = I am
it’s = It is isn’t = is not we’ll = we will
can’t = cannot won’t = will not they’ve = they have
(ix) To show that part of a date has been omitted
The tribal clashes of ’08 (the tribal clashes of 2008)
The ’82 coup attempt (the 1982 coup attempt)
- Quotation Marks (“ ”)
The quotation marks are used:
- To enclose the spoken words in a direct sentence. Indirect sentences need no quotation marks
Direct speech: The presidential candidate promised, “Creating new jobs for the youths will be my first priority.”
Indirect speech: The presidential candidate promised that creating new jobs would be his first priority.
- Always begin a direct quotation with a capital letter.
The minister said, “You must conserve our environment.”
- When the spoken words are divided by the speech tag, begin the second part of the quotation with a small letter.
“Bring me the money,” said the moneylender, “before the end of the day.”
- If the second part of the quotation is a complete sentence, the first word of this sentence is capitalized.
“I am scared,” said the borrower. “That moneylender is a brute.”
- Place commas and fullstops inside quotation marks
Place semicolons and colons outside quotation marks.
“Last month,” the borrower explained, “I borrowed some money from the moneylender.”
Carol said to the borrower, “And you refused to repay back on time”; however, the borrower did not agree.
These candidates were suggested in the article “Our Country’s Future”: Raila Odinga, Uhuru Kenyatta, William Ruto, and Martha Karua.
- Place question marks and exclamation marks inside quotation marks if they belong to the quotation. Place them outside if they do not belong to the quotation.
Carol asked, “How much money did you borrow?”
Did the borrower say, “I can’t remember”?
“You are a fool!” exclaimed Carol.
- Use single quotation marks to enclose a title or quotation within a quotation.
“Carol heard the borrower say, ‘I can’t remember’ before she lost her temper.”
- If the title or quotation within the quotation ends the sentence, use both the single and the double quotation marks after the last word of a sentence.
“Carol heard the borrower say, ‘I can’t remember.’”
- In a quotation of more than one paragraph, use quotation marks at the beginning of each paragraph and the end of the final paragraph.
Punctuate each of the following sentences appropriately.
- He earned about three million dollars that year
- You know who Jomo Kenyatta was, don’t you
- What a wonderful and inspired leader he was
- He was also a person who helped many people
- Some people write stories but others write poems.
- Try to write a concise informative and interesting letter.
- Also make sure your letter has a heading an inside address a salutation a body a closing and your signature.
- One of the most exciting modern developments I believe is the computer.
- Today is July 2 2011. I will never forget this date.
- I have lived in Sagana Kirinyaga County since 2008.
- Try submitting your work to these Publishers Longhorn Publishers Jomo Kenyatta Foundation or Oxford University Press.
- Remember a writing career requires the following traits confidence perseverance and a thick skin!
- Long ago people used hand sharpened straws or reeds as pens.
- Fountain pens were invented in our great grandparents time
- Soft tip pens and rolling ball pens were invented twenty five years ago
- What would you do if you couldn’t build a house for yourself
- Youd find someone who could built it for you wouldn’t you.
- These archives are important to modern historians research.
- In his play shreds of tenderness, John Ruganda said people who have never lived through a coup d’etat have romantic ideas about it.
- Mr. Mureithi said a short letter to a friend is an insult.
ANSWERS FOR ALL CHAPTERS
ANSWERS ON NOUNS
- students, party
- Excitement, air
- Joyce Chepkemoi, prize
- Otieno, house, street
- candle – thing 5. guitar – thing
- wrestler – person 6. China – place
- joy – idea 7. hatred – idea
- Menengai Crater – place 8. Masanduku arap Simiti – person
- musicians, drums, trumpets
- family, village
- Petronilla, trip
- festival, Kenyatta University
- people, costumes, streets
- holiday, excitement
- Taxi, family, airport
- Maryanne, castle, sand
- mother, water
Proper nouns Common nouns
Kendu Bay crocodiles
John Hopkins student
East Africa day
- Proper – Lucky Dube Common – singer
- Proper – London, Paris Common – dancer
- Proper – Mediterranean sea Common – flight
- Proper – Second World War Common – nurse
- Common – goal, students, world
- Proper – Europe Common – accident
- Proper – Bill Gates, Microsoft
- Common – pilot, woman, ocean
- Common – kettle, water
- Proper – Professor Wangari Maathai, Nobel Peace Prize
- tooth – teeth 9. cliffs 17. moose 25. bosses
- wives 10. deer 18. children 26. foxes
- giraffes 11. cliff 19. echoes 27. bunches
- heroes 12. autos 20. babies 28. ferries
- radios 13. studios 21. Skies 29. flashes
- potatoes 14. men 22. beaches 30. ships
- beliefs 15. roofs 23. Eyes
- thieves 16. rodeos 24. volcanoes/volcanos
- knives 2. potatoes 3. geese 4. Shelves
- tomatoes 6. children 7. mice 8. roofs
- stories 10. activities
- the lion’s tail
- Cliff’s dog
- my mother’s hat
- Evan’s book
- the child’s pet
- the doll’s name
- Lucy’s mobile phone
- Kimani’s shoes
- the fox’s teeth
- my friend’s rabbit
- cook’s aprons women’s sports
- men’s boots carpenter’s nails
- countries’ flags sailors’ uniforms
- guests’ coats musicians’ instruments
- athlete’s medals neighbours’ pets
- The couple’s wealth
- a men’s team, a women’s team
- The teams’ uniforms
- the athletes’ shirts
- The team-mates’ scores
- their friends’ cheers
- The coaches’ whistles
- The children’s eyes
- Their mothers’ soothing voices
- their neighbours’ house
ANSWERS ON PRONOUNS
- They ate fish and chips.
- We like Italian food.
- It is delicious
- The biggest eater was he.
- You helped in the cooking.
- The cooks were Tom and I.
- They were under the table.
- She fed the chicken.
- They were juicy.
- They visited the orphans.
- The new waitress is she.
- The fastest runners were Tecla and she.
- She went to the hall.
- It was slaughtered.
- Lucky Dube and she were South African singers.
- He has won many athletics medals.
- Lisa asked him for a picture.
- Adam sketched Lisa and me.
- He gave a photo to us.
- Ann and she saw Dave and Bob.
- Adam drew Lisa and them.
- Mark helped me with the packing.
- Loise praised him for his good work.
- Everyone spotted them
- That night Mike played the guitar for
- We drove with them to the mountains.
- My journey to Mombasa was enjoyable.
- Florence said hers was the best.
- Are the pictures of Fort Jesus yours?
- Hers are about Jomo Kenyatta Beach.
- Tomorrow we will make frames for our
- My class is planning a trip to Mt. Kenya.
- Our trip will be taken on video.
- Micere is excited that the idea was
- Koki and Toti cannot hide their
- My dream is to climb to the highest peak of the mountain.
- You will = You’ll
- we would = we’d
- he had = he’d
- I am = I’m
- you have = you’ve
- they will = they’ll
- I’ll = I will
- we’re = we are
- you’d = you would, you had
- he’s = he is, he has
- they’re = they are
- she’d = she would, she had
- its They’re 5 it’s
- who’s whose
- All – are Everyone – his
- Anybody – has Several – their
- Many – believe Anyone – her
- Each – makes Another – his
- All – indicates Somebody – her
- This Those 5. these
- That those
- Who What 5. whom
- Whom What
- Who whom
- Whom Whose
- whom Who
- Whose Who
- Who Whose
- myself – intensive
- himself – intensive
- herself – reflexive
- herself – reflexive
- yourself – reflexive
- Papa Shirandula is a good actor.
- Many people find him funny.
- The show was on television for many years.
- Their daughter is also in that show.
- The shoes are beautiful.
- People like our hotel.
- My brother drives a matatu.
- Our hotel is open seven days a week.
- The TV is very clear today.
- My brother and sister work in Nairobi.
- We those 5. us
- Those us
ANSWERS ON VERBS
- seems – Linking verb
- watched – Action verb
- cheered – Action verb
- seems – Linking verb
- is – Linking verb
- aimed – Action verb
- blew – Action verb
- was – Linking verb
- is – Linking verb
- seems – Linking verb
Helping verb Main verb
- is singing
- has begun
- can travel
- had waited
- will be visiting
- have come
- must buy
- has chosen
- is hitting
10 will go
- will write
- will stop
- will decide
- shall practice
- will multiply
- started breathed
- added roamed
- trapped obeyed
- annoyed worried
- pitied fitted
- will/shall see will/shall develop
- will/shall go will/shall begin
- will/shall exist will/shall/consume
- will/shall introduce will/shall hunt
- will/shall bring will/shall become
- John has come here every year. – present perfect
- John has been coming here every year. – present perfect progressive
- John had come here every year. – past perfect
- John had been coming here every year. – past perfect progressive
- John will have come here every year. – future perfect
- John will have been coming here every year. – future perfect progressive.
- Jane is playing the guitar. – present progressive
- Jane has been playing the guitar. – present perfect progressive
- Jane was playing the guitar. – past progressive
- Jane had been playing the guitar. – past perfect progressive
- Jane will play the guitar. – future progressive
- Jane will have been playing the guitar. – future perfect progressive
- guard cleans
- stands study
- cross visits
- use wed
- feed run
Present Past Past participle
- prevent prevented prevented
- donate donated donated
- hurry hurried hurried
- worry worried worried
- train trained trained
- aid aided aided
- relieve relieved relieved
- share shared shared
- enrol enrolled enrolled
- save saved saved
Present Past Past participle
- arise arose arisen
- tear tore torn
- wear wore worn
- lay laid lain
- see saw seen
- fall fell fallen
- blow blew blown
- freeze froze frozen
- fly flew flown
- write wrote written
- presented – active was harvested – passive
- were taken – positive stressed – active
- ordered – active were urged – passive
- restored – passive is developing – active
- cleared – active was started – passive
Action verbs direct object
- carried his bag
- discussed the examination paper
- took a trip
- splashed me
- gave interesting facts
- searched the house
- cheered the team
- bought a camera
- admires Papa Shirandula
- viewed the shooting star
- Transitive Intransitive
- Transitive Transitive
- Intransitive Intransitive
- Transitive Transitive
- Intransitive Intransitive
- teach raises
- lies raises
- lie taught
- sits raises
- taught laid
ANSWERS ON ADJECTIVES
- largest vast
- Alaskan American, wild
- tallest huge
- tiny Australian
- small, scattered beautiful, Egyptian
- those Those
- Those This
- that This
- That those
- This Those
- Twenty What
- Few, our Whose
- all Which
- much what
- Numerous, this which
- A the
- a an
- the the
- The the
- an A
- many – songs
- Her, early – songs, her – fans
- Our, first – performance
- Her – coughing
- their, best – goal, ten – years
- quiet, serious
- calm, peaceful
- more beautiful 6. stranger
- funniest 7. more curious
- most enjoyable 8. higher
- most energetic 9. more creative
- most helpful 10. simpler
- Best Farther
- Bad Less or lesser
- Best Good
- Worse Better
- Least Most
- those these
- These those
- This This
- Those that
ANSWERS ON ADVERBS
Adverb What it indicates
- far where
- cheerful how
- downstairs where
- carefully, skilfully how
- extremely how
- curiously how
- soon when
- fully to what extent
- adorably how
- down where
- highly successful
- extremely cold
- quite difficult
- barely visible
- very old
- mysteriously secretive
- horribly mean
- totally exciting
- completely mad
- never punctual
- very gradually
- surprisingly quickly
- somewhat closer
- extremely irresponsibly
- totally carelessly
- quickly odd
- gradually reasonable
- good rapidly
- rapidly well
- strange well
- more often more swiftly
- more slowly most accurately
- quickly the longest
- more skilfully gracefully
- the fastest the most sweetly
ANSWERS ON PREPOSITIONS
- on – where
- for – purpose
- with – use
- in – place
- from – place
- down, for
- in ways
- to people
- In cities
- On farms
- across river
- to side
- at place
- by boat
- to problem
- over water
- her us
- me me
- us him
- her me
- us her
- outside – preposition up – adverb
- inside – adverb down – adverb
- in – preposition outside – adverb
- over – preposition by – adverb
- above – preposition out – adverb
- have Anybody 7. anybody 10. ever
- anyone anywhere 8. anyone
- ever had 9. Has
ANSWERS ON CONJUNCTIONS
- but but
- or and
- or or
- and and
- but but
- They arrived late because it was raining heavily.
- John worked hard as he wanted to buy a house.
- I won’t carry the umbrella for you need it.
- I drove the car madly since I was late for the meeting.
- He will come before the meeting ends.
- The vehicles either stopped for repairs or for fuel.
- The drivers knew they had either to travel more than fifty kilometres or endure harsh storms.
- Many people not only build their own homes but also grow their own food.
- Both men and women wanted to buy the pictures.
- Both maize and meat are important parts of a Kenyan’s diet.
ANSWERS ON INTERJECTIONS
- Say – wonderment
- Wow! – joy
- All right! – urgency
- Boy! – fear
- Oh – surprise
- crack quack
- roar pop
- tick lap
- growl boom
- chime hiss
- Lima bean – a broad, flat, pale-green or white bean used as a vegetable – named after Lima, the capital of Peru where it was grown first.
- Cardigan – a kind of a pullover or sweater that buttons down the front – named after J.T. Brudwell, the 7th Earl of Cardigan.
- Bloomer – a woman’s baggy and long garment for the lower body – named after Amelia Bloomer, an American women rights and temperance advocate.
- Canary birds – yellow songbirds – named after Canary Islands, Spain, where they are found in large numbers.
- Ferris wheel – a special wheel for an amusement park – named after the inventor G.W. Ferris.
- Guppy – the most popular freshwater tropical fish – named after R.J.L. Guppy, the man who introduced it in England.
- Cheddar – A firm Cheese – named after the English village of Cheddar, where it was first made.
- Quisling – a person who treacherously helps to prepare for enemy occupation of his own county, a traitor – named after Vidkum Quisling, a Norwegian politician.
- Silhouette – an outline portrait or profile – named after a French minister of finance, Etienne de Silhouette.
- Marxism – the political and economic theories of Karl Marx and Friedrich Engels – named after Karl Marx.
- Guillotine – a device used for carrying out executions – named after Dr. Joseph Guillotine, the designer.
- Macadam – small, broken stones that are used for making roads – named after John L. McAdam, a Scottish engineer who invented this kind of a road.
- Pasteurisation – the process of heating milk, wine, beer, or other liquids hot enough to kill harmful bacteria and to prevent or stop fermentation – named after Louis Pasteur, a French chemist, who invented the process.
- Watt – Unit of measuring electric power – named after James Watt, a Scottish engineer, who pioneered in the development of the steam engine.
- Ohm – a measure of electrical resistance – named after George S. Ohm, a German physicist.
- slithy – lithe + slimy breathalyser – breath + analyser
- chortle – chuckle + short cablegram – cable + telegram
- galumph – gallop + triumph camcorder – camera + recorder
- bash – bang + smash 9. edutainment – education + entertainment
- blog – web + log email – electronic + mail
- utra – beyond – ultraviolet, ultrasonic
- syn – in union – synchronize, symmetry
- sub – at a lower position – submarine, subsoil
- peri – round, about – perimeter
- out – surpassing, exceeding – outperform
- infra – below – infrared, infrastructure
- hypo – under – hypodermic, hypothermia
- hemi – half – hemisphere
- ex – previous – ex-wife, ex-policeman
- dia – across, through – diagonal
- hopeful – full of hope greenish – having green colour
- reader – a person who reads weary – tired
- childish – having manners of a child fearless – lacking fear
- greyish – having grey colour kindness – the quality of being kind
- playful – fond of playing washable – can be washed
- Pen – a device for writing
– an enclosure for sheep
- Tire – to make weary
– the rubber material on the wheel of an automobile or bicycle.
- Dove – past tense of dive
– a bird
- Wound – past tense of wind
– an injury.
- Mean – stingy
- Act – a dramatic performance
– doing something
- Arms – upper limbs
- Block – a building
- Box – a carton
– fight with gloves
- Bank – edge of a river
- a money depository
- in –inn knight – night
- heard – herd knows – nose
- horse – hoarse tick – tic
- key – quay rung – wrung
- need – knead sees – seize
- start – begin collect – gather
- come – arrive assist – help
- lengthy – long build – construct
- shattered – broken reply – answer
- fix – repair purchase – buy
- easy – hard sweet – sour
- whisper – yell stationary – mobile
- triumph – fail strength – weaken
- dull – interesting precious – worthless
- dangerous – safe naked – clothed
- at sea – confused
- has his hands full – is busy
- have a bone to pick with me – have a quarrel
- make heads or tails – make sense
- as easy as pie – very easy
- sick and tired – can’t stand, hate
- broke – to have no money
- dropped me a line yesterday – sent me a letter or email
- filled in for her – did her work while she was away
- in the red – losing money, not profitable
- a TV show – object
- Playful animals – subject
- a thrilling adventure – object
- an exciting activity – complement
- Twenty university students – subject
- a certified public health officer – complement
- Many of the soldiers – subject
- The old woman – subject, a heavy load – object
- a very complicated man – complement
- A devastating earthquake – subject
- should have taken must have seen
- must have seen do fear
- should have been told have made
- would have told would stampede
- must’ve visited could have read
- in Mombasa – adverbial modifying the verb found.
- around the country – adjectival modifying the noun companies.
- of the dog – adjectival modifying the noun barking.
- for hard work – adverbial modifying the verb bred.
- over water – adverbial modifying the verb built.
- of travel – adjectival modifying the noun miles.
- by bus – adverbial modifying the verb went.
to the market – adverbial modifying the verb went.
- At the market – adjectival modifying the noun.
- of colours clothes – adjectival modifying the noun display.
- with professional expertise – adverbial modifying the phrasal verb took through.
- golfing – complement
- protecting their status – object of the preposition in.
- Playing golf with a commoner – subject
- playing the game – direct object
- Training thoroughly – subject
- playing the game- object of preposition
- contesting with junior golfers – subject
- playing with the professionals – direct object
- Participating in international tournaments – subject
- Winning an international title – complement
- Defying all odds – present participial phrase – Kisoi Munyao
- Failing each time – present participial phrase – he
- Seeing his passion to scale the peak – present participial phrase – government
- making steady progress – present participial phrase – climber
- Pleased with his progress – past participial phrase – he
- determined to hast the Kenya flag – past participial phrase – climber
- Slipping on the snow – present participial phrase – Munyao
- worn from too many climbs – past participial phrase – rope
- slipping to the bottom of the cliff- present participial – bottles
- overcome with joy – past participial phrase – Munyao
- To climb Mt. Kenya –noun
- to climb the mountain – noun
- to try this risky climb – adjective modifying the noun Kenyans
- to make rapid progress – adverb modifying the verb helped
- with very limited climbing gear – adverb modifying the verb reach
- To reach Point Batian – noun
- to listen to Munyao – noun
- to finance much of his expedition – adverb modifying the verb forced
- to achieve his dream of hasting the flag – adverb modifying the verb worked
- to scale the tallest mountain in Kenya – adverb modifying the verb made.
- A huge storm was coming. – sentence
- Behind the wattle tree- sentence fragment
- After the earthquake – sentence fragment
- The wind broke several houses. – sentence
- Surprised by a loud noise – sentence fragment
- Winds of high speed – sentence fragment
- Rescue workers arrived. – sentence
- From different parts of the world – sentence fragment
- Many people were injured. – sentence
- In the weeks after the earthquake – sentence fragment
- pop music – object
- sweetly – adverb
- very quietly – adverbial phrase
- that book – object, three times – adverbial phrase
- to the bank- adverbial phrase
- her – indirect object, a present – direct object
- bitterly – adverb
- on his heels – adverbial phrase
- a list of the items to buy – object
- help – object
- a German citizen – subject complement
- a very arrogant lady – subject complement
- tired – subject complement
- green – object complement
- the queen – object complement
- stealing the mango – participial complement
- senseless – object complement
- a kind person – subject complement
- crying – participial complement
- trembling – participial complement
- Simple sentence
- Compound sentence
- Compound sentence
- Complex – whoever broke the mirror – noun clause
- Simple sentence
- Complex sentence – whom I met – adjectival clause
- Complex sentence – who stole the cow – adjectival clause
- Simple sentence
- Complex sentence – as though it affects their lives – adverbial clause
- Complex sentence – when people felt helpless about the world around them – adverbial clause.
- Complex sentence – that was designed for skiing – adjectival clause
- Simple sentence
- Simple sentence
- Complex sentence – because my dog loves crusts – adverbial clause
- Complex sentence – whenever lazy students whine – adverbial clause
- Complex sentence – whom Mrs. Ndegwa hit in the head with pieces of chalk – adjectival clause
- Complex sentence – who loves bread crusts – adjectival clause
- Complex sentence – that drinks too much milk – adjectival clause
- Complex sentence – what Aunt Lucy adds to her stew – noun clause
- Compound sentence
- Declarative Declarative
- Imperative Imperative/conditional
- Exclamatory Interrogative
- Conditional Interrogative
- Interrogative Declarative
- Exclamatory Exclamatory
- Exclamatory Conditional
- Declarative Imperative
- Imperative Declarative
- Conditional Exclamatory
- John said, “There was a terrible accident in Nairobi.”
- Petro added, “It happened in Umoja Estate.”
- “It involved a train and a bus,” added John.
- Sarah asked, “Did anyone die?”
- “No one died, but the railway line was destroyed,” answered Peter.
- “Over the months,” said John, “the railway line has been rebuilt.”
- “How lucky that no one died!” exclaimed Sarah.
- “I think they should put a railway-crossing sign board,” Petro said. “It would help bus drivers a lot.”
- “Or they should put bumps on both sides of the railway line to slow down the buses,” John suggested.
- “Who knows what might happen next?” wondered Sarah.
- Joel asked him if he saw the fire at the West Gate Mall.
- Njagi said that ten fire-engines had arrived in fifteen minutes.
- Patty exclaimed that it had destroyed an entire building.
- Joel said that one fire fighter had been slightly injured.
- Njagi said that several people working in the building had escaped unhurt.
- Patty wanted to know what would happen to them.
- Joel replied that other people were giving them food and clothes.
- Njagi added that they were resting in the school at that time.
- Patty exclaimed that those terrorists would finish them.
- Joel told them not to worry; they would be apprehended the following day.
Supply the appropriate question tags in the following sentences.
- The marriage caused a rupture in her relationship with her mother, didn’t it?
- She didn’t think anyone would be interested in a woman like her, did she?
- The troops are on standby in case chaos erupts, aren’t they?
- The Prime Minister must take a firm stand against extremists in his party, mustn’t he?
- I am the best so far, am I not?
- The amendments will strengthen the bill, won’t they?
- The new tax is tantamount to stealing from the poor, isn’t it?
- Please send all your remarks to Prof Kibwana as soon as possible, will you?
- She raised the gun and pulled the trigger, didn’t she?
- We need to learn to prioritize, don’t we?
- Get out of this room now, will you?
- We’ve made a reservation for next week, haven’t we?
- They couldn’t conceal the secret any more, could they?
- We shall not accept anything less, shall we?
- I am not a conman, am I?
- Jonny wanted to pursue a career in theatre, didn’t he?
- Sharon’s parents claim that the house is legally theirs, don’t they?
- I haven’t told you my name, have I?
- Come and visit us tomorrow, will you?
- Time will tell whether he made the right choice, won’t it?
- This play is a revision of Shakespeare’s earlier play, The Merchant of Venice.
- John Kiriamiti wrote My life in Crime.
- I admire women who vie for parliamentary seats.
- Bernard Mathenge and his wife travelled to America.
- My grandmother grew up in Witemere.
- The Nile River is one of the largest rivers in Africa.
- Each year tourists visit Maasai Mara National Park.
- The TV show Papa Shirandula has attracted many viewers.
- Uganda and Kenya have signed an agreement over the ownership of Migingo Islands.
- Our country got independence in December, 1963.
- On Christmas Day, all my relatives gathered at my home.
- Waiyaki is a fictional character in Ngugi wa Thiongo’s novel, The River Between.
- The city of Mombasa gets its water from River Tana.
- I would like to become a famous writer like Sidney Sheldon.
- They captured the stark beauty of Hell’s Gate National Park in their movie.
- He earned about three million dollars that year.
- You know who Jomo Kenyatta was, don’t you?
- What a wonderful and inspired leader he was!
- He was also a person who helped many people.
- Some people write stories, but other write poems.
- Try to write a concise, informative, and interesting letter.
- Also make sure that your letter has a heading, an inside address, a salutation, a body, a closing, and your signature.
- One of the most exciting modern developments, I believe, is the computer.
- Today is July 2, 2011. I will never forget this date.
- I have lived in Sagana, Kirinyaga County, since 2008
- Try submitting your work to the following publishers: Longhorn Publishers, Jomo Kenyatta Foundation, or Oxford University Press.
- Remember, a writing career requires the following traits: confidence, perseverance, and a thick skin!
- Long ago, people used hand–sharpened straws and reeds as pens.
- Fountain pens were invented in our great–grandparents’ time.
- Soft-tip pens and rolling-ball pens were invented twenty-five years ago.
- What would you do if you couldn’t build a house for yourself?
- You’d find someone who could build it for you, wouldn’t you?
- These archives are important to modern historians’ research.
- In his play Shreds of Tenderness, John Ruganda said, “People who have never lived through a coup d’etat have romantic ideas about it.”
- Mureithi said, “A short letter to a friend is an insult.”
SECTION 1 : PRONUNCIATION
PRONUNCIATION OF VOWEL SOUNDS
In English, we have various vowel sounds. We shall study them one after the other.
Consider the letter ‘a’ in the words below. Each says this sound.
- This sound is more like the sound you make when you are disgusted.
- The letters in boldface say this sound. Study them carefully.
- It is pronounced by having a much wider open mouth position.
- Inside your mouth is shown in the process of saying this sound.
- Examples of words bearing this sound include:
- This sound (referred to as schwa) is a short vowel sound.
- It mostly found in words containing letter ‘o’, for example,
- Also in words such as:
Examples of words containing this sound include:
- It is a long sound.
- The mouth doesn’t move while saying this sound, and it can be pronounced as long as you have breath.
- It is said in words such as:
- It is a short sound.
- The mouth doesn’t move.
- Each of the words below bear this sound:
- Long sound
- Said in words such as the ones below:
- Tweet etc.
It is a short sound.
In words such as:
- Blip etc.
The table below has columns with different sounds. Pronounce each of the words in the list and classify, according to the highlighted letter(s), under the column that bears that sound.
PRONUNCIATION OF CONSONANT SOUNDS
The sound /ᵗᶴ/
- Made by releasing the stopped air through your teeth by the `tip of your tongue.
- It is voiceless because vocal cords do not vibrate when you say it.
- Most words with letters ‘CH’ say this sound, for example,
- There are those with letters ‘TCH’ for example,
- Some are with letters ‘TU’, for example,
The Sound /ᵈᶾ/
- Pronounced the same way as /ᵗᶴ/. It is just that it is voiced.
- Letters representing this sound include:
- Letters ‘DG’
- Letter ‘J’
- Letters ‘DU’
- When letter ‘G represents the sound
It does that when it is in front of an ‘e’, ‘i’, or ‘y’
- Letters ‘GE’, for example,
- Letters ‘GI’, for example,
- Letters ‘GY’, for example,
The Sound /f/
- The sound is unvoiced or voiceless.
- Air is stopped by pushing the bottom lip and top teeth together. The air is then pushed through to produce this sound.
- The /f/ sound has the following letters saying it:
- Letter ‘F’
- Letters ‘PH’
- Letters ‘GH’
The Sound /v/
- The same mouth shape as /f/ is formed when pronouncing the sound /v/.
- It is voiced.
- Your top teeth is put on your bottom lip.
- Words bearing this sound include:
The Sound /d/
- /d/ is voiced. The vocal cords vibrate.
- The low of air is stopped at the front of the mouth by tongue.
- Practice speaking the words below:
- To make this sound, your tongue stops the flow of air at the front of your mouth.
- It is a voiceless/unvoiced sound.
- It said in words like:
The sound /k/
There are various letters that say the sound /k/. let’s study these letters.
- Letter ‘K’ always say this sound. Examples of words include:
- Letter ‘C’, for example,
- Colic etc.
- Letters ‘CK’ for example
- Back etc.
- Letter ‘Q’ for example,
- Letters ‘CH’, for example,
The Sound /g/
Found in words such as:
The Sound /ᶴ/
- This sound is unvoiced – only air passes through the mouth when said.
- The teeth are put together and the corners of the lips are brought together towards the middle.
- Most words with letters ‘sh’ this sound. For example,
- There are words with letters ‘CH’ that say this sound, for example,
- Some words with ‘SU’ also say it, for example,
- There are yet those with letters ‘TIO’, for example,
- Then there are those with letters ‘SIO’, for example,
- Pronounced with your tongue between your teeth.
- It is unvoiced.
- The words bearing this sound include:
- Unlike /ᶿ/, it is voiced.
- It also pronounced with tongue touching or between your teeth.
- It is found in such words as:
- This is a hissing sound like a snake.
- It is voiceless.
- The few rules for some of the common spellings that say the sound /s/ are:
- Letter ‘S’, for example,
- Letter ‘SC’, for example,
- Letter ‘X’, for example,
- Letter ‘C’, for example,
- The /z/ is like the sound of buzzing bees.
- It is voiced.
- Most words with the letter ‘Z’ say /z/, for example,
- There are those words with letter ‘S’ saying this sound, for example,
- The other group of words are those with letter ‘X’, for example,
- Words bearing this sound are borrowed from French.
- Pronounced in the same way as /ᶴ/ only that is voiced.
- The examples of words with this sound are:
Practice in sentences
- Measure the beige door on the garage.
- It was my decision to fly to Asia to seek treisure.
- Raise the back of your tongue to slightly touch the back teeth on both sides of your mouth. The centre part of the tongue remains lower to allow air to move over it.
- It is voiced.
- It is found in words with letter ‘R’ e.g.
- It is also said in words with letters ‘WR’ e.g.
- Your lips form a small, tight circle when making the sound /w/.
- Letters representing the /w/ sound are:
- Letter ‘W’
- Letters WH
- Letters ‘QU’
- Made by pressing the lips lightly.
- The words that follow contain the sound:
Read the sentence below pronouncing each word correctly and then group the words in their appropriate columns. Consider the highlighted letters.
The seven students took the first test for their driver’s licenceson Thursday.
Considering the pronunciation of highlighted letters, pick the odd word out.
- Judge, gesture, garage
- Jump, gift, geological
- Fungi, just, go
- Digit, game, gamble
- Hygiene, prodigy, entangle
- Gecko, gem, zoology
Pronounce each word correctly and then group it under the column containing the sound that the highlighted letter(s) bear.
Circle the letter(s) that say /f/ and underline those saying /v/ in the sentences below.
- Please forgive me for forgetting the leftover food.
- Save the four wolves that live in the cave.
- A diphthong is a combination of two vowel sounds.
- Some of the diphthongs include:
In words like;
Said in words such as:
The words containing this diphthong are:
- Change etc.
Write another word pronounced the same way as:
Study the pairs of words below carefully.
Fit – feet
Let – late
Van – fan
Pun – pan
- What do you notice? You realize that only one sound makes the pronunciation of one word distinct from the other. Each pair is called a minimal pair.
- A minimal pair is therefore a pair of words that vary by only one sound especially those that usually confuse learners, such as /l/ and /r/, /b/ and /p/, and many others.
Minimal Pairs of Vowel Sounds
Sound /i/ and /i:/
- Bid – bead
- Bit – beat
- Bitch – beach
- Bin – bean/ been
- Chip – cheap
- Fit – feat/ feet
- Fist – feast
- Fizz – fees
- Gin – gene
- Sin – seen/ scene
- Still – steal/ steel
- Sick – seek
- Is – ease
- Itch – each
- Risen – reason
- Piss – piece/ peace
- Pick – peak/ peek
- Mill – meal
Write another word in which either sound /i/ and /i:/ will make it vary from the one given.
Sounds /i/ and /e/
- Did – dead
- Disk – desk
- Built – belt
- Bit – bet
- Lipped – leapt
- Middle – meddle
- Fill – fell
- Bid – bed
- Bill – bell
- Lit – let
- List – lest
- Clinch – clench
Complete the table below with a word in which either the sound /e/ or /i/ brings the difference in pronunciation.
Sounds /e/ and /ei/
The following words vary by one having the vowel sound /e/ and the other a diphthong /ei/
- Wet – wait
- Bread – braid
- Fen – feign
- Bed – bade
- Get – gate/ gait
- Let – late
- Met – mate
- Lest – laced
- Tech – take
- West – waste/ waist
- When – wane
- Edge – age
- Gel – jail
- Lens – lanes
- Breast – braced
- Sent – saint
- Test – taste
- Best – based
- Wren – rain/ reign
- Led – laid
- Bled – blade
- Fed – fade
Each word below has another word in which either the sound /e/ or /ei/ will bring the distinction in pronunciation. Write that word.
Sounds /ᵆ/ and /ᶺ/
- Batter – butter
- Cap – cup
- Cat – cut
- Back – buck
- Brash – brush
- Dabble – double
- Rang – rung
- Track – truck
- Bad – bud
- Began – begun
- Bag – bug
- Pan – pun
- Drank – drunk
- Fan – fun
- Hat – hut
- Badge – budge
- Hang – hung
- Massed – must
- Rash – rush
- Sank – sunk
- Ran – run
- Swam – swum
- Ban – bun
- Ham – hum
Complete the table below with the minimal pair of the word. Consider the sound indicated in each column.
Sounds /ᵆ/ and /e/
look at the list below.
- Bad – bed
- And – end
- Had – head
- Jam – gem
- Pat – pet
- Sat – set
- Shall – shell
- Man –men
- Bag – beg
- Ham – hem
- Pan – pen
- Sad – said
- Manned – mend
- Land – lend
Complete the table with appropriate word that vary with the sound indicated in the column.
Minimal Pairs of /ɑ˸/ and /ᵌ˸/
- fast – first
- bath – berth/birth
- heart – hurt
- bard – bird
- car – cur
- card – curd
- guard – gird
- pa – per
- bar – bur
- barn – burn
- carve – curve
- dart – dirt
- par – purr
- park – perk
- star – stir
- arc – irk
Considering the sounds /ɑ˸/ and /ᵌ˸/, write the minimal pair of:
Minimal Pairs of /b/ and /v/
- bat – vat
- beer – veer
- bowl – vole
- bow – vow
- gibbon – given
- bale – veil
- bane – vein
- curb – curve
- bolt – volt
- bowl – vole
- broom – vroom
- dribble – drivel
- dub – dove
- jibe – jive
- rebel – revel
There is another word that will vary with the one written below with just one sound. Depending on the sounds /b/ and /v/, write that word.
Minimal pairs of /f/ and /v/
- Fan – van
- Off – of
- Fat – vat
- Fee – v
- Foul – vowel
- Fender – vendor
- Serf/Surf – serve
- Duff – dove
- Fie – vie
- Foal – vole
- Guff – guv
- Waif – waive
- Gif – give
- Life – live
- Safe – save
- Belief – believe
- Feel – veal
- Staff – starve
- Feign – vain/ vein
- Foist – voiced
- Fox – vox
- Reef – reeve
Write the minimal pair of the word below with consideration being either the sound /f/ or /v/.
Minimal Pairs of Sounds/s/ and /ᶿ/
- Mouse – mouth
- Sing – thing
- Face – faith
- Force – fourth
- Sick – thick
- Sink – think
- Sort – thought
- Tense – tenth
- Mass – math
- Miss – myth
- Pass – path
- Saw – thaw
- Seem – theme
- Some – thumb
- Song – thong
- Worse – worth
- Gross – growth
- Sigh – thigh
- Sin – thin
- Sum – thumb
- Piss – pith
- Sawn – thorn
- Symbol – thimble
- Sore – thaw
- Truce – truth
- Suds – thuds
- Sought – thought
- Moss – moth
- Sank – thank
- Sump – thump
Sounds /t/ and /d/
- Town – down
- Touch – Dutch
- Tear – dare
- Ten – den
- Tongue – dung
- Tart – dart
- Tech – deck
- Tin – din
- Toe – doe
- Tough – duff
- Tuck – duck
- Tab – dab
- Tank – dank
- Tick – dick
- Tine – dine
- Hat – had
- Spent – spend
- Too/ to/two – do
- Train – drain
- Tide – dyed/died
- Torn – dawn
- Teal – deal
- Teen – dean
- Tyre/tire – dire
- Toes – doze
- Tout – doubt
- Tug – dug
- Tale/ tail – dale
- Teed – deed
- Tier – deer
- Tint – dint
- Sheet – she’d
- Wait – weighed
- Tie – die
- Try – dry
- Tear – dear
- Tip – dip
- Tame – dame
- Team – deem
- Tent – dent
- Toast – dosed
- Tomb – doom
- Tower – dour
- Tux – ducks
- Tamp – damp
- Tell – dell
- Till – dill
- Tusk – dusk
- Sight – side
- Beat – bead
Each word below has another word in which all the sounds are the same except either the sound /t/ or /d/ is different. Write that word.
Minimal Pairs of /k/ and /g/
- Came – game
- Card – guard
- Cold – gold
- Clean – glean
- Crate – great
- Cap – gap
- Coast – ghost
- Kale – gale
- Can – gone
- Course – gorse
- Cram – gram
- Crepe – grape
- Crew – grew
- Croup – group
- Crow – grow
- Key – ghee
- K – gay
- Clamour – glamour
- Clad – glad
- Crane – grain
- Creed – greed
- Krill – grill
- Cunning – gunning
- Cab – gab
- Cape – gape
- Clam – glam
- Cord – gored
- Coup – goo
- Crate – grate
- Cuff – guff
- Clock – clog
- Dock – dog
- Frock – frog
- Muck – mug
- Brick – brig
- Broke – brogue
- Crack – crag
- Prick – prig
- Puck – pug
- Shack – shag
- Slack – slag
- Snuck – snug
- Stack – stag
- Whack – wag
- Wick – wig
- Jock – jog
- Lack – lag
- Luck – lug
- Beck – beg
- Cock – cog
- Hack – hag
- Pick – pig
Complete the table with appropriate word that only differs with one sound with the one given. Consider the sounds in the columns.
Words pronounced the same way but have different spellings and meanings are the homophones. The list below is English homophones.
- Accessary accessory
- Ad, add
- Ail, ale
- Air, heir
- Aisle, I’ll, isle
- All, awl
- Allowed, aloud
- Alms, arms
- Altar, alter
- Ante, anti
- Arc, ark
- Aural, oral
- Away, aweigh
- Awe, oar, or, ore
- Axel, axle
- Aye, eye, I
- Bail, bale
- Bait, bate
- Baize, bays
- Bald, bawled
- Ball, bawl
- Band, banned
- Bard, barred
- Bare, bear
- Bark, barque
- Baron, barren
- Base, bass
- Bay, bey
- Bazaar, bizarre
- Be, bee
- Beach, beech
- Bean, been
- Beat, beet
- Beau, bow
- Beer, bier
- Bell, belle
- Berry, bury
- Berth, birth
- Bight, bite, byte
- Billed, build
- Bitten, bittern
- Blew, blue
- Bloc, block
- Boar, bore
- Board, bored
- Boarder, border
- Bold, bawled
- Boos, booze
- Born, borne
- Bough, bow
- Boy, buoy
- Brae, bray
- Braid, brayed
- Braise, brays, braze
- Brake, break
- Bread, bred
- Brews, bruise
- Bridal, bridle
- Broach, brooch
- Bur, burr
- But, butt
- Buy, by, bye
- Buyer, byre
- Call, caul
- Canvas, canvass
- Cast, caste
- Caster, castor
- Caught, court
- Caw, core, corps
- Cede, seed
- Ceiling, sealing
- Censer, censor, sensor
- Cent, scent, sent
- Cereal, serial
- Cheap, cheep
- Check, cheque
- Choir, quire
- Chord, cord
- Cite, sight, site
- Clack, claque
- Clew, clue
- Climb, clime
- Close, cloze
- Coarse, course
- Coign, coin
- Colonel, kernel
- Complacent, complaisant
- Complement, compliment
- Coo, coup
- Cops, copse
- Council, counsel
- Cousin, cozen
- Creak, creek
- Crews, cruise
- Cue, queue
- Curb, kerb
- Currant, current
- Cymbol, symbol
- Dam, damn
- Days, daze
- Dear, deer
- Descent, dissent
- Desert, dessert
- Deviser, divisor
- Dew, due
- Die, dye
- Discreet, discrete
- Doe, dough
- Done, dun
- Douse, dowse
- Draft, draught
- Dual, duel
- Earn, urn
- Ewe, yew, you
- Faint, feint
- Fair, fare
- Farther, father
- Fate, fete
- Faun, fawn
- Fay, fey
- Faze, phase
- Feat, feet
- Ferrule, ferule
- Few, phew
- File, phial
- Find, fined
- Fir, fur
- Flair, flare
- Flaw, floor
- Flea, flee
- Flex, flecks
- Flew, flu, flue
- Floe, flow
- Flour, flower
- Foaled, fold
- For, fore, four
- Foreword, forward
- Fort, fought
- Forth, fourth
- Foul, fowl
- Franc, frank
- Freeze, frieze
- Friar, fryer
- Furs, furze
- Gait, gate
- Gamble, gambol
- Gays, gaze
- Genes, jeans
- Gild, guild
- Gilt, guilt
- Gnaw, nor
- Gneiss, nice
- Gorilla, guerrilla
- Grate, great
- Greave, grieve
- Greys, graze
- Groan, grown
- Guessed, guest
- Hail, hale
- Hair, hare
- Hall, haul
- Hangar, hanger
- Hart, heart
- Haw, hoar, whore
- Hay, hey
- Heal, heel, he’ll
- Hear, here
- Heard, herd
- He’d, heed
- Heroin, heroine
- Hew, hue
- Hi, high
- Higher, hire
- Him, hymn
- Ho, hoe
- Hoard, horde
- Hoarse, horse
- Holey, holy, wholly
- Hour, our
- Idle, idol
- In, inn
- Indict, indite
- It’s, its
- Jewel, joule
- Key, quay
- Knave, nave
- Knead, need
- Knew, new
- Knight, night
- Knit, nit
- Knob, nob
- Knock, nock
- Knot, not
- Know, no
- Knows, nose
- Laager, lager
- Lac, lack
- Lade, laid
- Lain, lane
- Lam, lamb
- Laps, lapse
- Larva, lava
- Lase, laze
- Law, lore
- Lay, ley
- Lea, lee
- Leach, leech
- Lead, led
- Leak, leek
- Lean, lien
- Lessen, lesson
- Levee, levy
- Liar, lyre
- Licker, liquor
- Lie, lye
- Lieu, loo
- Links, lynx
- Lo, low
- Load, lode
- Loan, lone
- Locks, lox
- Loop, loupe
- Loot, lute
- Made, maid
- Mail, male
- Main, mane
- Maize, maze
- Mall, maul
- Manna, manner
- Mantel, mantle
- Mare, mayor
- Mark, marque
- Marshal, martial
- Mask, masque
- Maw, more
- Me, mi
- Mean, mien
- Meat, meet, mete
- Medal, meddle
- Metal, mettle
- Meter, metre
- Might, mite
- Miner, minor
- Mind, mined
- Missed, mist
- Moat, mote
- Mode, mowed
- Moor, more
- Moose, mousse
- Morning, mourning
- Muscle, mussel
- Naval, navel
- Nay, neigh
- None, nun
- Od, odd
- Ode, owed
- Oh, owe
- One, won
- Packed, pact
- Pail, pale
- Pain, pane
- Pair, pare, pear
- Palate, palette, pallet
- Paten, pattern,
- Pause, paws, pores, pours
- Pawn, porn
- Pea, pee
- Peace, piece
- Peak, peek
- Peal, peel
- Pearl, purl
- Pedal, peddle
- Peer, pier
- Pi, pie
- Place, plaice
- Plain, plane
- Pleas, please
- Plum, plumb
- Pole, poll
- Practice, practise
- Praise, prays, preys
- Principal, principle
- Profit, prophet
- Quarts, quartz
- Quean, queen
- Rain, reign, rein
- Raise, rays, raze
- Rap, wrap
- Raw, roar
- Read, reed
- Read, red
- Real, reel
- Reek, wreak
- Rest, wrest
- Retch, wretch
- Review, revue
- Rheum, room
- Right, rite, write
- Ring, wring
- Road, rode
- Roe, row
- Role, roll
- Roux, rue
- Rood, rude
- Root, route
- Rose, rows
- Rota, rotor
- Rote, wrote
- Rough, ruff
- Rouse, rows
- Rung, wrung
- Rye, wry
- Saver, savour
- Spade, spayed
- Sale, sail
- Sane, seine
- Satire, satyr
- Sauce, source
- Saw, soar, sore
- Scene, seen
- Scull, skull
- Sea, see
- Seam, seem
- Sear, seer, sere
- Seas, sees, seize
- Sew, so, sow
- Shake, sheikh
- Shear, sheer
- Shoe, shoo
- Sic, sick
- Side, sighed
- Sign, sine
- Sink, synch
- Slay, sleigh
- Sloe, slow
- Sole, soul
- Some, sum
- Son, sun
- Sort, sought
- Tare, tear
- Teas, tease
- Tare, tear
- Tern,t urn
- There,their, they’re
- Throne, thrown
- Wain, wane
- Waist, waste
- Waive, wave
- Wall, waul
- War, wore
- Warn, worn
- Wart, wort
- Watt, what
- Wax, whacks
- Way, weigh
- We, wee
- Weak, week
- We’d, weed
- Weal, we’ll, wheel
- Weather, whether
- Weir, we’re
- Were, whirr
- Wet, whet
- Weald, wheeled
- Which, witch
- Whig, wig
- While, wile
- Whine, wine
- Whirl, whorl
- Whirled, world
- Whit, wit
- White, wight
- Who’s, whose
- Wood, would
- Yaw, yore, your, you’re
- Yoke, yolk
- You’ll, yule
Write two words pronounced the same way as each of the following words.
In English there are letters that are usually not pronounced in certain words. Let us have a look at these letters and words in which they are silent.
Identify the silent letter(s) in:
Not all syllables in a word are given equal emphasis. By the same token, not all words in a sentence are said with equal length.
The relative emphasis that may be given to certain syllables in a word, or certain words in a sentence is what we refer to as stress.
You say a syllable or a word is stressed when it is said louder or longer than the rest.
Stress is studied in two levels:
- Word level; and
- Sentence level.
Stress at the Word Level
A part of a certain word when said louder or longer then it is stressed.
Rules of Word Stress
- For two-syllable nouns and adjectives, stress the first, for example
Cloudy carton table
- For verbs with two syllables and prepositions, emphasize the second syllable, for example
- Words with three syllables.
- Those ending in –er, -ly, emphasis put on the first syllable, for example,
- Stress the first, for those ending in consonants and in –y, for example,
- Stress the last syllable if the word ends in –ee, -ese, -eer, -ique, -ette, for example,
- Look at the ones with the suffixes below, where stress is placed on the second,
Cial: judicial, commercial
-cian: musician, clinician
-tal : capital, recital
Stress is important in studying the heteronyms. A pair, or group of words is referred to as heteronym when those words are spelled the same way but have different pronunciation and meaning. We have two main categories of heteronyms:
- Noun- verb pairs; and
- Verb -and-adjective pairs.
We stress the first syllable if noun and the second if verb.
Examples of noun-and-verb pairs are included in the table below:
- Many factories produce the produce we import.
- Allan became a convert after deciding to convert to christianity.
Sentence stress is accent on certain words within a sentence.
Most sentences have two basic word types:
- Content words which are the key words carrying the sense or meaning- message.
- Structure words which just make the sentence grammatically correct. They give the sentence its structure.
Look at the sentence below:
Buy milk feeling tired.
Though the sentence is incomplete, you will probably understand the message in it. The four words are the content words. Verbs, nouns, adjectives, are content words.
You can add words to the sentence to have something like:
Will you buy me milk since I am feeling tired?
The words: will, you, me, since, I, are just meant to make the sentence correct grammatically. They can also be stressed to bring the intended meaning.
Now let’s study the sentence below:
Joan doesn’t think Akinyi stole my green skirt.
Each word in the sentence can be stressed to bring the meaning as illustrated in the table.
|Joan doesn’t think Akinyi stole my green skirt.||She doesn’t think that, but someone else does.|
|Joan doesn’t think Akinyi stole my green skirt.||It is not true that Joan thinks that.|
|Joan doesn’t thinkAkinyi stole my green skirt.||Joan doesn’t think that, she knows that.|
|Joan doesn’t think Akinyi stole my green skirt.||Not Akinyi, but someone else. Probably Njuguna or Adhiambo.|
|Joan doesn’t think Akinyistole my green skirt.||Joan thinks Akinyi did something to the green skirt, may be washed it.|
|Joan doesn’t think Akinyi stole my green skirt.||Joan thinks Akinyi stole someone else’s green skirt, but not mine.|
|Joan doesn’t think Akinyi stole my green skirt.||She thinks Akinyi stole my red skirt which is also missing.|
|Joan doesn’t think Akinyi stole my green skirt.||Joan thinks Akinyi stole my green shirt. She mispronounced the word.|
- The words that follow can be nouns or verbs dependingon the stressed syllable. Use each as both the verb and noun in a single sentence.
- Underline the part of the word in boldface you will stress in each of the following sentences.
- The boy has been asked to sert the de.sert.
- My handsome cortwilles.cort me to the dance.
- After updating my sume, I will re.sume my job search.
- They have to testin the annual Math con.test.
- If you vict me, I will remain a con.vict for 5 years.
Each word in the sentences below can be stressed to bring the meaning. What will be the meaning when each word is stressed?
- I love your sister’s handwriting.
- You came late today.
- It is the rise and fall of voice in speaking.
- Intonation is crucial for communication.
- In English there are basically two kinds of intonation: rising and
- We can use arrows to show the intanotion – whether rising or falling. ↘ represents falling intonation while ↗ represents the rising one.
- Falling intonation is when we lower our voice at the end of a sentence.
- This usually happens in:
- Statements, for example,
- I like↘
- It is nice working with ↘
- She travelled to↘
- W/H Questions
- What is your ↘name?
- Where do you ↘live?
- How old are↘ you?
- Who is this young↘ man?
- Get out ↘
- Give me the ↘
- Close your ↘
- Exclamatory sentences e.g.
- What a wonderful ↘present!
- How ↘nice of you
- When we lower our voice.
- Used in:
- General Questionsg.
Do you visit them↗ often?
Have you seen ↗her?
Are you ready to ↗start?
Could you give me a↗ pen, please?
- Alternative questionsg.
Do you want ↗coffee or ↘tea?
Does he speak↗ Kiswahili or ↘English?
- Before tag questionsg.
This is a beautiful ↘place, ↗isn’t it?
She knows↘ him,↗ doesn’t she?
↗One, ↗two,↗ three, ↗four,↘ five.
She bought ↗bread, ↗cheese, ↗oranges, and ↘apples.
Using an arrow, determine whether rising or falling intonation is used in the sentences.
- This music sounds good.
- I love watching horror movies.
- My sister’s name is Amina.
- Blue is my favourite colour.
- Is that tv good?
- Do you like that movie?
- Are you hungry?
- Get me my shoes.
- Study your lessons now.
- Are you insane?
- How many more hours before you are done with your work?
- Which novel is the best for you?
- He is a little bit nervous, isn’t he?
- You should listen to your parents’ advice.
- Did you finish your homework?
- Water is good for the body.
- This is good!
- What a crazy show.
SECTION 2: SHORT FORMS
A pun is a form of word play that suggests several meanings, by either exploiting the multiple meanings of a word, or substituting a word for another similar sounding word, the result of which is humorous.
A pun is also known as paronomasia.
There are two main types of puns:
- Homophonic puns
This is where a word is substituted for another similar sounding word or word pronounced almost in the same way . For example,
Fishermen are reel men.
Explanation: There is a twist on the word ‘reel’ which is originally supposed to be spelt ‘real’.
Can you now explain the pun in the following homophonic puns?
- What do sea monsters eat for lunch? Fish and ships.
- I am on a seafood diet. Every time I see food, I eat it.
- Did you about the Italian chef with terminal illness? He past away.
- Beauty is in the eye of the beer holder.
- What tea do hockey players drink? Penalttea
- What do ghosts serve for dessert? I scream.
- What did the tree sya to the autumn? Leaf me alone.
- What did the boy cat say to the girl cat on valentine’s day? You’re purr-fect for me.
- What day does an Easter egg hate the most? Fry-days.
- Why did the scientist install a knocker on his door? He wanted to win the No-bell prize!
- Homographic puns
Homographic pun is formed by using a word that has multiple meanings. You might not tell what exactly what the speaker means.
Rose is the flower of my life.
Explanation: The word ‘Rose’ is a female name. it could be the person the speaker loves.
It is also a type of flower.
The other examples are;
- My math teacher called me average. How mean!
- What do prisoners use to call each other? Cell phones.
- No matter how much you push the envelope, it’ll remain stationery.
- Have you ever tried to eat a clock? It’s very time consuming.
- A waist is a terrible thing to mind.
- I am reading a book about anti-gravity. It’s impossible to put down.
- What part of football ground is never the same? The changing room.
- I want to tell you a chemistry joke but I know I will not get a reaction.
- Why did the bee get married? Because he found his honey.
- Did you hear about the guy who got hit in the head with a can of soda? He was lucky it was a soft drink.
Features of Puns
Puns are characterized by;
- They are short.
- They are humorous.
Functions of Puns
They serve functions such as:
- Teaching pronunciation. For example, homophones.
- Enhancing creativity. One has to think in order to form their puns.
- When said one wonders what the speaker intends, the audience will laugh.
Explain the pun in:
- I used to be a banker but I lost interest.
- A bicycle can’t stand on its own because it is two-tired.
- I don’t trust these stairs because they are always up to something.
- Santa’s helpers are known as subordinate clauses.
- The man who drank battery acid got charged.
- A phrase or a sentence which is hard to speak fast because of alliteration or a sequence of nearly similar sounds is the tongue twister.
- It is worth noting that there is usually the use of mnemonic feature (sound devices or sound patterns) in the tongue twisters.
- Let us read the following tongue twisters fast.
- She sells sea shells on the sea shore.
- Any noise annoys an oyster but noisy noise annoys an oyster more.
- Kindly kittens knitting mittens keep kazooing in the king’s kitchen.
Sound Patterns in Tongue Twisters
- Read the tongue twister below fast.
She saw a fish on the seashore and I am sure the fish she saw on the sea shore was a saw-fish.
In the words: she, shore and sure, there is the repetition of the consonant sound /ᶴ/ at the beginning of the words. This is alliteration.
Alliteration is the repetition of the initial consonant sound in the nearby words.
Can you identify any other instance of alliteration in the above tongue twister?
- Read this other tongue twister and take note of the highlighted letters.
A skunk sat on a stump and thank the stump stunk, but the stump thank the skunk stunk.
The sound pattern here is consonance.
Consonance is the repetition of the inner consonant sound in the nearby words. An inner sound is that which comes after the first.
There is another instance of consonance. Can you illustrate it?
- In most tongue twisters, there is repetition of words or phrases. In (1) above, the words ‘saw’, ‘fish’, etc. have been repeated.
- Now pick out the words and phrases repeated in these tongue twisters.
- If you tell Tom to tell a tongue twister, his tongue will be twisted as tongue twister twists tongues.
- The sixth sick Sheik’s sixth sheep’s sick.
Let’s look at:
How much wood could a wood chopper chop, if a wood chopper could chop wood?
There is repetition of the /u:/ in the words; wood,could. This is assonance.
Assonance is the repetition of vowel sounds in the nearby words.
Features of Tongue Twisters
A tongue twister will have the following features:
- it is short and brief.
- It is alliterative.
Functions of Tongue Twisters
- They entertain. When one confuses the pronunciation of sounds, the audience will laugh.
- They teach pronunciation. We can, for example, learn the pronunciation of the sounds /f/ and /v/, /s/ and /ᶴ/ etc.
- Enhance creativity.
With illustrations, identify the sound patterns in:
- It’s not the cough that carries you off, it’s the coffin they carry you off in!
- If two witches were watching two watches, which witch would watch which watch?
- If a black bug bleeds black blood, what colour of blood does a blue bug bleed?
- I wish to wash my Irish watch.
Read the item below and then answer questions after it:
We surely shall see the sun shine soon.
- Identify the genre.
- Which two sounds has the item been used to teach?
- A riddle is a statement or a question with veiled meaning posed as a puzzle to be solved.
- The riddles play functions such as:
- They boost the creativity of kids.
- They entertain.
- Some examples of riddles include:
- What gets wetter and wetter the more it dries? A towel.
- What can you catch but not throw? A cold.
- What goes around the world but stays in a corner? A stamp.
- Give me food, and I will live; give me water, and I will die. What am I ? Fire.
- There are two parties involved: the audience (respondents) and the challenger(or the riddler).
- There are basically four stages of a riddling process, but at times six.
- The parts of the riddling process are:
- The riddlerchallenges the audience. The challenge differs from community to community. Some phrases used here include: riddle riddle!, I have a riddle! Etc.
- The respondents accept the challenge. The invitations include: riddle come! Throw it! Etc.
- The riddler then poses the riddle.
- The guess or guesses. The audience tries to come up with the solution. If they are unable, then the next part follows.
- The challenger asks for a prize. The prize can be a town or city, or any other thing. The challenger accepts the prize.
- Then the solution is given by the challenger.
Read the riddling convention below and then identify its six parts.
Challenger: I have a riddle!
Respondent: Throw it.
Challenger: What comes down but never goes up?
Challenger: no, try again.
Challenger: What will you give me if I offer the solution?
Respondent: You will have the entire fire to yourself.
Challenger: The answer is rain.
SECTION 3: SOUND PATTERNS IN POEMS
ASSONANCE AND ALLITERATION IN POEMS
Assonance and alliteration are sound patterns used in the poem. While assonance makes use of vowel sounds, alliteration makes use of consonant sounds. These sounds are repeated in the words close to one another.
Now read the poem below aloud by Steven Henderson.
Best, Boy, Believe
That, There, Two
Placed, Possible, Paths
Willing, Wanting, Waiting
Appraising, Asking, Applying
Lessons, Learned, Leads
Compass, Chosen, Course
Fools, Find, Fate
Sin, Street, Set
Driven, Determine, Destiny
Searching, Seeking, Seeing
Offering, Openly, Often
In the poem you realize there is repetition of the beginning consonant sounds. Look at the illustrations:
- Best, Boy, Believes – sound /b/ has been repeated.
- Placed, Possible, Paths – sound /p/ is repeated
This repetition of initial consonant sounds is alliteration. Illustrate other instances of alliteration in the poem.
There is also repetition of vowel sounds in the words close to each other. Examples we have seen are:
- Seeking, seeing – the sound /i:/ has been repeated.
- Openly, Often – the sound /e/ has been repeated.
This repetition on vowel sounds in the nearby words is assonance .
Pick out all the instances of assonance and alliteration in the poem that follows.
My Puppy Punched Me in the Eye
My puppy punched me in the eye
My rabbit whacked my ear
My ferret gave a frightful cry
And roundhouse kicked my rear
My lizard flipped me upside down
My kitten kicked my head
My hamster slammed me to the ground
And left me nearly dead
So my advice? Avoid regrets;
No matter what you do
Don’t ever let your family pets
Take lessons in kung Fu
Just like alliteration, consonance makes use of consonant sounds, only that these sounds are in in the inner parts of the words (middle or end, but not beggining).
There are illustrations for this in the two poems we have read. In the poem ‘My Puppy Punched me in the Eye’ there are the illustrations as follow.
- rabbit, wacked – the sound /t/ has been repeated.
- hamster slammed – there is repetition of the sound /m/
Note: Alliteration, assonance, and consonance don’t have to have the same letters – it is the sound that must be repeated.
Role Played by Alliteration, Assonance, and Consonance
- Provide musical rhythm.
- Make poem interesting.
- Make the poem easier to memorize.
Read the poem below and then identify, with illustrations, instances of alliteration, assonance and consonance.
BLACK BREWRIES BRAVENES
By John Chizuba
Black breweries braveness
In ink incorporative individualism
Those tinny tracers ticking Time
Be-little black braveness baselessly
Mirror my motion moves momentously
Directed diagonal deeply
Hurt humans heart heavy
Because better black believes
Dedication, determined destinies
Of our oddity, obviously occupied
We welcome world words with warrant
Blacks built braveness buxom butterflies
Enlightment enchanting ego enlarged
Decade braveness debut delightfully.
- Rhyming words are the words that sound the same at the ends. Examples of rhyming words are:
- When a poem has rhyming words at the end of its lines, these are called ‘end rhymes’. Look at these two lines:
That keep me locked up tight
All of the things that make me feel not right
The words ‘tight’ and ‘right’ rhyme.
- By contrast, internal rhyme/ middle rhyme, is a rhyme that occurs either when:
- Two or more rhyming words occur within the same line;
- Two or more rhyming words appear in the middle of two separate lines, or sometimes more;
- A word at the end of a line rhymes with one or more in the middle of the following line.
- Read the poem below and then try to identify the instances of rhyme in it.
Mystic travel time
Too endless islands in your mind
Tiny lights majestic and free
Open the skies soar me
Travel your minds unseen road
To mysterious lands secrets untold
The mountains valley lay quiet
As a shower carries away
The warmth of an evening breeze
Built from within a day
Heat dances shadows on the lakes fiery bay
Constructing temples where gods could play
Today is the finest piece
For tranquil emptiness
Suggestions of fluent sensations
Congregated illusions of masturbations
Sympathize the richness of the truth
Energize the expected thoughts of youth
Reading the poem aloud, we can point out several rhyming couplets. They include among others:
- Free and me
- Away and day
- Sensations and masturbations
- Truth and youth
Internal Rhyme in Separate Lines
Here is are two examples of pairs of lines with middle rhymes in separate lines.
I see a red boat that has a red flag
Just like my red coat and my little red pail
The words ‘boat’ and ‘coat’ rhyme.
I’d like to jump into the ocean
But don’t dump me instead.
The rhyming words are ‘jump’ and ‘dump’.
Now read the stanza below from the poem ‘The Raven’ and identify all the pairs of rhyming words.
Once upon a midnight dreary, while i
Pondered, weak and weary
Over many a quaint and curious volume of
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly
There came a tapping
As if someone gently rapping, rapping at
My chamber door
’’Tis some visitor,’’ I muttered, ’’tapping at
My chamber door;
Only this, and nothing more.’’
- This is a way of describing the pattern of the end rhymes in a poem.
- The points below will help you in reading and notating the rhyme scheme.
- Each new sound at the end of a line is given a letter.
- The letters start with ‘a’ , then ‘b’, and so on.
- If an end sound repeats the end sound of an earlier line, it gets the same letter as that earlier line.
- Here are four different stanzas, each with a different rhyme scheme, that can help you understand rhyme scheme.
- From Voices in My Head, by Ivor Davies
Suddenly a voice appears
I hear it in my mind
Within my head not in my ears
Not of the normal kind
The rhyme scheme is: abab
It is regular rhyme scheme as it is easy to predict when the sound will next appear.
- From Falling Raindrops’ Prayer for the Broken
I pray for the crying
For the hurt and the dying
For those burned and screaming
For each helper crying
The rhyme scheme is aaaaa
This too is regular.
- From the poem by Robert Broadbent.
Early or late,
Patient …can’t wait
Lost or your found
The world goes around
The rhyme scheme here is aabb. This is a Regular scheme
- From Happy Holidays by John Lumber
Oh how supreme!
When Santa comes
Then, next day,
I just can’t wait,
When the tree is all alight.
The rhyme scheme is abcdedd. This is irregular.
The irregular rhyme scheme occurs when you can’t predict when the end sound will be repeated.
- Rhyme creates rhythm in the poem.
- It also makes reading or reciting the poem interesting.
- The poem is also made easy to memorize.
Describe the rhyme scheme of the poem below by Robert Broadbent.
One Day at a Time
Happy or sad
Good days or bad
Cherry or down
The world goes around
Give up or try
Out going or shy
A smile or a frown,
The world goes around
Early or late,
Patient …can’t wait,
Lost or your found,
The world goes around
Out spoken, unsent
Tense or unwound,
The world goes around
All future days,
Are hidden in haze,
Don’t worry, just learn,
To let the world turn.
The incomplete poem below has the rhyme scheme: aabccbddebfe. Complete it with appropriate words.
Death did not take Paris silently
Rumbled the grave screaming _______________________
No child slept easy that _______________________
Twenty minutes of terror waking
Wee ones from sleep in cold sweats __________________________
Stealing their peaceful birthright.
Indelible imprints of ______________________
Ingrained in young psyches forever;
Post traumatic stress syndrome.
They may age, but they will not ____________________
The bloody death that evil begets
Shadows lurk in dreaming’s gloam.
(By Catie Lindsey)
RHYTHM IN POETRY
SECTION 4: MASTERY OF CONTENT
- A formal contest of argumentation between two sides is what debate is.
- Debate embodies the ideals of reasoned argument, and tolerance for divergent points of view.
- There are two sides in the debate: the proposition and the
- These two teams are presented with a resolution, such as, ‘Girls and Boys Should play in a mixed football team.’
- The teams are given enough preparation time.
- The team affirming the resolution speaks first.
- The opposing team then must refute the arguments offered by the affirming team and offer arguments rejecting the resolution.
- Both sides are given the opportunity to present their positions and to directly question the other team.
- Neutral judge (s) then evaluate the persuasiveness of the arguments and offer constructive feedback.
This is the time you have from when the motion is announced to the beginning of the debate. During this time:
- Research on the motion to get facts. The facts can be got from the teachers, other students, etc.
- Write notes on the facts. You can once in a while look at them during your presentation.
- Practice how to speak. Do it in front of friends and relatives, as well as in front of a mirror.
- If anxious, do some physical exercise. You can also take a deep breath just before your presentation.
- Dress decently.
Here are the points that will help you be successful during your points delivery:
- Deliver your points in a confident and persuasive way.
- Vary your tone to make you sound interesting. Listening to one tone is boring.
- Speak quite loudly to be comfortably heard by everyone in the room. Shouting does not win debates.
- Make eye contact with your audience, but keep shifting your gaze. Don’t stare at one person.
- Concisely and clearly express your points to be understood by your audience members.
- Provide a proof for each point you put across. If you don’t you will not earn a point.
- Speak slowly and enunciate your words. When you slow down your speech, you give your audience and the judge more time to process your strong points.
- Use gestures to elaborate on your points.
- Pause to divide your major points.
- Only supportive and argumentative heckling is permitted.
- Heckling is a brief phrase (about two words) or other non- verbal actions that are directed to the judge of the debate.
- They are reminder to the judge to pay close attention to the message immediately expressed by the speaker.
- There are two types of heckles:
- Those that are non-verbal, such as,
- Rapping the knuckles on the desktop.
- Rapping the palm on the desk.
- Stamping the feet
They are meant to encourage the judge to heed a particularly strong point being made by the speaker.
- Those that are verbal, such as,
- Point of information
They are said after standing up by one member of the opposing side. These are meant to alert the judge to a problem in the opposing side’s argument.
After you deliver your points during the debate, everyone claps for you. How could you have delivered your points to earn their heckling?
Have you ever attended the formal meetings where you are asked questions and are expected to respond to them? More than once you will be invited to attend interviews. You can also invite someone to interview. For this reason, you should some interview tips.
The two participants in an interview are the interviewer (at times a panel of interviewers), and the interviewee.
Tips for the Interviewees
Job Interview Preparations
If you really want to be considered for a particular job following an interview, you have to adequately prepare to succeed. The following are the preparations the interviewee would put in place before the interview:
- Contact your referees to alert them that you will be interviewed and they are likely to receive a call.
- Prepare your documents. Make sure they are neat and well arranged.
- Know the location where you are having the interview. It will help you know how long it will take you to reach there.
- Do some research about the organization.
- Prepare what to wear and how to groom.
- Anticipate potential questions and prepare answers correctly.
- Arrive early enough for the interview.
- Prepare questions to ask the interviewer at the end. It will show how much you are interested in working there.
During the Interview;
- Greet the interviewer.
- Knock on the door and wait for response before you enter. Shut the door behind you quietly.
- Wait until you are offered the seat before sitting.
- Sit or stand upright and look alert throughout.
- Make good eye contact with the interviewer to show you are honest.
- Explain your answers whenever possible and avoid answering questions with yes/no as answers.
- Answer questions honestly. Don’t ever lie!
Common Blunders you MUST Avoid
Avoid falling foul of the following:
- Turning up late for the interview.
- Dressing and grooming inappropriately.
- Giving simple yes/no as answers.
- Speaking negatively about your previous employer.
- Sitting before invited.
- Discussing time-off or money.
As an Interviewer
Before the Interview:
- Write down questions to ask.
- Call the prospective employee’s referees.
- Prepare the place for the interview.
- Alert the interviewee about the interview. Mention the time and place.
- Arrive early for the interview.
During the Interview:
- Allow them enough time to respond to questions.
- Encourage them to speak by, for example, nodding your head when they answer questions.
- Speak and ask questions politely. Be friendly but formal as much as you can.
- Make eye contact with the interviewee to show you are listening to them.
you are the secretary of journalism Club at Maembe Dodo Mixed School. On Friday you would like to interview your school Deputy Principal on the issue of Students’ Discipline.
- Write down any three questions you would ask him/her.
- Other than writing down questions to ask, how else would you prepare prepare for this day?
- State four things you would do as you interview him.
Read the conversation below and then answer questions after it.
Ms Naomi: Welcome to our Doctor’s office.
Mr. Josh: Nice to be here.
Ms Naomi: I see from your resume that you are a cardiologist with 10 years of practice.
Mr. Josh: That’s right.
Ms Naomi: This interview is just to get to know you a little and then there are follow up interviews. So what do you do in your free time?
Mr. Josh: I like golfing and swimming. I also like to read newspapers.
Ms Naomi:Why did you want to be a doctor?
Mr. Josh:Actually I love helping people get well. I think cardiology has made great strides recently and I would like to share my findings with others.
Ms Naomi:Have you written in any scientific journals so far?
Mr. Josh:Not yet. But hopefully soon.
Ms Naomi:OK, we’d like to learn more about you. Let’s go for lunch wwith our colleagues, if that’s OK.
Mr. Josh:That’s fine, I am free.
- What two things qualify Ms Naomi as a good interviewer?
- Identify two evidences of interview tips displayed by Mr. Josh.
Have you ever stood in front of a big group of people to present your talk? Well here we shall learn how to prepare your speech and deliver it effectively.
Preparation for Speech Delivery
There are steps any speaker should follow in preparation for presentation of speech. They include:
- Doing some research on the topic to present. Get the facts about the topic. If you do enough research, your confidence level will be boosted.
- Practice in front of a group of friends or relatives. This can also be done in front of a mirror, or videotaping your rehearsals. You will be able to correct your gestures, postures etc.
- Write down the points about the topic on a note pad. You can refer to them when giving the speech.
- Plan on how to groom and dress decently. You should appear presentable to feel confident.
Grabbing and Keeping Audience Attention
Your opening determines how long your audience will listen to your presentation. Of they are bored from the beginning; the chance that your message will effectively get across is very little.
The most commonly used methods are:
- Asking a question. The question should make them think about the topic. For example, ‘How many of you would like to be millionaires?’
- Stating an impressive fact connected to the topic of your presentation. For example: ‘About 30% of Kenyans are millionaires.’
- Telling a story closely connected to the topic. It should neither be too long nor intended to try to glorify the speaker. For example: “Dear audience, before I begin I would like to tell you a short story about Maina Wa Kamau became a millionaire. Don’t worry, it’s not too long. …..”
Other methods of beginning a speech are:
- Using humour
- Starting with a quote that ties with your topic.
- Using sound effect.
Presentation of Speech
There are various techniques of delivering speech. They are what will ensure understanding of your message. Some of these techniques include:
- Use gestures effectively to reinforce the words and ideas you are trying to communicate to your audience. For example, when talking about love, you can use your hands to form a cup shape to indicate how tiny something is.
- Make eye contact with your audience members to study their reactions to you. If you sense boredom, you need to improve and if you sense enthusiasm, it will help pump you up.
- Use movements to establish contact with your audience. Getting closer to them physically increases their attention and interest, as well as encouraging response if you are asking questions.
- Your posture should be upright. The way you conduct yourself on the platform will indicate you are relaxed and in control. Do not lean or slouch.
- Wear appropriate facial expressions to show feelings and emotions. Smile to show happiness, for example.
- Speak loud enough to be heard by all your audience members.
- Pronounce the words correctly and speak clearly for your message to be understood.
- Pause at key points to let the message sink.
Almost all speakers are nervous. Even the most experienced do. Fear of addressing a group is not wrong, but how we deal with it is what is possibly not good enough. Those speakers who seem relaxed and confident have learnt how to handle anxiety.
Symptoms of Nervous Speakers
An anxious speaker can be identified in case of:
- Shaking hands
- Sweating palms
- Dry mouth
- Rapid heartbeat
- Squeaky voice
- Knocking knees
- Facial flushes
- Watery eyes
- Mental confusions
Causes of Fear
- Past failures during presentation. Plan to succeed instead.
- Poor or insufficient preparation. Nothing gives you more confidence than being ready.
- Discomfort with your own body and movement.
Dealing with Anxiety
A speaker can try the suggestions below to deal with anxiety before and on the day of speech.
Before the day;
- Know your topic by doing adequate and thorough research. You will be sure of presenting accurate information and be able to answer questions asked by audience members.
- Practice delivering your speech several times. This helps you be sure of your organization of the main points.
On that day;
- Do some physical exercises like press ups, push walls, etc. to reduce anxiety.
- Use simple relaxation techniques like taking deep breath, tightening and relaxing your muscles, etc.
- Wear clothes that you feel confident in. when you feel good about of you feel, your confidence level is boosted. You don’t need to adjust your clothes or hair during your speech.
- Spot friendly faces in the crowd. These are people who give you positive feedback (e.g. nodding, smiling). Such faces give you encouragement to speak.
- Come up with ways to hide your anxiety. For example,
- When mouth goes dry, drink some water
- Incase of excessive sweating, wear clothes that will not allow your audience detect
- If your hands shake, use gestures to mask the shaking.
In the next three days, you are presenting a speech on the topic: Effects of HIV/AIDS.
- Write down any three ways you would prepare for the speech delivery.
- State the techniques you would employ to ensure your audience listens to you throughout and that they understand the message during the presentation.
Makufuli is presenting his speech. Your friend, Makwere claims that Makufuli is not confident.
- What could have warranted this claim?
- State four reasons that could be behind Makufuli’s state?
- Discussion is a process where exchange of ideas and opinions are debated upon in a group.
- A group which comprises a small number of people is given a topic to discuss.
Preparation for Group Discussion
Do the following before you start the discussion:
- Select/choose group leaders. Choose the secretary to write the points down and the chair to lead the discussions.
- Research round the topic to make sure you have the points. You can get the points from the sources including:
- Newspapers and magazines
- Friends, relatives and teachers
- Text books
- Arrive early for discussions. It is advisable you do so so that you start early and finish early.
- Gather writing materials – pen and note book.
- Prepare with questions to ask.
Participating in a Group Discussion
Remember the tips below for success during the discussion:
- Learn to listen to each other and respond to what other people have to say.
- Speak with moderation. What you say is usually more important than how much you say. Quality is needed rather than the quantity.
- Back up each point you put across. You can explain your points in a number of ways including:
- Providing facts or statistics to support it;
- Quoting expert opinion;
- Explain why said what you said; and
- Referring to your own experience.
- Stay calm and polite. Use polite words like ‘May I ….?, please …, etc.’
- Take notes of important words and ideas.
- Speak clearly.
- Speak loud enough to be heard by all the group members.
The Common Discussion Mistakes
Having learnt what you should do during the discussion, let us now learn what under no circumstances y do. You should never:
- Dominate the discussion;
- Interrupt abruptly;
- Be inaudible;
- Carry out mini-meetings; or
- Talk over each other.
You and your group members have been assigned the topic: ‘Responsibilities of a Good Citizen’ by your teacher of History and Government. You are supposed to discuss this before you give the presentation in two days.
- State three ways in which you would prepare before you start discussing the topic.
- How would you ensure your group members and yourself benefit from this discussion?
- From the heading, an oral report is spoken, not written.
- Being oral, it doesn’t mean writing is not involved. As part of preparation, you have to write notes on the topic or at least an outline of points.
- When asked to present an oral report you get the opportunity to practice your speaking skills.
- A spoken report has various elements including an introduction, body and conclusion.
Preparation for Oral Reports
You can prepare by:
- Researching on the topic. Get all the facts about what is known and unknown by your audience.
- Take notes on the facts about the topic. Choose your words appropriately in the process.
- Practice the report before presenting it. You may
- Practice in front of a mirror.
- Practice in front of friends or relatives.
- Videotape your rehearsals.
More practice is required if it has to be memorized.
- Plan on how to dress and groom.
- Prepare the visual aids if you plan to use the them. Select the appropriate chart, picture, etc. that will make abstract ideas concrete.
- Stand up straight. Your upper body should be held straight, but not stiff. Do not fidget.
- Make eye contact in order to look surer of yourself and to ensure your audience listens better.
- Vary your tone appropriately and speak clearly.
- Use gestures to make your points well understood and to keep the audience interested.
- Pause at key points to let the point sick.
- Speak loud enough for everyone to hear you.
- If you have visual aids use them appropriately.
You have seen thieves robbing your neighbor’s house. During this time you have your phone that you have used to capture one of the two robbers. The next day you are called at the police station to report on what occurred.
- State any three ways you would prepare to deliver this oral report.
- What three details would you include in your report?
- How would you deliver the report to ensure the information is understood?
SECTION 5: ETIQUETTE
Etiquette is the rules that indicate the proper and polite manner to behave.
USE OF COURTEOUS LANGUAGE
- When one uses courteous language, he/she uses a language that is very polite and polished to show respect.
- At no time should you allow yourself be rude, ill-mannered, impolite, inconsiderate, or even thoughtless.
- Being and remaining polite will go a long way in building relationships.
- To show politeness and respect:
- Use the word please in request;
- Say thank you to those who help or compliment you.
- Start your requests or interrogatives beginning with words such as can, could, may, will, or would.
- Say excuse me when you interrupt other people or intrude into their time or privacy.
- Use question tags.
- In this section, we shall learn the words and phrases that show respect.
- We use it when you want someone to do something for you. For example: Can you pass that cup, please?
- also used when you want something from someone. For example: Lend me ten shillings, please.
- Thank you
- Use it whenever someone does something for you.
- Use it when someone commends you.
- Say it any time you inconvenience someone.
- Say it when step on someone’s toes, etc.
- Also when someone asks you something you cannot do.
- Excuse me
To introduce a request to someone, or to get past someone, use this phrase. For example
Excuse me, can you show me where Amina lives?
- Pardon me
Almost as ‘excuse me’
Jennifer has gone to the shop to buy a bar of soap. The shopkeeper tells her to be polite the next time she comes to buy from him. Showing where, which polite phrases could Jennifer have failed to use?
Read the dialogue below and then explain how Jacinta expresses politeness.
John: I would like to send this letter to japan by airmail, how much is the charge?
Jacinta: It’s one pound, do you need extra stamps?
John: I do, I have been also expecting a package from New-York. Here is my identity card and receipt.
Jacinta: Would you mind signing this form? Here is the package.
John:Finally, I would like to send this registered letter to London.
Jacinta:Please fill in the complete address in capital letters.
Telephone etiquette are the rules that demonstrate the proper and polite way to use your phone/telephone.
It starts from how you prepare for phone calls to when you end the call.
Preparation for Phone Call
The following should be done before placing a call:
- Ensure you have enough time. It will not auger well to suddenly end the conversation because of insufficient airtime.
- Go to a place where there is silence. Too much noise will distract your attention.
- Think through exactly what you want to say. Write it down if possible so you don’t forget what to say or ask and look as though you didn’t have anything to say.
Tips to Display When Making a Call
Whether at work, at home, or on your mobile phone, remember to display the tips below at all times:
- Identify yourself at the beginning of the call.
- Speak clearly and slowly especially when leaving the message.
- Speak with a low tone of voice. Be sure to know how loud you may be.
- Always end with a pleasantry, for example,’ Have a nice day.’
- Let the caller hang up first.
- Stay away from others while talking on the phone. They don’t need to hear your private conversation.
What to Avoid
- Avoid being distracted by other activities while speaking. Some of these activities include:
- Rustling papers
- Speaking with someone
- Working on the computer
- Avoid allowing interruptions to occur during the conversation.
- Do not engage in an argument with the caller.
- Talking too loudly.
Not at these Places
The following are places you should not make a call. You should even have your cell phone in a silent mode or switch it off altogether.
- Waiting rooms
- Places of worship
- Live performances
Here we shall focus on majorly business telephone conversations. It should be noted that there are patterns that are followed; but not all will follow this rigid pattern. The six patterns include:
- The phone is answered by someone who asks if he/she can help.
- The caller makes a request either to be connected to someone or for information.
- The caller is connected, given information or told that that person is not present at the moment.
- The caller is asked to leave a message if the person who is requested for is not in.
- The caller leaves a message or asks other questions.
- The phone call finishes.
Read the telephone conversation below and then answer questions that follow.
Pauline: (a form two student, Wajanja School) ring ring… ring ring …
Secretary: Hello, Wajanja School, this is Ms Esther speaking. How may I be of help to you?
Pauline: Yes, this is Pauline Karanja a form two student calling. May I speak to the principal, please?
Secretary: I am afraid MsKaluma is not in the office at the moment. Would you like to leave a message?
Pauline: I would really want, thanks. When she comes back, tell her I wanted to ask for one day permission. My brother is sick and I would like to request her that I report one day after the opening day. It is I who will be left with my siblings as the brother goes to the hospital. That is all.
Secretary: Sorry for that, I wish him quick recovery. I would give her the message as soon.
Pauline:I would be grateful madam. Thanks again.
Pauline:Welcome Pauline. Just ensure you report as stated here.
Secretary: Ok have a nice day madam.
Pauline:You too have a perfect day. Goodbye
- With examples, outline the patterns of telephone conversation in above.
- Identify evidences of telephone etiquette tips displayed by Pauline in the conversation above.
Your sibling is very sick. You are planning to make a doctor a phone call to come to your home to provide medication.
- State any three preparations you would put in place before making this important call.
- Give four bad habits you would avoid when making this call.
Joan has just called the parent to ask them to pay the school fee. Unfortunately, the parent is not happy with the way she has made the call. Identify any four telephone etiquette tips shecould have failed to display.
APPROPRIATE CHOICE OF REGISTER
- Register denotes the choice of language, whether that be formal or informal.
- It is the choosing of appropriate language for the context.
- There are factors that determine the language we use.
- It is important to select the right language for the right situation.
- The choice of register is affected by:
- The setting of the speech;
- The topic of the speech;
- The relationship that exists between the speakers; and
- The age.
There are words we use depending on the field. There are those we use in the field of medicine, in the field of law etc. they are also those that we use at home when talking to family members. A chemist, for example, will ask for ‘sodium chloride’ while at the laboratory, while at home she will request for ‘salt’. At work place, people tend to use formal language while informal language at home.
- If, for example, you want to ask for something valuable from a brother you would say: ‘I was wondering if you could lend me….’. This is a formal language even though it is your family member you are talking to.
- When offering your boss tea or coffee, you will still use formal language for example: ‘Would you mind being served tea or coffee? ’ and to a friend you will say: ‘Tea or coffee?’
There are words you use when speaking to different people in different situations. More often than not, an intimate couple will use words like ‘darling’, ‘honey’, etc. These words cannot be used to address your colleague at work place; or even your pastor.
There are ways to speak to a child and those of speaking to adults. To a baby, we use words like ‘popopoo’ while to an adult ‘long call’, etc.
The Words used in Different Fields
Field of Medicine
Some words used in the hospitals, clinics and other health stations include: X-ray, syringe, paracetamol, doctor, nurse, mortuary, patient, etc.
Lockup, cell, bond, etc.
Aircraft, flight, air hostess, etc.
Computer, laptop, CPU, Monitor, software, hardcopy, hard disk, etc.
The words used by the teachers, students and others at school are: chalk, ruler, blackboard, senior teacher, deputy principal, dean of studies, etc.
Technical terms used by lawyers and in the courts of law include: adult probation, affidavit, alimony, Amicus Curiae brief, annulment, appeal, appellant, appellee, arrest, plaintiff, defendant, dismissal, oath, revocation hearing, learned friend, etc.
Read the conversation below and then answer question that follow.
Caller:Is this the Credex?
Receptionist:Yes, how may I be of help to you?
Caller:It’s Dorothy calling.
Receptionist:Oh, Dorothy! How is the going?
Caller: Lunch today?
Receptionist: Of course..
Caller: what time then?
Receptionist: After I have seen the deputy principal. There are packets of chalk I am supposed to deliver.
- Giving the reasons, where is the Credex?
- What is the relationship between the caller and the receptionist?
- Explain the formality of the language the receptionist and the caller use.
- Give illustrations for (c) above.
Being a cyclical process, turn taking starts with one person speaking, and continues as the speaker gives control to the next individual. This is then offered to another person and then back to the original speaker. Orderly conversation has to take place.
A turn is a crucial element within turn taking. Each person takes turn within the conversation – either in person or on phone.
Achieving Smooth Turn Taking
It is achieved with:
- Using specific polite phrases, for example, those for,
- Accepting the turn when offered it
- Keeping your turn
- Getting other people speaking, etc.
- Using gestures to indicate you have completed what you are saying or that you want to say something. You drop your arm when you have completed and raise it when you want to say something.
- Varying the intonation to show you have or have not finished speaking.
- Use noises like ‘uming’ and ‘ahing’ while thinking so as not to lose your turn.
Turn Taking Cues
There are various ways of signaling a finished turn. They might be indicated when the current speaker:
- Asks a question, for example, ‘ Did you want to add anything?’
- Trails off (his/her voice becomes weaker to the extent you may not hear his words)
- Indicates they are done speaking with a closing statement, for example, ‘That’s all I wanted to say.’or ’I think I have made my point.’
- Uses marker words (those that allow the other a chance to speak), for example, ‘well…’ or ‘so…’
- Drops the pitch or volume of their voice at the end of their utterance. This is the use of falling intonation.
- Uses gestures to signal that another can contribute.
Violations in Turn-Taking
There are five well known turn-taking violations in a conversation. They are: interruptions, overlaps, grabbing the floor, hogging the floor, and silence. Do you know what they really are? If you don’t, read the explanations for the violations in that order.
- Inhibiting the speaker from finishing their sentences during their turn.
- Talking at the same time as the current speaker. This is interruptive overlap. However, cooperative overlap is encouraged as it shows you are interested in the message.
- Interrupting and then taking over the turn before being offered it.
- Taking over the floor and ignoring other people’s attempt to take the floor.
- Remaining without saying anything for quite some time.
The List of Turn-Taking Phrase
- Before I forget, …
- I don’t like to interrupt, but ….
- I wouldn’t usually interrupt, but …
- I’m afraid I have to stop you there.
- I will let you finish in a minute/second/moment ….
- May I interrupt?
To accept the turn when offered it;
- I won’t take long.
- What I wanted to say was …
To stop other people from interrupting you during your turn use;
- I have just one more point to make
- I have nearly finished
- Before you have your say …
- I haven’t quite finished my point yet
- I know you’re dying to jump in, but….
To offer the turn to another use;
- …., right?
- But that’s enough from me.
- Can you give me your thoughts on …?
- Does anyone want to say anything before I move on?
- How about you?
To take the turn back after being interrupted;
- As I was saying (before I was interrupted)
- To get back on topic…
- Carrying on from where we left on…
Note: The list is endless, and you can come up with other appropriate phrases.
INTERRUPTING AND DISAGREEING POLITELY
- English is a polite language. For this reason, it is advisable to indirectly contradict a person. It is rude to do it directly.
- Although conversation is a two way street, interrupting a speaker is usually regarded as rude. However, at times you need to interrupt. When then can one interrupt?
- You can only interrupt to:
- Ask a question;
- Make a correction;
- Offer an opinion; and
- Ask for clarification.
In this section, we shall learn how to interrupt and disagree politely.
Steps to Interrupting
It is important to take note of the following steps when interrupting a speaker during a conversation or during a discussion:
- Signal to the speaker that you have something to contribute by implementing the body language such as:
- Making eye contact;
- Slightly raising your hand;
- Sitting forward on your seat;
- Quietly clearing your throat; or
- Coughing quietly.
- Wait patiently until the speaker pauses or incase of a lull in the conversation.
- Speak clearly using polite phrases. These phrases will be learnt later.
- Wait for the speaker to acknowledge your request to speak before you do so.
- After you have spoken, thank the speaker and allow them continue.
- Take a deep breath and calm yourself before interrupting when you feel angry or annoyed.
- Take care to use low tone of voice.
- Unnecessary interruptions.
- Finishing speaker’s sentences.
- Interrupting to correct the speaker unnecessarily.
- Speaking harshly or using disparaging comments.
Phrases used in Interruption
Below is the list of phrases which you can use to politely interrupt someone:
- May I say something here?
- I am sorry to interrupt, but …
- Excuse me, may I add to that…?
- Do you mind if I jump in here?
- Before we move on to the next point, may I add …?
- Sorry, I didn’t catch that, is it possible to repeat the last point?
- I don’t mean to intrude ….
- Sorry to butt in, but …
- Would this be a good time to ….?
- Excuse the interruption, but …
- I hate to interrupt, but …
- I know it is rude to interrupt, but …
How to Disagree Politely
The tips that follow will help you handle disagreements without annoying the other person in a discussion or discussion:
- Actively listen to the other person’s point of view. This helps in showing respect and understanding of the other person’s perspective.
- Stay calm even if you feel angry.
- Acknowledge the other person’s point of view before the buts.
- Disagree only with the person’s idea but not he person.
- Use polite phrases to respectfully disagree.
- Speak in a low tone.
- Give some credence to the other person’s point of view before challenging it. For example, say: It’s partly true that I bought this phone at a cheap price, but …
Disagreeing Politely Expressions
- I agree up to a point, but …
- I see your point, but …
- That’s partly true, but …
- I’m not so sure about that.
- That’s not entirely true
- I am sorry to disagree with you, but …
- I’m afraid I have to disagree
- I must take issue with you on that
- It’s unjustifiable to say that..
- This is the process of discussion between towo or more disputants, aimed at finding the solution to a common problem.
- It is a method by which people settle their differences.
- It is also the process by which a compromise or agreement is reached while avoiding arguiment.
- There could be a difference between people with different aims or intentions, especially in business or politics. When this happens, they have to reach an agreement.
- Negotiation skills will be helpful when:
- Haggling over the price of something;
- Negotiating with your employer e.g. for higher salary;
- Negotiating for peace/ solving conflict;
- Negotiating for better services; etc.
Stages Of Negotiation
- Preparation comes first. During this time, ensure all the pertinent facts of the situation is known in order to clarify your own position. It will help in avoiding wasting time unnecessarily.
- Discussion then follows. This is the time to ask questions, listen and make things easier to understand. At times, it is helpful to take notes to record all points put forward.
- Negotiate towards a win-win outcome. Each party has to be satisfied at the end of the process.
- Agreement comes after understanding both sides’ viewpoints and considering them.
- Implement the course of action. If for example, paying the amount, it has to be paid.
Points Every Negotiator Should Consider
- Ask questions, confirm and summarise. These three activities ensure that there is no confusion on what each party wants.
- Acknowledge each other’s point of view. Show that you have listened to and understood their perspective. Show appreciation of the other person’s point of view.
- Listen attentively to the other person.
- Respond to negative comments and complaints. Avoid confrontational language.
- Behave in a confident way, but don’t be rude. Make polite but firm requests.
- Give options/alternatives. You can both win if you recognise that you share a common ground.
You are planning to buy a new model car.
- Write down three relevant facts you would want to know before going to buy the car.
- State any three hints for the negotiators you would consider when haggling over the price of that car.
PAYING ATTENTION (LISTENING)
Listening is different from hearing. When you listen, you understand both the verbal and non verbal information.
Why should you listen? You listen:
- To obtain information
- To understand the message
- For enjoyment
- To learn
In this section, we shall learn the techniques of active listening.
Techniques of Paying Attention
In order to benefit from a talk as the listener, you should take note of the following key tips:
- keep an open mind. Listen without judging the speaker or mentally criticizing their message they pass. You just have to hold your criticism and withhold judgment.
- Familiarize yourself with the topic under discussion. Audience tend to listen more if they have idea of the topic being discussed. How then can one familiarize himself/ herself with the subject? They can do this by:
- Reading from the books.
- Reading from the internet.
- Asking for ideas from those who know.
- Use the speaker responses to encourage the speaker to continue speaking. You will also get the information you need if you do so. Some of the speaker responses we use include:
- Slightly nodding the head, but occasionally.
- Smile occasionally.
- Using small verbal comments like yes, uh huh, mmmh, I see, etc.
- Reflecting back e.g. you said …
- Take notes on the important points. This can in itself be a distractor. You should therefore know when to and when not to take notes.
- Listen for the main ideas. These are the most important points the speaker wants to get across and are repeated several times.
- Wait for the speaker to pause before asking a clarifying question. Just hold back.
- Avoid distractions. Don’t let your mind wander or be distracted by other people’s activities. If the room is too cold or too hot get the solution to that situation if possible.
- Sit properly. Sit upright
- Make eye contact with the speaker. when you do this you will be able to understand the non verbal messages too.
Signs of Inactive Audience
You can easily tell whether your audience listens or not. The inattentive listeners tend to posses the following characteristics:
- Playing with their hair
- Looking at a clock or watch
- Picking their fingernails
- Passing small pieces of paper to one another
- Shifting from seat to seat
Barriers to Effective Listening
There are many things that get in the way of listening and you should avoid these bad habits so as to become a more effective listener. These factors that inhibit active listening include;
- Lack of interest in the topic being discussed.
- Unfamiliarity with the topic under discussion.
- One might fear being asked a question and in the process fail to look at the speaker.
- In case of noise the listeners might not get what the speaker is saying.
MwangiMwaniki, the author of one of the set text you study, is coming to your school to give a talk on the themes in his novel.
- How would you prepare for this big day?
- State what you would do to ensure you benefit from the talk during the presentation.
SECTION 6: ORAL NARRATIVES
FEATURES OF ORAL NARRATIVES
Oral narratives have many features. The main ones include:
- Use of opening formula. This is used to indicate the beginning of a story. It also remove the audience from the world of reality and take them to the world of fantasy. A world of fantasy is where bones speak, a king is the lion, etc. some commonly used opening formula phrases are ‘ a long time ago…’, ‘once upon a time’, ‘there once was ….’, and ‘long, long ago…’
- Use of Closing formula. It makes the end of a story. It also removes the audience from the world of fantasy and take them back to the world of reality. Here are examples of closing formulae:
- And that is why …
- And there ends my story.
- From then onwards …
- To come to the end of my story …
- Use of idiophones. There is the use of words that imitate the movement or sounds made by characters in the story. For example,
- The bees flew buzz buzzbuzz.
- The woman laughed hahahahaha.
- The branch was cut kacha.
- A word, phrase, a song, or even a sentence can occur more than once in a story. The repetition is meant to bring out the meaning.
- Use of songs. Many narratives have songs. The songs perform the following functions:
- Brings out the character traits.
- Brings out the theme.
- To entertain.
- Use of suspense. Here the audience is left wondering what will happen next.
- There is also the use of dialogue. A character speaks directly to the other. Dialogue is used to bring out the theme, character traits as well as to develop the plot of the story.
TECHNIQUES OF STORY TELLING
- There are several story telling devices a narrator can decide to use when delivering an oral narrative.
- The techniques a narrator can use include:
- Use of gestures. Gestures are meant to reinforce the idea. For example when talking about a character going, you can stretch your arm to show that.
- Altering your facial expressions according to the emotion and feelings in the story. Do not frown when the emotion happy.
- Varying the tone of your voice depending on what you are saying and who is saying it. The tone should be low when for example a small animal talks, and high when a big one speaks.
- Changing the pace of narration. There are those unimportant details that can be said faster.
- Involving the audience in the narration. Asking them to join you when singing will be okay.
- Use of mimicry. Here a narrator imitates the walking style of a character, etc.
SECTION 7: NON VERBAL SKILLS IN LISTENING AND SPEAKING
IMPORTANCE OF RESPECTING PERSONAL SPACE
A personal space is an imaginary area between a person and their surrounding area. This space makes the person feel comfortable and should therefore not be encroached.
The distance can exist at work, at home and in our social circles.
The personal space varies depending on factors such as:
- Familiarity with the person.
Why Respect People’s personal Space?
- To make them feel comfortable.
- To maintain good relationships.
- To enhance listening. Especially during a talk.
General Personal Space Rules
The personal space guidelines below will help enhance listening and speaking:
- Respectfully keep your distance if you walk into a room and see two people in private conversation.
- Pay attention to your volume when you speak, whether on the phone or in person, to ensure you don’t distract attention of others.
- Maintain physical space at table and chair rows so the people around you have enough room to write, raise their hands, etc.
- Be mindful of amount of perfume or cologne you wear as if it is in excess it might distract others.
- Never lean on the other person’s shoulder unless invited to.
- Don’t eavesdrop on another person’s phone conversation. In case you overhear details of the conversation, keep it confidential.
Dealing with Space Intrusion
Depending on the nature of the intrusion, you would deal with space encroachment in different ways. Here are the steps of dealing with a person who leans on your shoulder:
- Lean away or take a step back away from the person hoping they would take a hint.
- Come right out and say you feel discomfort being too close.
- Explain why you need more space. You can for example tell them you need more space to write.
You have attended a one day seminar. The person sitting next to you is said to be intruding your personal space. What four personal space guidelines could this person have failed to follow?
- The face you wear is a great component of emotion and feeling.
- The various facial expressions represent various feelings. A smile for example, represents joy, while a scowl, anger.
- When speaking or listening, flex your facial muscles as appropriate. You can’t smile when the speaker is talking about incidence of tragedy. Doleful face will do.
- Remember your face is like a switch and will keep changing depending on the feelings and emotions.
Some words for Describing Facial Expressions
|Emotion/ Feeling||Facial Expression|
|Happy and peaceful||Beatific|
|Angry or unhappy||Black, grave|
- A speaker will always move part of their body especially a hand, arm or the head when speaking.
- This is done to express the idea or meaning.
- As a speaker you can use illustrators of what you are saying using your hands. They will add mental image to what is being conveyed. For example,
- Headshake to mean ‘no’.
- Use hands to form the shape of heart to express love.
- Use the hands to form the bow shape to show the big belly. Etc.
- Did you know you can use your eyes to listen? We use the eyes to listen to another person’s body language – gesture included.
- An eye is a powerful tool of effective communication.
- Let us learn some situations that demand different uses of the eyes. For example:
- When arguing, hold your gaze.
- When deferring, lower your eyes.
- When loving someone, stare in the pool of their eyes.
- Making eye contact is very vital as you can get the feedback from your listeners, on your message. When you notice they are bored you know you have to make adjustments and when they show enthusiasm then this will help in pumping you up.
- Too much eye contact by the listener indicate they have interest in either you or the information you are putting across.
- Speakers tend to look up:
- At the end of their utterances.
- To indicate to the others to have their turn.
- Speakers tend to look away when:
- Talking non-fluently.
- Not sure of the topic.
- A curtsy is a polite gesture of respect or reverence made chiefly by women and girls.
- It is the female equivalent of males’ bowing.
When to Bow or Make Curtsy
- To end a performance.
- To show respect.
How to Curtsy
- Lower your head.
- Hold your skirt at the edges with both hands.
- Place your right foot behind the left.
- Bend your knees outward
APPERANCE AND GROOMING
How you look when speaking in front of an audience or when going for an interview is very crucial. It both boosts your confidence level and build respect.
Your appearance involves the clothes you wear as well as how you groom.
Grooming on the hand involves what you do to your body other than the clothing. Your personal hygiene is the simplest term that can replace the term grooming.
The kind of clothe you wear will depend on such factors as:
- Your occupation;
- Location; and
- Your preference.
Guidelines for Clothing
- Your cloth should fit comfortably.
- The cloth should also be neat and clean.
- Wear the right cloth for appropriate occasion.
Read the grooming checklist below.
- Your hair should be lean, trimmed and neatly arranged.
- If you are a man, ensure your facial hair is freshly shaved.
- Fingernails should be neat, clean and trimmed.
- Teeth should brushed and with fresh breath.
- Body should be freshly showered.
- If a woman, use make up sparingly and be natural looking.
- Use perfumes/aftershave/colognes sparingly or even use non at all.
Ayub has been invited to an interview. State four grooming mistakes he should be careful to avoid.
SECTION 8: INSTRUCTIONS TO FRIENDS AND RELATIVES
GIVING AND RECEIVING INSTRUCTIONS
Giving clear instructions is one of those things that seems easy to do but actually are more complex.
The tips that follow will help you in giving clear instructions:
- Get the attention of the other person. Be sure you have the attention of the person, or people, you are giving instruction. This is one way in which you will tell whether they are listening. Do you know ways to get the attention of a child or even a group of people in some noisy place? Here are some suggestions;
- Ring the bell
- Bang the table/door
- Switch off the lights
- Clear your throat
- Blow the whistle, and many others.
- Use simple language that can be understood. Avoid using too much vocabulary.
- Break instructions down and deliver them in steps. Give one instruction at any given time to avoid any confusion.
- Repeat instructions to them.
- Be loud enough.
- Give instruction beginning with a verb i.e. use the imperative forms. For example: Take three cups…
- Ask them repeat instructions to you in their own words.
- Make eye contact.
You are a mother. On a certain day, very early in the morning, you want to go to pay your friend a visit. Before you leave, you have decided to leave your 6-year old son instructions on how to prepare his lunch.
- Make a list of methods you would use to get his attention before giving instructions.
- Other than getting his attention, how else would you ensure you leave him clear and understandable instructions?
Once in a while people will ask you to lead them to their destination. If it is not possible to do this then the best thing to do will be to give them directions to those places. The most important thing to do is to be brief and clear.
Let us learn the steps to giving the clear directions.
Steps to Giving Clear Directions
- Give the direction with few turns. Remember shortcuts may be faster, but at times are complicated especially in the case of many turns.
- Indicate the turns—whether left or right. Tell them to turn a left or a right. For those who know cardinal points, you can use north, south, west, or east.
- Mention the landmarks, for example, a large clock, a school, a river, e.t.c. Tell them: `you will see a blue church…
- Specify distance. Offer the Ballpark Figures (rough estimates of the time and length of travel). The three ways of specifying the distance are:
- Telling them how many streets or buildings to pass;
- Giving them distance in kilometres, metres , or miles;and
- Telling them how much time in minutes or hours it will take them to reach their destination.
- Warn them about any confusing parts of the route. For example, let them know of a narrow road that people normally miss.
- Say which side of the street or road their destination is on. There could be two houses that look alike on either sides of road. Tell them: My house is on the right.
- Repeat directions to them and allow them repeat back directions to you.
- Draw a simplified map if paper and pencil or pen are available.
- Give them a drop-dead point. This is the place when if you reach you know you are lost and have to make a U-turn. For example, tell them: if you see a big black billboard you have gone too far.
Your church is in the same estate you live. Your mother goes to a different church. On this particular Sunday she has decided to join you later in your church. For that reason, she asks you to give her the direction to the church.
- Mention three ways you would specify her the distance from your home to the church.
- Apart from specifying the distance, how else would you ensure she reaches the church when giving her the direction?
ANSWERS ON ORAL SKILLS
PRONUNCIATION OF VOWEL SOUNDS
PRONUNCIATION OF CONSONANT SOUNDS
Sound /s/: seven, students, first, test, licences
Sound /z/ : driver’s, licences, Thursday
Sound /ᶴ/ :tissue, passion, ocean, cautious, solution, pressure, Persian, chef, sure, precious
Sound /ᶾ/ :Caucasian, division, leisure, vision, casual, conclusion, television, decision, collision, exposure
Sound /f/ : forgive, for, forgetting, leftover, food
Sound /v/ :forgive, leftover
- bee, be
- see, sea
- aye, eye
- pee, pea
- tea, tee
- ewe, you
- Bamburi cement was used to cement the bridge.
- After leaving us his address, he will address those students over there.
- He had to permit us to do business since we had a business permit.
- The content of the letter will content the man.
- Sert, de
- es, cort
- re, sume
- test, con
- vict, con
- I – no one else loves your sister’s handwriting.
- Love – I don’t hate your sister’s handwriting
- Your – Not any other person’s sister
- Sister’s – not your brother’s or your uncle’s
- Handwriting – It I only your sister’s handwriting I love, not her walking style or her cooking.
- You – all the others came early
- Came – you did not leave late
- Late – Not early
- Yesterday – the rest of the days you came early
- Interest has multiple meanings. Interest is the state of wanting to do something. It is also amount paid at a particular rate for money borrowed from the bank.
- There is a twist on the word ‘tired’ which is originally supposed to be spelt ‘tyred.’
- Up to something means doing something wrong. It also means the stairs could be leading him to another floor.
- The word ‘Santa’s’ has been twisted. It is supposed to be spelt ‘sentence’.
- Charged means passing electric current. It also means being formally accused in the court.
- Alliteration: cough, carries, coffin, carry
- Consonance: cough, off, coffin, off
- Repetition: off
- Alliteration: witches, were, watching, watches, which, witch, would, watch, which, watch
- Consonance: witches, watching, watches, which, witch, watch, which, watch
- Repetition: watch, which, two
- Alliteration: black, bug, bleeds, black, blood, blue, bug, bleed
- Consonance: bleeds, blood, bleed
- Repetition: black, blood, bug repeated
- Sibilance: wish, wash, Irish …. Or consonance
- Alliteration: wish, wash, watch
- It is a tongue twister.
- The sound /s/ and /ᶴ/
- Challenge – I have a riddle!
- Acceptance – Throw it.
- Pose/ Riddle – What comes down but never goes up?
- Guesses – wind, bird
- Prize – Fire
- Solution – rain
ALLITERATION AND ASSONANCE IN POEMS
- Black Breweries braveness /b/
- Tracers ticking Time /t/
- Black braveness baselessly /b/
- Mirror, my emotion moves momentarily /m/
- And others
- In ink incorporative individualism
- Directed diagonal
- Little, black, baselessly /l/
- Black believes /l/
- Determined, destinies /t/
I could have:
- Spoken confidently
- Varied my tone appropriately
- Spoken loud enough to be heard by everyone
- Made my contact with my audience
- Provided proofs for my points in persuasive way.
- Spoken slowly and enunciated words correctly
- Used gestures that reinforced my ideas
- Paused at key points
- How would you handle cases of indiscipline among the students?
- Will you appoint prefects in charge of discipline?
- What punishment will you mete out on those who are indiscipline? Etc.
- I would;
- Inform him about the interview.
- Arrive early for the interview.
- Prepare the place to interview him..
- I would;
- Allow him enough time to respond to the questions.
- encourage him to speak by slightly nodding my head.
- Make eye contact with him.
- Ms Naomi is a good interviewer because;
- She warmly welcomes Mr. Josh, hence making him feel free to speak.
- She also offers to take Mr. Josh along with her for lunch.
- Explains her answers well.
- Is honest. When asked whether he has written in any scientific journal he says not yet.
- I would;
- Do some research on the topic.
- Practice adequately.
- Write down my points.
- Dress and groom well.
- I would;
- Effectively use gestures to reinforce my ideas.
- Make eye contact with my audience.
- Wear appropriate facial expressions.
- Speak loud enough to be heard by all.
- Pronounce my words correctly.
- Pause at key points to let the information sink.
- Speak slowly to allow my points be processed.
- Makufuli could have:
- Had shaking hands
- Sweating palms
- Dry mouth
- Rapid heartbeat
- Squeaky voice
- Knocking knees, etc
- Makufuli probably:
- Could have dressed uncomfortably.
- Could have failed to research on the topic.
- Could have failed the first time and could have feared to fail again.
- Could not have rehearsed his speech.
- Choose group leaders.
- Do research on the topic to get facts.
- Write the points.
- Arrive early for the discussion.
- Gather writing materials to use.
- Ensure each point given is backed up.
- Ensure members speak with moderation.
- Speak clearly.
- Take notes on what is discussed.
- Ensure members listen to each other.
- Prepare the photo to show the police.
- Ask the neighbours questions to get more facts.
- Practice how to report.
- I would:
- Vary my tone appropriately.
- Make eye contact with the officer.
- Use gestures effectively.
- Pause at key points.
- Speak loud enough enough.
- Speak slowly.
USE OF COURTEOUS LANGUAGE
- Failed to use ‘thank you’ after being given the bar of soap.
- Failed to use ‘please’ when asking to be given the bar of soap.
- Failed to use ‘excuse me’ to get the shopkeeper’s attention.
- She has used ‘please’ when asking John to fill the address.
- She has used ‘would’ in asking questions.
- The patterns include;
- Answering of the phone – Hello, …
- Request — May I speak to the principal, please?
- The caller is told the principal is not in the office at the moment.
- Pauline is asked to leave a message.
- Pauline leaves the message for the principal.
- The call finishes with pleasantry – have a nice day.
- She introduces herself to the secretary.
- She ends the call with pleasantry.
- She speaks politely to the secretary.
- I would:
- Ensure I have adequate airtime.
- Go to a quiet place.
- Jot down what to tell the doctor.
- Ensure the place to make the call has network.
- I would avoid:
- Talking too loudly
- Engaging in an argument with the doctor.
- Interrupting the doctor.
- Being distracted by other activities.
Joan could have failed to:
- Identify herself at the beginning of the call.
- Speak clearly and slowly.
- Speak with a low tone of voice.
- End the call with a pleasantry.
APPROPRIATE CHOICE OF REGISTER
- Credex is a school. There is the use of words such as ‘pieces of chalk’, and the ‘deputy principal’.
- The two are friends .
- At first it is formal. But when the receptionist realizes it is Dorothy calling it becomes informal.
Is this the credex?
How is the going?
- Know the prices elsewhere
- Whether I can get discount
- Whether the purchase of the car comes with any offer
- Whether the car is in high demand
- Whether the car is readily available. Etc.
- I would:
- Make polite but firm requests.
- Ask questions and summarise to avoid confusions.
- Respond to negative comments from the seller.
- Give alternatives.
- Show appreciation of the seller’s viewpoint.
- Listen attentively to the seller.
- Ensure we arrive at a clear agreement acceptable to both of us.
- I would:
- Read the set book to remind myself of the themes.
- Ensure I sit where I would be comfortable.
- Prepare questions to ask him.
- I would:
- Take down the main points.
- Make eye contact with the author.
- Hold back until the speaker pauses before I interrupt.
- Encourage the speaker to continue speaking by using some responses.
- Avoid interruptions.
IMPORTANCE OF RESPECTING PERSONAL SPACE
He could have failed to:
- Speak in a low voice during the talk.
- Maintain the physical distance between the two of us at the table.
- Resist leaning on my shoulder or chest.
- Resist eavesdropping on my phone conversation.
APPEARANCE AND GROOMING
I would avoid:
- Dirty unarranged hair
- Dirty fingernails
- Foul breath teeth
- Unbathed body
- Excess make up
- Excess perfumes or colognes
GIVING AND RECEIVING INSTRUCTIONS
- Switch off the lights in his room
- Call his name
- Bang the table beside him
- Clap my hands
- Use simple language
- Give one instruction at a time
- Be loud enough
- Repeat the instruction.
- Ask him if he has any question
- Ask him repeat instructions back to me.
- Make eye contact.
- Giving the distance in metres.
- Telling her time in minutes.
- Telling her the number of streets to pass.
- I would give her the route with minimal turns.
- I would indicate the turns.
- Mention the landmarks.
- Warn her about any confusing part of the route.
- Have her repeat directions back to me.
- Draw a simplified map.
BETRAYAL IN THE CITY BY FRANCIS IMBUGA
Francis David Imbuga (1947- November 2013) was a literary giant. For three decades, he taught at Kenyatta University where he was the Directo
r of Quality Assurance, Chairman of the Department of Literature and the Dean of the Faculty of Arts. Francis Imbuga studied at Alliance High School in the 1960’s where he wrote and acted a play, which won the National Beat Actor’s Award.
Professor Imbuga published several plays including Betrayal in the City 1976, The Successor 1979, Man of Kafira 1984, Aminata 1988, and The Return of Mgofu 2011. He has also authored two novels, Shrine of Tears, 1993 and Miracle of Remera 2005.
In his works, he addresses the problems of independent and post colonial African states, family relations, tradition, religion, change among other issues affecting our society today.
Imbuga passed on in the year 2013.
The title, Betrayal in the City, fits the events of the play as this is what the people of Kafira have to live with daily.
Betrayal in the City reflects the political, cultural and personal betrayal witnessed in the fictitious state of Kafira. Boss, the head of state, works alongside other strong cronies and sycophants like Mulili, Tumbo, Kabito, and Nicodemo to let down their citizens through: abuse of power, negligence of duty, senseless killings, and inefficiency, to create a nation of hopelessness, corruption and disregard to the local citizens hence betrayal in the nation of
The government is run by scandalous and corrupt leaders and under whose leadership the hopes of independence for the people of Kafira are dashed.
Betrayal in the City is characterized by all sorts of ills in society, namely: murder, misrule, tribalism, Nepotism, corruption, highhanded-ness, inefficiency, incompetence and a general atmosphere of rebellion and defiance.
As the title suggests, betrayal breeds suspicion and intolerance and this creates a highly unstable environment for decent and safe living. One cannot safely determine who to trust with information hence the general feeling of betrayal among the people.
Betrayal in the City was first published in 1976 at a time when African states had attained their independence and were undergoing serious problems in adjusting to self-rule.
The play is set in the fictional country of Kafira, ruled by Boss, who surrounds himself with kinsmen like Mulili and the sharing-the-pie government officials, Tumbo, Kabito and Nicodemo.
Betrayal in the city is a perfect example of many failed states in the third world, and especially in Africa.
Betrayal in the City is a political play. The writer examines the problems of independence and freedom in post-colonial states in Africa. The play talks about military regimes that were common in the African continent after independence. Many of such regimes were later overthrown by coup de tats. Francis Imbuga’s major concern is betrayal at two levels: at a personal and government level. Betrayal in the City shows a decay in morals and greed for power. Doga and Nina lament as they mourn their dead son, Adika and wish to perform a ritual for their dead son. This effort is hampered by express directi-ons from the government brought by Mulili and Jere claiming that the ritual should not go on in the interest of peace; but Doga and Nina are adamant. Their only remaining son, Jusper, is imprisoned. This shows
us what is happening in Kafira – the corruption, injustice and oppression of the people.
Critics of the government are not tolerated. Jere and Mosese are henceforth put into prison over false charges. They both suffer the pain of the government’s betrayal.
Government officials make use of any opportunity to make money through unfair means.
Tumbo for instance declares Jusper the winner of the play writing competition and awards him the winner’s prize money. One third of the six hundred pounds to finance the play-writing competition is given to Jusper and his girlfriend, Regina; and the remaining two thirds to put records straight emphasizing that everything is being done in strict confidence.
Despite all this, Jusper vows to revenge someday even if it means going it alone since he knows that a University student is not a very welcome person in Kafira and is looked at as a nuisance.
Government officials first think of what they are going to benefit before deliberating on matters of state. What first preoccupies their mind is how much they are going to gain.
Being a relative to Boss gives Mulili a chance to despise his colleagues in service. Mulili falsely accuses Kabito knowing that Boss will believe what he says since he has been made to be his eyes and ears on the ground as he puts it. He is also favoured by Boss in many ways.
The semi-literate Mulili sometimes completely misunderstands and distorts what is said to him and yet threatens to act basing on the strength of that misunderstanding.
Boss’ trust of those who advise him especially Mulili makes him give unbearable directives to silence those presumably against his government including the simple old couple who were innocent. Boss also tries to take advantage of Regina forcefully. Such scandals speak unfavorably of the Head of State. Nicodemo and Tumbo discuss the state of affairs and how people are being killed: “We have no choice. Like caged animals, we move, but only inside the cage. It has become infectious-the desire to eliminate others…” This clearly implies that there are serious consequences of criticizing the government’s plans.
The play within the play, Betrayal in the City, brings about the desired change that everybody has been waiting for. The rehearsal for the play intended to entertain the visiting Head of state becomes a real confrontation arrived at effortlessly by Jusper, Mosese, and Jere; taking everyone by surprise.
SUMMARY OF THE ACTS
The scene is at Adika’s grave, which is surrounded by dry thorny branches.
It is early morning. Doga and Nina are next to the grave of their late son, Adika who was murdered. Doga suspects that their son’s murderer still lives among them. His suspicion arises from the smell of petrol at the site and the fact that the grave has a crack, an indication
that the murderer’s intention was to burn Adika’s body to rid himself of Adika’s ghost haunting him in future. Their only living son, Jusper, was to guard the grave but this morning he cannot be traced. Nina is fearful for her son, who, according to them is not of sound mind.
Her fears are heightened when she is made to notice that there seems to have been a struggle at the grave. Doga wants to cover up the crack on the grave so that the shaving ceremony planned to take place later in the day goes on but Nina will hear none of this. After much persuasion from the husband, she gives in and goes for soil to cover up the crack.
From Doga’s speech, we hear that Adika was shot four times during a demonstration by Kafira University students who were protesting that most of the Kafira university lectures are expatriates. During Adika’s burial, his brother, Jusper, was taken away by govern-ment agents for being a ‘threat’ to peace-loving people and after retu-rning three months later, he is never the same.
Jusper enters, dressed in a red gown. He is obviously disturbed by his brother’s death. He is seen addressing his dead brother. Nina comes back with soil and finds Jusper at the grave.
Doga is hiding behind the bush. She tells Jusper to go and remove the red gown as the shaving ceremony was about to start. Jusper tells his mother that he cannot put on a clean shirt after the murder and proceeds to show his parents the crack (river) where he threw the person he murdered but all this time, they think he is mad. Nina even, innocently and ignorantly, tells him to go and confess the act! Jusper has killed Chagaga, the person who is suspected to have killed Adika, and thrown his body in the river but Doga and Nina think he is mad.
The couple’s prayerful mood is interrupted by Jere and Mulili who inform them that the ceremony has been cancelled to their utter disappointment. They also inform the couple that Jusper has killed Chagaga and confessed the crime. The two order the couple to leave the grave as it no longer belongs to them. Jere tries to persuade Mulili to allow Doga and Nina to conduct the ceremony but Mulili will hear none of this despite the fact that Jere had helped hide Mulili’s secret when he allowed Mustafa an inmate to escape. Mulili is boss’s (head of
state) cousin and since he has been promised a reward for being loyal to Boss, he does not wish to disappoint boss. Mulili even threatens Jere that should he allow the ceremony to take place, he (Mulili) will not keep quiet. Before they leave the stage, they are involved in a violent confrontation where Jere shoots at Mulili who dives off stage.
REVISION QUESTIONS FOR THE SCENE SCENE ONE
- Where is this scene set?
- What are the two characters Doga and Nina doing at the grave and whose grave is it.
- What is so strange about the grave’s condition that morning?
- Where was Jusper when the grave was being meddled with?
- What are we told about Jusper’s condition and why is it so?
- Who killed Adika and what is his relationship with the sub chief?
- What led to the death of Adika and how was he killed?
- According to Jusper what is the difference between the sun Jupiter and Jusper and what does it represent
- Jusper tells Nina that he is going to address the rally, which rally is he talking about and what does he want to tell them.
- Why does Mulili and Jere come to the grave side and what is their mission?
- Mulili speaks poor / non-standard English , what does this tell us about him.
- What does Mulili and Jere reveal to Doga and Nina about Jusper
- Why does Jere support the old couple’s continuing with the ceremony?
- Mulili had allowed Mustafa to escape, what does this tell us about justice in Kafira.
- Identify at least two character traits of Mulili, Doga, Nina, Jere and Jusper f rom this scene.
- Identify the aspects of style used in this scene: identify the proverbs, instances of irony, use of cross purpose, monologue, and puns among others.
- What are some of the themes brought out in this scene?
- Identify the instances of Betrayal brought out in this scene
ACTION TAKES PLACE IN A PRISON CELL
Jere is pushed by an askari into a cell where he finds Mosese. Askari is fed up with Jere’s inquisitive nature. He tells him that he is mad and that his inquisitive nature will not be
entertained in prison and that it would make his life unbearable in prison. Jere is later informed that all inmates have to go through rehabilitation in order to be re-integrated in the society. He does not have any mental illness that would make him need any rehabilitation therefore he sarcastically tells askari that he is truly grateful and that he didn’t know they took such pains. It is apparent that Mosese has decided to remain silent because silence can as well be a weapon but should he be so, the prisons authorities will demand an explanation as to what is he keeping quiet about. It is not surprising that the prison authorities do not entertain prisoners asking questions.
Askari informs Mosese that Jusper has been released from jail but has nothing to go back to since his parents were found dead in their hut. When Jere and Mosese are left alone, Jere informs Mosese of the events of the previous night where he and his cellmate decided to play Pilate and Jesus. According to Jere, Pilate had humiliated Jesus by stripping him and caning him on the buttocks. Jere’s co-actor cried out after receiving the canes, alerting the prison authorities who moved Jere to the cell where Mosese was after stripping him and caning him.
The two cellmates (Jere and Mosese) take time to know each other.
Mosese tells Jere how he ended up in prison. He had attended Adika’s funeral where he saw firsthand the oppression by the political elite. He couldn’t keep quiet, so after telling the politicians his mind, he was arrested and charged with trumped up charges of possessing drugs. He changes his name because the person who implicated him with the drugs shared a name with him. We learn of the regime’s way of silencing dissenting voices, through the experiences of inmates.
Mosese has been informed by askari to cooperate in the performance of a play organized for a visiting head of state and in return he might be among the six hundred prisoners who are to be released. He doesn’t want to do this as acting in the play means kneeling in front of boss and pleading for mercy yet he is not guilty. Prisoners are also denied foodand only the ones who show signs of cooperating with prison authorities are allowed privileges. This is evident when askari brings a mug of tea.
The citizens of Kafira had been waiting for the ‘kingdom’ for years and at last they were told it had come. According to Mosese, it was an illusion. He wonders how many people had seen the kingdom and what colour it is. Mosese is disillusioned. He says they have killed their past and were busy killing the future. He laments about the oppressive nature of boss’ regime. For instance, soldiers had beaten up Regina and had forced her to give false evidence against her brother, Mosese. Mosese violently wriggles and as if in a trance rises and addresses the imaginary audience. His words portray his confused state of mind. On one hand he is faced with the choice of participating in the play, a sacrificial act that will lead to the release of 600 prisoners or on the other hand hold on to his principles and reject the request to participate in the play.
REVISION QUESTIONS FOR THE SCENE
- Where do the events of this scene take place?
- Why do you think Jere has been brought into the cell?
- How would you describe the treatment by the askari on Jere?
- Jere says that “the outside of this cell may well be the inside of another” what does this tell about the situation in Kafira
- Link Pilate’s situation to Jere like he puts it on page 23
- Why does Mosese keep staring at the wall even when Jere and the askari are talking?
- Give the reasons why Mosese is in prison
- Mosese says words have lost meaning to him and asks for the meaning of Africanisation what does this tell about the people’s situation in the country
- To what level has the askari learnt and why is he doing such a job
- Why is Jusper being released and hat has just happened to his parents?
- Why did Jere carry a bible to the cells and how does it bring him trouble
- Apart from being a police officer, which are the other two professions that Jere was in before?
- Which is item number three in the development plan and what is ironical about it?
- Mosese says he saw betrayal in Regina’s eyes, why is this so?
- Why is the foreign dignitary visiting and why are the prisoners supposed to perform a play for him?
- The askari talks of selective breeding and says you need a tall relative to get anything in the country what does this tell about Kafira
- Mosese says” it was better while we waited. Now we have nothing to look forward to…” what were they waiting for that they don’t have and why has he lost hope?
- Mosese sleeps and talks and in his dream. What does this tell about him and what message do we get from his conversation with an imaginary person.
- Jere says, “when the madness of an entire nation enters a solitary mind then it’s not enough to say that person is mad” what does Jere mean by this.
- Identify the character traits of; Jere, Askari and Mosese in this scene.
- Identify the themes brought out in this scene.
- Identify and illustrate the stylistic devices used in this scene.
- Identify the elements of betrayal in this scene.
Jusper stealthily enters Regina’s room without her notice and scares her. He is in his red academic gown and this heightens Regina’s anger at him. She requests him to rest but he says he can’t rest because the death of his whole family is in his mind. Apart from Adika, Nina and Doga were murdered in exchange for Jusper’s release. He says that he will get his revenge someday. Jusper was among the university students who protested on the streets and
as they did this, people shouted abusive words at them in addition to telling that they were wasting time with the protests, it is also apparent that the government will not allow Adika’s photograph to be printed in the newspapers.
Regina would be happy if Jusper was to keep off from trouble with the authorities. She tells him that she has only him and Mosese left in the world and if anything went wrong, they would all be wiped out. Jusper insists that they have to talk of the masses that have no voices.
Regina tells Jusper of the scheduled visits to Kafira by a certain head of state. If this is to happen, then, there will be three days holiday for all in addition to the prisoners being released to mark the occasion. She has a letter from Tumbo, who is boss’ right-hand man. In it, boss has promised to facilitate the release of Mosese. This does not go down well with Jusper who can read mischief in the act but who nevertheless promises to beat him at his own game.
Tumbo, a fat, overconfident man, enters the house. He notices through Jusper’s dressing that he is among the university students who were being known for rioting. Tumbo is already familiar with Jusper’s name which was signed against a student’s prayer that was all about asking God to help them drop their Christian names. Tumbo warns him that if the prayer by any chances suggested changing names, Jusper would be behind bars. Jusper sarcastically wonders why this would be the case yet since change of names was item number three in the new development plan. Furthermore, boss himself has substituted his Christian name to something that no one could pronounce. Tumbo defends boss by saying that a leader requires
a mysterious name that the common tongues will bleed trying to pronounce. This is pointer to Tumbo’s sycophantic nature.
Tumbo revisits the issue of the visit by a certain head of state to Kafira. He learns from Regina that Jusper writes plays and since they require a one-act play for the entertainment, he concludes that Jusper can write one for the occasion. Tumbo says that he would have written one himself, but being a socialist, he thought of extending the opportunity to others to show them light, to ‘eat and let eat’: from their talk, we learn that boss is a fearful and insecure man who has let advisers rule Kafira while pretending to be tough, he is hated by his own guards who will not talk about it. The worst of his advisers is his cousin Mulili who has been rewarded with a large farm for his “services to the nation” Boss is said to be of short temper
and has a weakness for women.
When Jusper is back from buying drinks, the three talked about the idea of writing a play for the entertainment of the visiting head of state, Tumbo would be glad if Jusper wrote the intended play that would highlight the achievements the country has made. Money has been set aside for a play-writing competition, now that he knows what play ought to be organized.
He declares Jusper the winner of that competition and informs him that he and his sister would be given a third of the money that was to finance the competition and that Jusper would be given his prize money once the results of the competition are made public. Jusper is to write the play and ensure that the words ‘progress and ‘achievements’ appear on every other page.
After Tumbo and Regina leave, Jusper reminds the audience what he holds, ‘the fruits of independence. We get them second hand.’
REVISION QUESTIONS FOR THE SCENE
- Where is this scene set?
- Why does Jusper imitate the ricocheting of guns as he enters?
- Why is Regina uneasy about Jusper’s dressing in the red gown?
- What does the red gown symbolise?
- For what does Jusper criticize Regina and even the beggars in the streets?
- For what does Jusper criticize the media?
- According to Jusper why was Adika killed and why is Mosese and Jere in prison.
- Why is Regina critical about people voicing their concerns against the government?
- What do we deduce/learn from Jusper and Regina’s conversation about the intended visit by the foreign head of state?
- Why does Jusper pretend to be Regina’s cousin when Tumbo calls in?
- Jusper asks Regina “are you sure this is not a trick-some sort of a trap?” why is Jusper critical about Tumbo’s helping her and what do you think the trap is?
- What’s wrong with Christian names and why does Jusper criticize them?
- Why does Tumbo call the university students red guards?
- Jusper is said to have written an interesting prayer, what was it about?
- Tumbo says a leader should have a mysterious name that the common people will bleed trying to pronounce. What does this tell about the kind of leaders in Kafira.
- When asked about his university days Tumbo mumbles, rumbles and stutters almost confusing himself, what do we deduce from this behaviour.
- Tumbo says that education doesn’t matter and that there are opportunities only that they do not come on a silver platter. What does this reveal about Kafira?
- Regina reveals to Tumbo that Jusper can write plays; why is Tumbo happy about this? He says that there is a good potato in it. What does this mean?
- How much money has been allocated for the play and how much will Jusper remain with. What happens to the remaining amount?
- What aspects does Tumbo insist that should be covered in the play?
- Why does Tumbo want Regina to visit Boss and what is the visit about?
- Why have many publishers rejected Jusper’s works? What does this say about them?
- How does Tumbo plan to cover up not having conducted a play writing competition?
- Identify the main themes brought out in this scene.
- Identify the aspects of style in this scene?
- What do we learn about the character traits of Jusper, Regina and Tumbo from this scene.
- Identify the elements of betrayal in this scene.
The scene begins with two members of a committee formed to plan for the entertainment of a visiting head of state are conversing. In their conversation, one of them, Kabito is bitter because he has lost a tender despite having spent a whole night ‘being nice’ to people in order to get it. They feel that Mulili does not qualify to be in the committee but they can’t raise the issue with Boss, as Mulili is his cousin. Nicodemo is also uncomfortable sitting with the prisoners on the dais during the visit by the head of state. He is particularly uncomfortable with Mosese’s release since he is the one that had planted an illegal drug on him that led to his arrest and incarceration! Tumbo joins the pair and reminds them of the need to please the visitor as it is through that that the voice of their negotiator will continue to be heard. They are not comfortable starting any formalities until they are told the size of the potato they will get. On being told that the potato will be determined by the number of days they work, they suggest ways to ensure that they have a maximum number of days; meeting every day until the visitor arrives and meeting after the visit for the purpose of review.
Mulili comes to the meeting later and apologizes for being late. He says that he has gone to make a follow-up on his tender which had been cancelled and after boss made threats to the university which had given the tender, Mulili gets the tender back. The committee members make recommendations on what should be included in the program, one of them being that school children as well as all adults’ line up the road to welcome the visitor. This is despite the fact that it is third term and most of the children are sitting for their exams. They even recommend that the day be made a holiday to ensure their recommendations are implemented. Tumbo disagrees with the suggestion that the head of stat e visits upcountry to see the projects he supported. Kabito and Mulili disagree on the issue of forcing the drama department of the university to act in the play. Mulili accuses Kabito of calling him primary kid and when Kabito refuses to apologize, Tumbo recommends a one hour break for the members to let off steam. Nicodemo had suggested a three hours break! As the scene ends, Mulili swears at Kabito and issues a chilling threat to him.
REVISION QUESTIONS FOR THE SCENE
- Kabito is the first to arrive and sleeps in one of the chairs , what does this symbolize?
- Where does this scene take place?
- Why is kabito asleep and why is he in foul mood?
- Why was Mulili given the tender?
- Why is Nicodemo against the use of prisoners to entertain the guests?
- Why is mulili part of this committee?
- According to Tumbo what is the role of the committee?
- From the set up of the committee explain the theme of cronyism.
- From the discussion on their payment, what do we learn about the members of this committee?
- Mulili says he used Boss to get the tender at the university, what does this tell about leadership in Kafira?
- Why are the university students not willing to participate in the entertainment program?
- What brings about the conflict between Mulili and Kabito?
- Why does the committee go for a break and for how long is the break?
- Identify the aspects of style evident in this scene.
- Identify the themes in this scene.
- Identify and illustrate the character traits of Tumbo, Nico-demo, Mulili and Kabito from this scene.
- Identify the elements of betrayal from this scene.
During the one hour break, Mulili rushes to Boss to inform him about Kabito’s ‘ill deeds.’ He finds boss pulling grey strands of hair from his head. He maligns Kabito to boss by telling him that Kabito is a green snake in the grass, has coloured boss’ name in blood in front of the committee, came to the meeting drunk, was shouting to everybody that Boss has denied him the milk tender, says that Boss has ruined Kafira’s economy by hiding millions in a foreign country and that Boss had tried to get Regina by force. This irks Boss who accuses Kabito of sowing seeds of discord among the people. He orders Mulili to do what must be done; to silence Kabito. Mulili is only too glad to do it. In fact, he tells him it is a small matte r having silenced the old couple (Nina and Doga)
REVISION QUESTIONS FOR THE SCENE
- Where is this scene set?
- Why does Boss boast about his grey hair?
- Why has Mulili come to see Boss?
- What five allegations does Mulili present against Kabito?
- From Mulili’s allegation, what ills on leadership do we learn about Boss?
- Who is Mercedes and what makes her rude to Boss?
- What does Boss decide shoud be done against Kabito?
- Mulili says “that be small. You remember that old couple…?” what did Mulili do to the old couple, on whose instructions and for what reason?
- Identify the themes evident in this scene.
- Identify the aspects of style evident in this scene.
- What are the character traits of Mulili and Kabito from this scene?
- Identify the elements of betrayal in this scene.
News about boss’ attempt to rape Regina has reached Jusper who now feels he can’t go on with the play as he had earlier on promised Tumbo. The latter warns Jusper that this would be deemed as sabotage, hence would be too dangerous. He is warned that if he makes any mistake, he could end his university studies even after he has already lost one year. Jusper leaves but he doesn’t promise boss that he is going to hide the truth. When Tumbo and Nicodemo meet to continue with the meeting after the ‘break’ they are aware of Kabito’s murder but they dare not say anything. Tumbo says they are aware of Kabito’s murder but they dare not say anything. Tumbo says they are like caged animals who move but only inside the cage. They pretend not to know anything about the death when Mulili enters. He pretends to be shocked and saddened by Kabito’s death which he says was as result of Kabito being under the influence of alcohol.
Nicodemo wonders how one can get drunk in the space of one hour and Mulili foolishly says that people said that his breath smelled of spirits. When presses further by Nicodemo who wonders about the mention of breath yet Kabito was dead, Mulili retorts that he didn’t say breath but his body smelled whiskies. He goes ahead to say that boss wept when he heard of the death and has already declared one road to be called Kabito road. Nicodemo suggests that they should call off the meeting and wonders whether the day would be counted. Despite the
solemnness of the occasion, the members of the committee seem to be more pre-occupied with concerns of seeking avenues of making money. This is a pointer to their greed and materialistic nature.
REVISION QUESTIONS FOR THE SCENE
- Where is this scene set?
- What had happened to Regina, why was it necessary for Regina to meet Boss and what transpired after that?
- Why is Boss’s wife locked up after the incident?
- Why does Jusper want to pull out of the programme?
- What does Jusper stand to lose if he withdraws from the directing of the play?
- Why does Tumbo caution Jusper against standing for truth and justice?
- What has happened to Kabito during the break?
- What is the cause of Kabito’s death according to Mulili?
- What do you gather from Mulili’s incoherent and apparent confused explanation of Kabito’s death?
- Explain Tumbo’s assertion that “like caged animals , we move,but only inside the cage”
- Why is the meeting called off?
- How do the other committee members express their respet for the dead Kabito?
- Nicodemo asks whether they will be paid for that day, what does that tellus about his character?
- Identify the themes evident in this scene.
- Identify the aspects of style used in this scene.
- Identify the character traits of Jusper, Tumbo, Mulili and Nicodemo from this scene.
- Identify the elements of betrayal from this scene.
The stage is set for the final rehearsal of the play meant to entertain the visiting head of state.
Tumbo wants everything to go on well as he fears to disappoint boss who is already in a foul mood. Boss, has, as a result of his bad temper, locked up his wife in the palace cell. Jusper informs Tumbo that all will go on well and that Mosese was cooperative during the previous night’s rehearsal. Jusper says that he is in the play because he realized that the problems of kafira cannot be solved by isolation. According to him, if the play succeeds, he will have demonstrated that determination is greater in worth than numbers. Tumbo would prefer that boss doesn’t know that the play is written by Jusper who hopes that the release of a few prisoners, after the success of the play, will change Kafira. Jusper is able to see the hypocrisy of the ruling elite. The release of a few prisoners is meant to improve the image of Kafira to the eyes of the world. This according to him is only the truth.
Boss joins them in the preparation of the rehearsal and Jusper tells him the play is about an army cadet who is promoted to the rank of captain within six months of enrolment. During the pass-out parade he shoots his colleague accidentally because he doesn’t know how to handle a gun. It is later realised that he is not a relative of the army commander as it had been thought.
As the rehearsal starts, Boss volunteers to read the part of the chief of staff since the prisoner who had been allocated the role could not be present as he had stomach troubles. He also orders askari to untie the hands of Jere and Mosese so that they can join the rehearsal, Mosese (the junior soldier) argues with Jere (the captain) over which gun is shorter than the other; a. 32 or a 28. They go to their chief of staff (boss) to help unravel the mystery. He tells them to each take a gun and show it to him. The guns are now in the hands of Jere and Mosese! Their plan has succeeded. On realizing that he has been tricked, boss shouts to the guards but Jere tells him he has no guards. Jusper thinks that boss is dead and is about to go and design a coffin but is stopped by Mosese who tell boss to see what he had done to Jusper. Because of fear, Mulili betrays boss. He says that boss ought to be killed because he has taken everything in his hands, has spoiled Kafira’s economy, and has ruled for too long and killed Kabito.
Boss cannot stand the betrayal so he tells Jere to shoot him.
Jere tells boss that their interest is not to see human blood but to provide a mirror for Kafira to reflect the real faces of Kafira’s front men. He says that they must also learn to sacrifice themselves for a better future. Mosese says that their achievement is largely because of the inefficiency of Tumbo. Jere gives boss the gun that he can shoot him (Jere) but boss declines.
Jusper then takes the gun and shoots Mulili dead. He says that he did it for Kafira. Before the play ends, the ghosts of Doga and Nina enter the stage. Mulili’s death seems to have appeased Doga and Nina.
REVISION QUESTIONS FOR THE SCENE
- Where is this scene set?
- Why is Boss’s wife locked up?
- What is the level of preparedness for the presentation of the play?
- Tumbo doesn’t know what the play is even about, what does this tell us about him?
- Why was Jusper thown out of his position as student leader why does Tumbo suggest that they keep the fact that Jusper is the writer of the play a secret?
- Jusper says that he doesn’t want the prisoners to come from the prison into another prison, what does this tell us about the society of Kafira?
- What warning does Boss give to Jusper for the university students?
- Why is Boss scornful of the university students?
- What did Boss do as a reaction to the students protest on employment of expatriates?
- According to Jusper’s explanation to Boss what is the play the prisoners are going to present about?
- Jusper’s play within a play exposes the character traits of several characters. Identify and explain them.
- Why does Boss offer himself for the position of chief of staff and what happened to the one supposed to take that role?
- Why are the prisoners given real guns and what does this tell us about the state officials?
- Give a synopsis of the play the prisoners enact.
- How do the prisoners manage to take over the government?
- Why does Mulili try to escape?
- How does Mulili betray Boss and what allegations does he present against Boss?
- Why is Boss spared and Mulili killed?
- After killing Mulili, Jusper says “I did it for Kafira, I did it for all of you people.” What is the meaning of this statement?
- What is the significance of the reappearance of Doga and Nina and their freezing as they point at Mulili’s body at the end of the play?
- Identify the stylistic devices used in this scene.
- Identify the elements of betrayal in this scene.
Betrayal is the act of being disloyal or being deceitful towards someone. It’s about going against the trust that someone has on another.
The head of state in Kafira (Boss) has betrayed the people’s trust in him. He is supposed to protect the country’s sovereignty by creating job opportunities for his subjects, but instead he has facilitated the influx of expatriate personnel into the country. When the university students protest he deliberately sends in an order for three hundred more expatriate personnel.
Under his rule, sycophancy, cronyism, corruption, nepotism, and persecution of perceived opponents have become the order of the day. He orders the killing of Kabito. He is also responsible for the death of Doga and Nina as well as the arrest of Mosese, Askari says ‘…..we calculated that two mature strokes would ease the tension. It worked perfectly. This is where the research stations come in,’ (pg 19)
Appointments are not based on merit. According to Tumbo, member-ship of the entertainment committee is based on the appointees unflinching loyalty to Boss who buys loyalty by handsomely rewarding individuals. For instance, Mulili is rewarded with acres of land and grade cattle.
Another incident of betrayal is when Kabito, a fellow member of the entertainment committee is betrayed to Boss by Mulili. Mulili comes up with fictitious reasons for getting rid of Kabito. The allegations are outrageous to say the least. He says that Kabito has complained that Boss has robbed him of the milk tender, he has ruined the economy, he hides millions in foreign countries, and that he tried to get Regina by force. In fact, Mulili should be the “green snake on the grass’ that he refers to. By having Kabito killed, he betrays both men.
Mulili betrays his colleague, Jere who gets arrested because he opposed the farmer’s brutality towards Doga and Nina, A part from his name-calling and callous nature; he gets Jere into trouble when all he wanted to do was to assist the old couple.
Boss betrays the trust Regina has for him. Regina honours her meeting with Boss since she believes he is the only one who can secure the release of her brother Mosese. Unfortunately, Boss forcefully tries to get her and she is forced to escape by jumping out of a ten foot high window.
Mosese thinks that it would be an act of betrayal for Regina to plead for his release. Pleading to Boss for mercy would mean that he is guilty yet he is not. According to Mosese acting is tantamount to betraying their cause. He further argues that they are out to cause change in Kafira and even silence to him is a weapon.
Many characters are seen to be involved in various actions against each other in an attempt to avenge wrongs done against them. Jusper avenges the death of his brother Adika by killing Chagaga, the sub chief’s brother, the man who had apparently killed Adika by shooting him four times. Jere tells Jusper’s parents that “people had seen him drag the body to the river…” pg 12
Jere pleads with Mulili to allow the old couple continue with the ceremony. Mulili vehemently refuses and even imitates a priest’s burial liturgy an action that infuriates Jere who chases him away and even threatens to shot him. Mulili threatens him that he shall pay for his actions and true to his words Jere s put behind bars.
After killing Chagaga and being put behind bars, Jusper’s parents are found dead an indication that someone had further avenged the killing of Chagaga. Jusper further says, “I will revenge someday…” pg 33 to which we see him killing Mulli at the end of the play who must have been involved in the killings.
During the meeting by the committee organizing for the entertainment for the visiting dignitary, there is a quarrel and bitter exchange over an apparent misunderstanding between Kabito and Mulili. Muili reports Kabito to Boss with many false allegations and this leads to the killing of Kabito.
At the end of the play Jusper is seen shooting Mulili dead. His is because Mulili is a symbol of the ills that have affected the state of Kafira. In fact Jusper says on p74 that “I did it for Kafira”
THE ROLE OF THE ELITES
The elites in any society should be actively involved in emanci-pating their societies from downfall especially occasioned by poor leadership. The same happens in the state of Kafira through various characters.
The university students led by Adika are seen demonstrating against the influx of expatriates in the country. This is because this has been the leading cause of unemployment. This however leads to the death of Adika but it’s important to notice that they had expressed their misgivings against the government.
Through Mosese we also find that the elites are almost giving up on the government and even turning their backs to the going ons in the state. This is seen in Mosese’s words when asked why he is showing his back to Jere and the askari to which he answers I have no front.
However, we see him speaking out his mind against the oppression in the state which leads to his imprisonment on trumped up charges.
Mosese, in his trance/dream, agrees to participate in the play together with Jere, another elite. It is evident that it is through their role in the play that they manage to bring order to the state of Kafira by ousting and killing the evil element in government in Mulili.
Jusper, an elite, is actively involved in ousting the oppressive regime it is he who writes the controversial play through which they overthrow the government. It is him still who shoots Mulili the evil element and hence hope for Kafira as he says at the end of the play that, “I did it for Kafira. I did it for all of you people.” Pg 74
The government officials are corrupt through and through. The head of state (Boss) puts Mulili, a cousin of his, in a senior government position so that he can inform him on every intricate detail in the government. The man is illiterate and a non-performer who is
determined to amass wealth for himself. He is inconsiderate and will do anything to earn acres of farmland and cattle.
Boss is corrupt. He practices nepotism and gives high government positions to unqualified relatives who work as his spies. He also employs many expatriates in public universities at the expense of the local citizens. Boss has amassed so much wealth from the state through corrupt deals and kept millions in foreign bank accounts.
Tumbo also fails to conduct a play writing competition and instead chooses Jusper and pays him only a third of the money. He pockets the rest claiming that it is for settling records straight. He does not read through the written play and out of his inefficiency, it turns out to be an avenue for the prisoners to eliminate Mulili and expose Boss. He also intends to extend the entertainment committee’s session in order to earn more sitting allowance.
Jusper is a frustrated student who, like all the rest, has no hope of finding a job in Kafira since most of them go to expatriates. He tells Tumbo that during the holiday he would sit in the house and vegetate since the state regards the youth as neither children nor adults but fence sitters. Boss’ intention is to use the expatriate as an opportunity to gain more foreign
There is tribalism and nepotism within the government. While offering Mosese tea in the cell Askari says, ‘Here, tea with milk yet you don’t even belong to my tribe. You need a tall relative to get anything these days’ (pg 27) only those with relatives working in the government can survive in this state.
While the entertainment committee meets Nicodemo tries to find out about what they will make out of it. He asks, “What size of potato per hour?” He is also interested in finding out how many days they would use. “How many working days…..” Kabito suggest that they should meet every day until the visiting head of state arrives and even after the visit.
Government officials are corrupt. Each is thinking of how to amass wealth.
Mulili is granted the milk tender because he is boss’ cousin. It is not given to those that qualified. Kabito is corrupt. He spends the whole night trying to bribe the tendering committee yet he lost the tender. He says ‘…..I spent the whole of last night being nice to people.”
To get money in this state in this state one doesn’t have to be educated, One must have brains to this of unscrupulous ways of getting money. Tumbo tells Jusper on pg 50 ‘……….you need a different kind of this.”
LACK OF TRUTH AND JUSTICE
There is an inherent fear of speaking the truth a-in the entire play thus leading to miscarriage of Justice. Those who have spoken the truth have not lived to see their tomorrow but have been brutally exterminated like vermin.
A case in point is Adika, a student leader who is shot dead to silence the students who are protesting about the influx of expatriate personnel into the country. A Young man’s life is so
brutally brought to an abrupt end because he chooses to purse the truth in order to attain justice for the greater good of Kafira state.
The student’s lecturer decides to speak the truth during the burial by telling the politicians off when they decide to place restrictions on the mourners. But because speaking one’s mind is not a crime, they plant a drug, one kilogram of opium in his car and get him imprisoned, This is a serious case of intolerance and miscarriage of justice.
Doga and Nina are murdered in their own hut because they dared challenge one of Boss; closest advisers, Mulili, who is also his relative. They intended to carry out a simple shaving ceremony by the graveside of their murdered son but Mulili declared it a govern-ment property. When they seem not to notice his authority, he has them murdered just to prove who holds sway in this country.
When Adika’s murderer, Chagaga he visits the grave to burn the body with petrol, he least expects Jusper to be guarding it. In the struggle that ensues, he gets killed and his body is dumped in the river by Jusper, A court of law should have ordered for a medical examination
to determine the mental health of the young man prior to the killing. However, because Chagaga happens to be the sub-chief’s brother, Jusper is locked up in prison.
Mulili cannot tolerate an argument, even a logical one from Kabito with whom he holds a grudge. He misreports him to Boss who orders his death. There is no way a truthful person like Kabito would survive in these circumstances.
Boss’ own wife, Mercedes, is locked up in a cell for protesting against her husband’s moral standing. He even blames Kabito for inciting the woman to defy him.
MISUSE OF POWER/BAD GOVERNANCE AND MISRULE
The ruling elite in Kafira is perpetuating cronyism, nepotism, corruption and intimidation of opponents in order to cling to power. Mulili yields a lot of influence due to the fact that he is Boss’ cousin. Kabito refers to him as an army-drop out and a second rate farmer.
Ordinary people cannot carry out their normal ceremonies without government interference.
Doga and Nina, two innocent and bereaved citizens cannot carry out a simple ceremony for their dead son. The government sends two soldiers, Jere and Mulili to bar them from doing so. They are even murdered as a result.
Individuals are forced to take law into their hands since justice favours those connected to those in power. Jusper kills Chagaga in order to avenge the killing if his brother Adika.
Chagaga happens to be the sub-chief’s brother. Mulili says “All small murders get arrested.”
Like Jusper faces the full brunt of the law while big murderers like Mulili get away scot free due to political patronage.
The fact that Boss relies on the likes of Mulili, Tumbo, Kabito and Nicodemo to render good and sustainable opinion and advice to the government tells the extent of the rot in this system.
Mulili is barely coherent and there are lots of inconsistencies in his utterances. He is a liar and a cheat, a fraud who any right thinking leader should distance himself from. Tumbo,
Kabito and Nicodemo only think about their daily allowances and are determined to meet as long as it takes in order to reap as much.
Tumbo’s remark at the end of the play puts what ails the state in plain terms, “I am truly sorry, but I am not entirely to blame, I was trained, but given the wrong job….” (pg 74) This remark points an accusing finger at the appointing authority. The likes of Mulili should not be in government.
Mulili uses his relationship with Boss to secure tenders and amass wealth. He manages to reverse the termination of his tender by soliciting assistance from boss. Nicodemo says that Mulili bullied his way into securing the university tender (pg 51) Appointments to government positions are based on one’s closeness to Boss. Tumbo tells members of the entertainment committee, “I trust gentlemen that you know why you sit on this committee.
You were nominated for one reason: Your unflinching support for our government “(pg 52-53) It is evident that Mulili, Tumbo, Kabito and Nicodemo are Boss’ sycophants.
Mulili’s unflinching support for Boss is rewarded with farm land and grade cattle.
Tumbo is mandated to organize a play writing competition but instead declares Jusper the winner of proposed play writing compete-tion one third would go to Jusper and Regina and the other two thirds will be used to put the records straight.
Fear is the unpleasant feeling caused by the possibility of danger or evil. Actions or inaction by several characters on the play are motivated by fear. The people of Kafira live in great fear. They lack freedom of expression. They cannot understand why the likes of Jusper, Adika, and Moses talk too much and put themselves in unnecessary trouble.
Beggars feel that the protestors are wasting time.
Regina warns Jusper against talking too much. She does not want him to end up dead like Adika or in prison like Mosese. Jusper’s red academic gown is a source of constant fear for Regina. Tumbo too gets scared of the students’ red gowns and he calls them the red guards.
Askari warns Jere and Mosese that silence is all they need to stay out of trouble. Suspicion is created when prisoners either remain silent or talk too much.
No publisher is willing to publish Jusper’s play since his plays has exposed the truth too much. They can only be published if he can hide or cover the truth. Jusper says that nobody wants things put in black and white. You need a little grey and blue here and there. (pg 47)
Tumbo confesses that Jusper has a point when he says that you can’t clothe truth in lies, but adds that they know better than to shout about it. They know the truth but can’t dare shout about it.
Tumbo is fearful of boss. He does not wish to disappoint. He says that Boss is in a foul mood.
He wants the play to go on as scheduled. He also wouldn’t want Boss to know that the writer of the play to be acted is Jusper.
Boss’ advisers hate him but they do not want to talk beyond whispers. Tumbo says that until people like Mulili are out, it is dangerous to do things differently from what is expected in Kafira.
Regina fears going to see Boss to plead for Mosese’s release because she is afraid of him. She fears that something will go wrong if he see her.
Regina fears for Juspers safety. She pleads with him to stop clashing with the authorities. She tells him, “Jusper, no good will come out of this struggle. Like you I only have two close friends left in this world. You and my brother, but my brother is inside. If anything should go wrong, we’ll be wiped out.” (pg 34)
Mulili is threatened by Jusper and Mosese at the end of the play to a point of denying having any close relationship with Boss. He is fearful that he might he killed but sure enough he is shot dead. Earlier he had intended to sneak out purportedly to go for a call of nature. The head of state is shocked by the turn of events and fears that all evils will be exposed by the prisoners. He begs to be killed. He would rather face death than the consequences of his deeds.
When Nicodemo suggests that Kabito should report the issue of losing his tender, Kabito remarks that reporting Mulili to Boss is tantamount to digging one’s own grave.
When Kabito questions Mulili’s presence on the committee, Tumbo says that Kabito should know better than that and in any case, the question was not in the agenda.
Tumbo and Nicodemo know that Mulili is responsible for Kabito’s death but they cannot dare say anything. “Like caged animals, we move, but only inside the cage.” (pg 62)
Hypocrisy refers to pretence that one has qualities, beliefs or feelings that they do not really have. Prisoners are taking part in the play to entertain the visiting head of state to show national unity. The government is trying to show the impression that prisoners are actively involved in nation building. This may have not been the case earlier since Nicodemo says they are now being treated as if they do not belong to this world. The main reason for Boss’ decision to have the prisoners take part in the play is to potray the country in positive light to ensure foreign investment. A successful visit will make it possible for the role of the negotiators to be heard.
Mulili pretends to be shocked by the news that Kabito is dead. He informs Tumbo and Nicodemo that Kabito has been involved in a fatal accident during the one hour break. He pretends to be saddened by the news. He claims that the accident was caused by the victim driving under the influence of alcohol. He further claims that Boss was in tears when he heard of Kabito’s death and that he had declared that a road be named after Kabito. (pg 63)
By criticizing the excesses of Boss, Tumbo is being hypocritical since he is a beneficiary of Boss and his government. Tumbo seems to be making an attempt to distance himself from Boss when he says, ’Things will change; Boss is not at all bad at heart. His main problem is
that he gets scared off too easily.” (pg 44) As a result of his loyalty he is made the chairman of the committee mandated to organize for the entertainment of a visiting head of state. He also owns apartments courtesy of Boss.
Tumbo pretends to be doing Regina a favour by introducing her to Boss yet he knows his (Boss) ridiculous weakness for women. When she gets into trouble and jumps out of a tenfeet high window, he belatedly says he will apologize to her. He pretends to be sorry for
Regina while all along he had known what Boss was up to.
Tumbo claims to be a socialist at heart and says he could have written the play for the entertainment of the visiting Head of State himself but decides to extend this opportunity to someone else. “Tumbo, you have not done badly, why don’t you lead the pack of them…..show them light, eat and let eat.” (pg 44)
Boss claims to understand truth and justice, while in fact, he least does. He alleges that the rioting students and the dissenting lecturers have no idea what truth and justice are all about.
This hypocrisy is self-serving in the sense that he intends to suppress their freedom of expression to create an opportunity to gain from foreign governments.
Mulili misreports Kabito to Boss for allegedly maligning Boss’ reputation yet his real intention is to have Kabito punished for opposing him during the meeting. When Boss gives him the go –ahead to eliminate Kabito which he does, he later acts shocked and saddened by his death.
Askari pretends to be doing Jere a favour by putting him on rehabilitation after only two days and tells him that the government was giving his future some consideration even though he was contributing to the national headache.
To be disillusioned is to be disappointed when you realize that something is not as good as you had expected to a point of completing losing hope and giving up.
The masses in Kafira are disillusioned by the state of affairs in their country. Mosese says that they had waited for the kingdom for years, then it was said it had come but it was all an illusion. He wonders how many people had set eyes on that kingdom and what colour it is.
According to Mosese it was better while they waited for the Kingdom because then they had hope, now they have nothing to look forward to. He feels that they have killed the past and are busy killing the future. He says in the past, they had celebrations once a year and they had a reason to celebrate, but now there is nothing to celebrate about. People are busy shedding blood everywhere. (pg 27-28)
The masses have resigned to their fate after realizing the futility of fighting the government.
As the students protest in the streets, people shout at them and beggars tell them they are wasting their time. (pg 33) Regina feels that Jusper and those others protesting against the
government are easting time and that no good will come out of their struggle with the government. She feels that they are fighting stones. (pg 34)
Doga and Nina have lost hope in life after their son; Adika is shot dead during the university riots. Their son Jusper seems to have lost his mind after his brother’s death and is currently considered as good as ‘dead.’ Nina concludes that the authorities have robbed them all they had and blinded them.
After Kabito’s murder, Tumbo and Nicodemo realize that their tenures as government officials hang in the balance. Tumbo says, “We have no choice, like caged animals, we move but only inside the cage.” (pg 62) He says the elimination of citizens has become so rampant that one is not sure of seeing the next day.
Jere argues with Askari over the issue of freedom. He tells him that the outside of his cell may be well the inside of another, which implies there is no freedom in Kafira and even those who think they are free are not.
Jusper bemoans the fact that Regina too has been affected by the street disease, that is giving up. It is even pointed out that the beggars in the streets laugh at the university students because they believe that they could achieve nothing for Kafira.
The leadership of Kafira is dictatorial. It is oppressive. The government in a bid to perpetuate its continued stay in power has resulted in silencing its critics. The educated elite in particular pay the heaviest price for being at the fore front of criticizing the excess of Boss’ regime.
Assassinations, arrests, imprisonments and torture of prisoners are the order of the day.
Boss must always have his way and will eliminate anyone who appears to be a stumbling block to his schemes. He does not entertain any freedom of expression of whatever kind. For example, the academic staff members should not weep in public for whatever reason, and if they do, they end up in prison like Mosese.
Freedom of expression is curtailed. Jere says “the outside of this cell may be the inside of another’ (pg 21) Prisoners are not allowed to ask questions. It only makes one’s life more unbearable.
When one asks questions he is subjected to beating as in the case of Jere. Prisoners are denied food only those who co-operate with authorities enjoy certain privileges. Jere is denied tea then Mosese is presented with a cup of tea.
During Adika’s funeral Mosese says of the orders room the govern-ment. ‘The funeral would not take more than ten minutes, the coffin could not be carried by students and weeping in public was illegal for the academic staff.” When Mosese protested against this high handedness, he is arrested and imprisoned on trumped up charges of possessing illegal drugs.
Prisoners are denied food and only those who co-operate with prison authorities.
In a bid to secure conviction for Mosese, his sister (Regina) is subjected to beating by soldiers as people watch, forcing her to give evidence against him. As a result the beating she loses hearing in one ear.
Doga and Niana lose their lives after protesting the government’s decision to prevent them from conducting the shaving ceremony for their late son Adika.
Tumbo and Nicodemo know that Mulili killed Kabito but they cannot say anything about it.
“Like caged animals we move, but inside the cage’ (pg 62)
Boss’ regime has established research stations meant to rehabilitate perceived opponents of the state before they are re-integrated into the society. Askari tells Jere, “You see we have research stations dotted all over the countryside.” (pg 17)
Boss tells Jusper that when he goes back to the University he should tell the leaders that it is his (Boss’) duty to decide on the magnitude of Kafira’s Africanization programme and that they have no right to chant about it. When the students demonstrate against the influx of expatriate personnel, Boss warns that the result will always be the same, deaths and imprisonment.
Jere protests the mistreatment of Nina and Doga by the government. He successfully tries to convince Mulili to allow them to conduct the shaving ceremony for their son Adika. An altercation ensues between him and Mulili when he insists that the ceremony will go on as planned resulting in his arrest and imprisonment.
Jusper’s unstable state of mind can be attributed to the physical as well as psychological suffering he has undergone. He has been arrested twice, first during the burial of his brother Adika and seconds the murder of Chagaga who killed his brother. Doga says “then they came and took him away…..when they brought him back after three months he was no longer the son we knew (pg 4-5) The death of his brother took a heavy toll on him and he could not come to terms with it.
Prisoners must perform a play that must entertain the visiting head of state in order to earn amnesty.
CHARACTER, CHARACTERIZATION AND ROLES OF CHARACTERS
He is an ex-soldier and now a prisoner. He was a colleague of Mulili. He taught religious knowledge for three years before he was drafted into the army. He can be described as:
Jere is reasonable as he listens to Doga and Nina and understands their predicament. He even tells them that Mulili does not belong with them and does not know their ways when Nina threatens to curse them by stripping naked and Mulili makes fun of her.
He pleads with Doga to understand that he and Mulili are simply obeying orders when they say that the ceremony cannot go on. He says, ‘old man, if I had the power, I would let you go on. I would even take part in the ceremony. I knew Adika well.
He aspires for a prosperous Kafira and advocates for unity among all citizens. He tells Boss, “No, your excellency, we shall not shoot you. Kafira needs each one of us, you included.” (pg 73)
He hits it off with the other prisoner with whom he enacts the episode of Pilate and Jesus from the Bible.
He easily makes friends with Mosese in prison. They quickly find that they have a lot to talk about because they are like minded as far as the administration of Kafira is concerned.
He empathizes with the old couple and wishes to allow them to carry out their shaving ceremony.
He does not let out the secret that Mulili allowed Mustafa to escape across the border.
When Mosese tells him about the circumstances that brought him to prison, the events of Adika’s funeral, Jere does not let Mosese know that he knows Jusper.
He is unperturbed by the threats directed to him by Askari. When Askari tells him, “……I have killed a man once in this very cell, he replies, congratulations! How did you manage?” (pg 30)
He and Mosese clearly carry out a palace coup to expose the villains like Mulili in the government.
He says they have no intentions of getting rid of Boss because they want the act to be’ a mirror that will reflect the real faces of Kafira’s front men.’
He compares the prison department with Meteorological Depart-ment which confuses the public by giving contradictory information.
After observing Mosese’s reverie, Jere aptly summarizes the state of the society thus, “When the madness o an entire nation disturbs a solitary mind, it is not enough to say the man is mad.’
Mosese’s behavior is a result of what the authority has put its citizen through-that is, oppression to the point of madness.
- i) He plays a significant role in the development of the plot of the story.
- ii) He enhances the character of other characters in the play. For instance, through him, the Askari is portrayed as brutal and intimidating.
iii) Several themes have been brought out using him, for instance the themes of self-sacrifice and oppression.
- iv) He is used by the writer to highlight several stylistic devices such as play within a play, suspense and biblical allusion.
He is a philosophy student at the university. He is the son of Doga and Nina. His brother Adika was shot dead during a demonstration held by the university students. He can be descri-bed as:
Jusper talks arrogantly to people who do not make sense to him. He talks back at Tumbo regardless of his powerful office. He openly shows his disrespect by talking negatively about the evils of the government. At some point, Tumbo thinks he is drunk.
He kills Chagaga, the sub-chief\s brother who also killed Adika, his brother. He shoots Mulili for having caused all the pain and suffering in the society. He is over -excited that they have successfully carried out the coup.
He vows to avenge the killing of his brother Adika. He tells Regina, “I will get my revenge someday, even if it means doing it alone.” (pg 33)
When asked by Tumbo what achievement he is going to highlight in the play meant for entertaining the visiting head of state, he says, “the number of expatriate professionals had steadily increased over the year, signifying the full extent of our potential progress….” (pg 48)
On the issue of name changing, he says, “but there is nothing wrong with that. Changing names is item number three in the new development plan, isn’t it? In fact, Boss himself gave us a fine example when he substituted his Christian name with something none of us can pronounce.’ (pg 40)
After being told by Tumbo that he has won the nonexistent play writing competition, he remarks that out of ten plays submitted, his came first and that the other entries have of course been returned to their authors. (pg 49)
Jusper speaks his mind when he finds his parents at the graveside; he openly confesses having killed someone. Nina thinks he is drunk and only to find out later that he actually killed Chagaga.
When asked by Tumbo how much beer he drinks he retorts that it is as much as he (Tumbo) drank off the pocket money he got during his university days.
He talks to the president candidly as he gives him a summary of his play. He is not afraid to reveal to him that he has written the play.
Jusper is a university student. He is also a playwright who depicts the society so clearly that publishers dread publishing his work. He is able to trick the president to provide real guns so that he can find a chance to avenge the deaths of his parents and brother. He also succeeds in
tricking Tumbo and taking advantage of inefficiency. He writes an ingenious play that deceives Tumbo completely.
Jusper refuses to remove his red gown despite his girlfriend’s nagging. She says it makes him appear dangerous. Students are always treated suspiciously whenever they put them on but he is ready to face the consequences. He is unapologetic to Tumbo for wearing it.
- i) Major events in the play revolve around him
- ii) His experiences expose the Boss’ regime.
iii) His brother Adika is brutally murdered during a student’s demonstration. He is arrested when he revenges his brother’s killing and is released in exchange for his parent’s murder.
- iv) His unstable state of mind points to an individual who has undergone both physical and emotional trauma.
- v) He highlights the themes of suffering, disillusionment, betrayal and self-sacrifice. The writer has used Jusper to highlight aspects of style such as play within a play, allusion and satire.
Mulili is an ex-soldier and now a farmer. He is cousin to Boss and is a member of the visitor’s entertainment committee.
He makes fun of Doga and Nina’s sorrow due to the loss of their son and forbids them to carry out the shaving ceremony at the graveside. Even when Nina threatens to strip naked in protest , a traditional curse, Mulili asks, “….How many naked body I have seen and I am still Mulili with my two eyes, natural?” (pg 9)
He is insensitive to Doga’s feelings that Doga finally tells him, “…..may you die the way Adika did.” (pg 10)
He has Doga, Nina and Kabito killed in cold-blood.
He declares that there is no reason why Boss should not be killed.
He shows disrespect for the elder couple (Doga and Nina) when he dares Nina to go ahead and strip after she had threatened to do so. He says he has seen many naked bodies and he is still Mulili with two eyes, natural. (pg 9)
He bears a grudge against Kabito because he feels belittled by Kabito whom he alleges has called him a primary school kid. As if that is not enough, he goes ahead to tell lies about Kabito to Boss leading to his elimination.
He threatens Jere for failing to enforce the instructions they had to prevent Doga and Nina from carrying out their late son’s shaving ceremony. This act lands Jere in prison
Being Boss’ cousin he is promised many acres of land and grade cattle. He will therefore do anything to ensure he gets this.
When the tender for the supply of milk to the university is awarded to somebody else (Kabito), Mulili reports to Boss who revokes it and gives it to him. Mulili goes on to have
Kabito killed after lying to Boss that Kabito had maligned his name.
He allows a fugitive, Mustafa, to escape across the border.
His ungrammatical English makes him a funny character provoking laughter in the reader every time he speaks. For example, in reference to Doga’s statement that an innocent man is in prison because of Adika, Mulili says, That no matter, he go against law and order, tell us new thing or make clear out of here. You are trespasser.’ (pg 10)
When Nina says that they do not want to be shown letter because their hope has been killed, Mulili tells them, “Your people full of primitive; instead going to find how the other is, they come and get stick with dead one.” (pg 10)
He mixes up simple sayings. For example, when he comes late for the meeting of the entertainment committee that is preparing for the head of state, he tells the other, “Gentlemen, I am very sorrowful, but I always say, better never than late’ (pg 54) When telling Boss about Kabito, he says, ‘The one, he be a green grass in the snake.’ (pg 59)
He quickly changes things he had said to suit himself. For instance, he reports that Kabito died in an accident because he was driving while under the influence of alcohol. Nicodemo asks, “His breath did you say?” He retreats, “who said breath I said his body smelled
whiskies?” (pg 63)
Mulili falls out with people on many occasions because of his short temper. For example, when Doga pleads with him to let him carry on with the shaving ceremony, he loses his temper.
Nina gets angry with him and threatens to strip naked, but he is not moved.
Doga curses him to die like Adika but he responds, “…..you tell him me I am a man with action not words, come on tell……” (pg 10)
Mulili abuses Kabito a goat when the latter refuses to apologise to him (pg 57)
He does all he can to please the authority (Boss). For example, he does not agree with Jere to let Doga and Nina perform the shaving ceremo-ny for their late son even when Jere feels they can allow the couple to do it under supervision.
He is very proud of having undeservingly won the milk tender. This is because he is Boss’ cousin. He is impressed by the way he got the tender. “What happen to Mr. Mulili tender supply for milk? You knows who is speaking! I it’s me, Boss himself and no bloody vice-deputy.” (pg 54)
He does everything to impress Boss and make him think he is loyal. He even suggests that people should go on holiday during the visit by the foreign head of state, so that everyone can line up along the road to receive him. This is against logic because, according to Kabito, this
is the final term and most school children will be sitting their exams and cannot afford to line up along the road.
He was a soldier and now a farmer but still insist on being part of the authority. For example, he has the audacity to criticize university lecturers for allegedly going against policy. He also says that university students should co-operate with the government because, “We pays for their fees, we pays for their luxury, we give them all necessary, who are they?” (pg 56)
When he goes for the rehearsal, he tells Boss, “Yes, your excellent. I say myself: go and be with cousin as he sees the final one.” (pg 69)
Mulili symbolizes the excesses of Boss
He is portrayed as cruel, greedy, vengeful and dictatorial. Tumbo says of him, ‘the most of the advisers is that of his, Mulili.” (pg 44)
Through him the character of Jere is brought out a principled when the latter amidst Mulili’s objections insists that Adika’s shaving ceremony will proceed as scheduled.
He enhances the themes of misuse of power, corruption and self-preservation. The writer has effectively employed use of humour through Mulili.
Tumbo is a government official and a confidant of Boss, the Head of state. He is Regina’s landlord and chairman of the committee charged with the responsibility of organizing entertainment for the visiting of head of state. Despite his limited education, he has managed to acquire wealth and enjoys immense influence owing to his close association to the Boss.
He is a beneficiary of Boss’ government yet given an opportunity he criticizes his regime and those working for it. About Mulili he says, “That is why he retired from the army. Until people like him are out, it is dangerous to seem to do things differently in Kafira.’ (pg 44-45)
He says that he would not have acquired the blocks of buildings he has if he had ‘depended on empty talk’ like the university students who he feels talk too much. He says, ‘you were born alone and when you die, you will die alone….” This implies that he has used fraudulent means to acquire property.
He pretends to be a socialist when he offers Jusper the chance to write the play to entertain the visiting head of state. He says, ‘You see, the whole program has cost the government some quarter of a million shillings. In fact, I had a mind of writing the play myself, but I thought better of it……eat and let eat.’ (pg 44)
He says a sum of money has been allocated for a play-writing completion but he does not organise the competition. Instead he gives the opportunity to Jusper, of the six hundred pounds meant to finance the competition, he gives one third to Jusper and Regina and says the rest ‘will be used to put records straight’ (pg 49)
He has secured his place in the entertainment committee by virtue of his unflinching support for the government. He tells the other committee members, “ I trust, gentlemen, that you know why you are in this committee. You were nominated for one reason, your unflinching support of our government (pg 52-53)
He does not live up to what he believes in. He strongly believes that until people like Mulili are out of the government, ‘It is dangerous to seem to do things differently in Kafira.” (Pg 44-45)
He convinces Regina to go and see Boss even though he knows well Boss’ weakness for women. When Regina is hesitant, he tells her, ‘We can’t afford to make him angry at this stage.’ (pg 46)
When Kabito is eliminated and Jusper insists on standing for truth and justice even if it will cost him another year at the university, Tumbo tells him. ‘if you knew what has happened to one of us at the committee, I am sure you would postpone your eagerness to stand by truth and justice.’ (pg 62)
He does not know who Soyinka is. He thinks he is a prime minister of a certain country he purports to have forgotten. He even insists he is a politician.
He does not realize that the achievement Jusper says will he highlight-ed in the play is meant to portray the government that Tumbo serves in bad light.
Mosese says that it is out of his inefficiency that they are able to carry out the palace coup.
He played along to Mosese, Jere and Jusper’s plot to bring down Boss. Mosese says that it was largely through his inefficiency that they achieved their objective. (pg 74)
Jusper is able to convince him that he is Regina’s cousin.
When Jusper tells him that he drinks as much as he (Tumbo) drank off the pocket money he got during his university days, a visibly embarrassed Tumbo attempts to justify his limited
education by claiming that though he qualified for university admission, he sold the scholarship since his family was poor (pg 41)
Tumbo contributes significantly to the development of the plot of the play:
- i) Being Boss’ confidant he comes out as a major beneficiary of Boss’ regime.
- ii) Towards the end of the play, he confesses that he was trained but given the wrong job. This aspect portrays him as sycophantic.
iii) It is through his inefficiency that the plot by Mosese, Jusper and Jere to topple Boss succeeds.
- iv) Through him, we get to know Jusper’s character as daring and outspoken and Regina as trusting.
- v) He also highlights the themes of fear, self-preservation and misuse of power.
- vi) Through him several aspects of style have been effectively used by the writer. They include foreshadow, satire, play within a play and suspense.
He is the president of Kafira and cousin to Mulili. He plays the role of the chief of staff in the rehearsal. His wife is called Mercedes.
Boss leads the country with an iron fist. He wants everything to go his way and cannot stand anyone who appears to block his orders and decisions and he cannot brook dissent. He has signed the death warrants of very many innocent people including Kabito, Adika, Doga and Nina.
He warns Jusper against students’ protests during the rehearsal. He even brags of having given three hundred jobs to expatriates just to prove a point to the protesters.
According to Mulili, Boss has acquired a lot of wealth and banked the money in foreign accounts. When Mulili tells him that Kabito was spreading such allegations he shouts, “who gave him that information, just how much does Kabito know about me?” (pg 59). This seems to confirm his corrupt nature.
He orders that the tender awarded to Kabito be revoked and goven to Mulili. Boss is also notorious for nepotism. He assigns powerful positions to his uneducated and inexperienced kinsmen in order to secure his interests. He also gives jobs to expatriates in return for foreign donations and funding.
He demands that prisoners stage a play for the guest president in order to portray national unity and the involvement of prisoners in national matters. He does this to make an impression that would attract funding.
Through Mulili we get to learn that he has stashed huge amounts of money in foreign accounts which has brought down the economy of Kafira.
Regina says that boss is reported to have a short temper. Tumbo says that Boss is known to make hasty decisions and stand by them. When instructing Mulili to get rid of Kabito, he impatiently orders Mulili out of the palace. Tumbo says that when Boss is angry he does not differentiate between a human being and a rat. He also refers to him as an animal.
He says that students do not understand what truth and justice is. He says that their protest against foreign expatriates led to the death of a student leader and the imprisonment of a lecturer.
To put them in their place, he brings in three hundred more expatriate personnel just to prove his point. He says that five of them are his own personal appointments.
He has a ridiculous weakness for women according to Tumbo. He also attempts to rape Regina who is forced to escape by jumping a ten foot high window.
He relies on hearsay and propaganda to run the affairs of the state. He admits that Kabito has been one of his loyal servants.
He allows prisoners to handle fire arms during the rehearsal which they use to stage the palace coup.
He is averse to criticism. He orders the killing of Kabito since it is alleged that he (Kabito) raised serious allegations about his integrity. He tells Jusper that since the university students questioned his appointment of expatriate personnel, just to put them in their place, he orders three hundred more expatriate personnel.
He falls for Mosese, Jere, and Jusper’s trick and orders the guards to surrender their guns to be used as props.
He has deliberately put Mulili on the entertainment committee to report directly to him if something should seem to be going wrong. He suspects Tumbo of being behind Kabito’s action to discredit him. ‘Tumbo must have a hand in this’ (pg 59)
- Boss is the architect of the misrule in Kafira.
- He has allowed his advisers such as Mulili to unleash terror to innocent civilians.
iii. He is a central character since the events in the story centre around his misrule.
- He brings out the character of Mulili as vindictive when Mulili convinces him on the need to eliminate Kabito. He also helps brings out the character of Tumbo as sycophantic.
- Though him several themes are highlighted such as misuse of power, betrayal, and social injustice.
- He enhances several stylistic devices such as play within a play, suspense, satire and symbolism.
He is a prison warder and is mandated to keep watch over Jere and Mosese.
Even though Jere was once a soldier like him, he threatens to teach him a lesson or two if Jere calls him his friend again.
He also warns Jere that he has once killed a man in that very cell
He tells Jere that they are giving consideration to his future ‘despite his contribution to the national headache.’ He pretends to be doing Jere a favour and says he should be filling in forms for his rehabilitation.
He says that experts have to be called in to give meaning to data collected in the various research centres that the government has put up and which show that rehabilitation of prisoners is invaluable. He goes ahead to say that this is not the type of work ‘any of these local pretenders would handle.’ (pg 17)
He is a former university lecturer who is later imprisoned for criticizi-ng the ruling elite.
He easily makes friends with Jere in prison. He also shares his views with Jere . For example, when Jere tells him that he was a soldier before he came to face to face with reality, Mosese tells him that fire has always been there. (pg 22)
He explains to Jere the reason he had changed his name –an illegal drug was planted on him by a man bearing the same name as him (Nicodemus) leading to his imprisonment.
He was a university lecturer. He is also able to see through the scheme that the authorities have. They intend to use prisoners to act a play to entertain a visiting Head of state to symbolize national unity and therefore build confidence in the visitor to encourage him to invest more in Kafira.
Together with Jere and Jusper, he intelligently carries out a palace coup.
Initially, he refuses to participate in a play to be performed for the visiting head of state. “I will not bend so low.” (pg 26). ‘I cannot do it. Among my friends, that would be equivalent to kneeling in front of Boss and pleading for mercy.’ (pg 27)
His change of name was influenced by Boss decision to change his. He changed his name since the man who planted a drug on him to implicate him shared a name with him (Nicodemus) (pg 25)
Even though he is not related to Adika who is just one among his many students, he protests his killing and fights injustice but the reward for his effort was imprisonment.
Together with Jusper and Jere he agrees to take part in a potentially dangerous plot to bring down Boss through a play meant for entertaining the visiting head of state. The plan may not work hence they may be labelled traitors.
After being sent to prison on trumped up charges, he loses faith in the freedom of Kafira.
When told that the release of six hundred prisoners will depend on his participation in the play to entertain the visiting head of state, it only makes him feel like he is betraying what he believes in. He feels it would be like kneeling down ‘in front of Boss and pleading for mercy’ for something he has not done. (pg 28)
He does not believe in the Bible teachings that Jere seems to believe in. For example, he says, ‘That is why I don’t believe in such crap as the last shall be first, and blessed are the poor for they shall inherit the kingdom of heaven!…..” (pg 28)
When Jere tells him that things will change, he says, ‘……that is why I prefer to wait and see. I will stay here and remain loyal to my principles. (pg 28)
- Mosese helps highlight the plight of the educated elite in Kafira.
- Boss’ regime seems to deliberately persecute university lectu-res like Mosese and university student’s whom he perceives as his most potent critics. Mosese is arrested and imprisoned for protesting the mistreatment of the family of his late student (Adika) during the funeral, weeping in public is made illegal for the academic staff.
iii. Through him, the character of Askari is brought out as brutal and inhuman.
- He helps develop among other themes the themes of selflessness and misuse of power.
- He also highlights play within a play, satire and suspense among other stylistic devices.
She is sister of Mosese and Jusper Wendo’s girlfriend. Her concern for her brother and boyfriend is responsible for her confrontational nature. She pleads with Jusper as well as Mosese to co-operate with the authorities.
She is so afraid of the laid down rules that she demands that Jusper removes the red gown as it makes him appear dangerous. She fears that he might be killed for being a ‘red guard’
She pleads with Jusper not to talk of revenge for the death of his parents and brother. She says, ‘Jusper, you promised. You promised to be a good boy. Do you now talk of revenge?” (pg 33)
Jusper tells her that she seems to have lost her fighting spirit like everyone else in the street.
She refuses to succumb to Boss’ compromising demands and escapes by jumping from a ten foot high window.
She believes that Tumbo will speak to Boss on her behalf. She is convinced that boss will replace the political prisoners to mark the visit of foreign head of state.
When Jusper asks her, ‘do you think he means it?” she responds, ‘he does. He says he will be in charge of the whole thing himself. And don’t forget he is Boss’ right hand man.’ (pg 37)
- Regina highlights major problems affecting Kafira, which is a disillusioned citizenry.
- She berates her boyfriend Jusper for being critical of Boss, According to her, nothing good will come out of Jusper’s continued antagonism towards the government. She is willing to allow the status quo to remain out of fear for the well-being of her loved ones.
iii. She pleads with Jusper to stop his agitation, pointing out that Jusper and her brother Mosese are the only people she has in this world, but Mosese was in and that left Jusper to either build or destroy her. (pg 32)
- She brings the character of as traitorous. Out pd good will she agrees to meet him only for Boss to try to rape her.
- She also brings put the portrayal of Jusper as principled and selfless. Through her, the author successfully brings out the themes of betrayal, sexual immorality and misuse of power. The author’s effective use of stylistic devices such as satire and humour can also be attributed to her.
He is Nina’s husband and father to Jusper and the later Adika.
Doga believes that the individual responsible for the death of their son Adika lives among them. His suspicion is raised by evidence on Adika’s grave. (pg 1)
He tells his wife to calm down when she acts nervous about the viola-tion of their late son’s grave and says, “What sort of a mother are you?”
He also disagrees with his wife about informing the sub-chief about the crack on the grave.
He can’t imagine informing the sub-chief because it is his brother who killed his son.
He would rather cheat the ancestors than follow protocol of a wicked government.
He also curse Mulili when he proves adamant about allowing them to carry on with the shaving ceremony. He tells him, ‘May you die the way Adika did.’ (pg 10)
He believes that Jusper is Okay where he is. ‘Jusper is alright where he is. ‘(pg 2)
He is able to identify Jere as Kaleka’s son despite the later wearing a cap. (pg 9)
He is determined to cover up any evil on his son’s grave by filling the crack on the grave with soil so that the shaving ceremony can go on.
He is determined to have his late son’s shaving ceremony go on despite the pleas from his wife that people might boycott the ceremony if they knew about the crack in the grave.
He is grateful to Jere for informing them about the whereabouts of Jusper. As a form of gratitude he offers him a pocket bible. ‘Kaleka’s son, I have nothing to give you, (handing him a pocket bible) take this.’ (pg 12)
He tells his wife that they need not to cry since tears are for the young and their own wells are dry.
His devotion id depicted by the song he sings with his wife and the prayer he says with her. Later on, he gives Jere a bible.
She is Doga’s wife and mother to Jusper and the late Adika.
She mourns the death of her son and wonders why people would kill him. She is heart broken by the people who come to interfere with his grave and she cannot stand it.
The death of her son sends her into mourning. She begs Mulili to allow them to allow them to carry on with the shaving ceremony.
She is concerned about the whereabouts of Jusper when she finds that he is not guarding the grave.
She weeps besides her son’s grave
When Mulili refuses to allow her to carry out the shaving ceremony, she threatens to strip naked and cause him blindness.
She feels that the evil done to her son’s grave should not be hidden. According to her, one cannot outwit their ancestors. She suggests to her husband that they report the evil to the sub chief. ‘It would be wrong for us to sit on this evil.’ (pg 3)
She tells her husband that they need to commit the day on God’s hands. They sing and later she invokes a prayer.
She is concerned about her son Jusper’s safety when they fail to find him at Adika’s grave.
‘But where is he now? Doga, my heart fails me. (pg 2)
STYLE AND LANGUAGE
Satire is a form of writing where an individual or society is ridiculed or where the foolishness of an idea, practice or custom is shown. It’s a form of criticism of vices through or by use of humour.
The writer portrays the evils of the society in a rather humorous way. From the beginning of the play, he depicts the government as insensi-tive to the needs of its own people. Adika is shot dead by the sub-chief’s brother for leading a demonstration against the employment of many expatriates. Chagaga is jailed and later released because he shot Adika in ‘self-defence’ other than listen to the protest of the people and consider their demands; the government executes those who oppose its ideas.
Government officials such as Askari and Mulili are satirised for their cruelty. They have little regard for human life. Askari mistreats pri-soners under his watch such as Jere. He repeatedly threatens Jere and even informs him that he has killed a man in the very cell Jere is in. Mulili has no qualms taking away human life.
Mulili and Boss have been satirized for being traitorous. Boss betrays the trust bestowed on him by his subjects. Instead of being a servant leader, he has become a tyrant. A peaceful demonstration by university students is violently dispersed leading to the death of a student; Adika. Instead of securing jobs for the citizens of his country he has resorted to importation of expatriates. His leadership is also characterized by intimidation, assassination and corruption. Mulili is a beneficiary of Boss’ misrule. Ironically, when tables are turned on Boss by Jere, Jusper and Mosese, he betrays Boss and blames him for the ills in Kafira as well as for killing Kabito. He urges Jere to Kill Boss.
Tumbo, a government official’s inefficiency, is satirized. He uses his position to benefit himself. He claims that the reason he never got proper education is that his parents were poor and so he sold his scholarship. He fails in his duty to set up a writing competition, feigns ignorance that it took place and gives the opportunity to Jusper who grabs it to turn against the president and his cronies. When he visits Regina, Tumbo sends Jusper for beer claiming that it is tough being a government official. When we do not quite see what is tough in his line of duty.
Tumbo is happy when Jusper highlights in the play the influx of expatriate is a sign of potential progress.
Mulili is satirised for being insensitive to the rights of children. He suggests that during the head of state’s visit, all children and adults should line up on the road to welcome the visitor despite the fact that it’s the final term and most of the children will be sitting for exams.
After the death of Adika, Jusper went wild singing songs of vengeance and as a result he is taken away by agents of the government to be cooled down. He was said to be dangerous to peace loving people. It is ironical that when he was brought back after three months, he has instead worsened and people said he was mad. (pg 4-5)
In prison, one is not allowed to talk too much. It doesn’t pay to talk a lot. It is ironical that askari takes great exception to Mosese’s silence and tries to force him to talk. Due to the fact that the prison authorities know Mosese as being talkative they will not allow him to keep quiet and demand that he explains what he is keeping quiet about.
It is ironical that though while in prison one is expected to show consistency of character and a market improvement, one cannot afford to stick to one’s principles otherwise he will never leave jail.
According to Jere, the character in the Pilate story (his fellow inmate) did not want to be Pilate and instead insisted on being Jesus. The said character did not know that being Jesus meant receive-ng canes and when Jere caned him, he wailed and Jere was subsequently punished (it was an eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth) (pg 23)
It is ironical that it will take a state visitor to have political prisoners released in Kafira. Jere tells askari that innocence can be an offence. This statement is given credence by the fact that Jere and Mosese are in prison, not because of committing an offence but standing for the truth.
Tumbo says that a sum of money has been allocated for a play-writing competition and adds that the democratic part of it is that anyone has to participate yet in actual sense, there is no competition. He goes ahead to pronounce Jusper as the winner of the non-existence competition. News of Jusper’s win will be in the papers the following week.
It’s ironical that Tumbo will not accept the suggestion that the visiting head of state visits the upcountry to see the progress in agriculture despite the fact that the head of state offered technicians for the said progress.
Kabito’s attack on the government that Mulili and his likes choke Kafira is ironical since he is a major beneficiary of the system. His appointment to the entertainment committee is reward for his loyalty to Boss. It is also ironical that by pointing out the truth, he is accused of sowing seeds of discord among the other people.
According to Boss, grey hair symbolizes wisdom. It is therefore ironic that he is determined to remove all strands of grey hair, claiming that a leader should have grey hair. (pg 58)
As Jusper enters, Doga hides behind the bush. The audience as well as Nina is awake of Doga’s whereabouts but Jusper is not.
Jusper asks Tumbo if he had come to see his (Jusper’s) cousin, The readers as well as Jusper know that Regina is the girlfriend to Jusper and not his cousin but Tumbo doesn’t.
Mulili is not aware that Tumbo and Nicodemo are already aware of Kabito’s death. Tumbo tells Nicodemo, “Here he comes. Remember we know nothing.’ (enter Mulili) (pg 62)
Boss, Tumbo and Mulili are not aware of the plot by Mosese, Jere, and Jusper to topple Boss who is duped into ordering the guards to surrender their guns to be used during the final rehearsal of the play. The readers on the other hand are awake of the plot by the three.
The writer has employed the use of figurative language in the play. Metaphors and similes have been used as follows:
“He was slaughtered like a goat.” This shows how Adika was killed mercilessly. While referring to this co-actor in the Pilate story, Jere says of him, ‘he wailed like a woman in a death home’ (pg 23) This is a pointer of the cowardice of the individual.
While referring to the terror inflicted on the citizens by Boss and his henchmen, Jusper tells Regina, they come quietly when you are least expecting and before you realize it, they have pounced on you like hungry leopards.’ (pg 32)
Jusper goes on to say, “I defended his remains like a man.’ (pg34) This shows his determination and bravery in ensuring that his brother’s grave was not desecrated.
Mulili tells Jere, “Big coward Jere, you a woman’ (pg 10) The implication here is that Jere is a coward for sympathising with Nina and Doga.
Jusper tells Regina, “Adika died for the truth……he was killed for asking whether or not we were on the right train’ (pg 34). Jusper here is adverting that Adika died for questioning how the country was being governed.
Tumbo tells Jusper that there is a good potato in the work they are about to do in reference to money.
Mulili refers to Jere as chicken hearted (pg 44)
Allusion refers to reference to something or someone else without the context of a given text.
The writer makes several allusions in reference to the Bible. When Jere canes his cell mate as they act out the part of Jesus Christ and Pilate, he finds himself in trouble when the cell mate cries out. He is stripped naked and caned. He tells them it was a case of an eye for an eye and
a tooth for a tooth. This is a verse in the Bible.
The above story is an allusion to the Biblical crucification of Jesus. Many citizens of Kafira have been crucified innocently just like Jesus and many others are the pilates that beat up
Christ. Doga, Nina and Kabito are among those who die needless deaths. The pilates are exemplified by the likes of Boss and Mulili.
Mosese alludes to the biblical inheritance of the Kingdom of heaven in reference to their high expectations after independence. When they are told that their kingdom (independence) has come, it turns out to be an allusion.
Mosese also alluded to the bible when he says ‘……the last shall be first and blessed are the poor for they shall inherit the kingdom of heaven.’ (pg 27) Mosese questions the validity of this bible verse by pointing out the disappointment of the masses. He is disillusion-ned that people had placed their hope in Boss’ regime, only to be disappointed by the turn of events.
Boss tells Jusper that when he was acting, he used to be given bad roles. He would die for mistakes that were not his. Jusper tells him, “I would say it’s sacrifice” A kind of death for a future. The sort of role Christ played’ (pg 66)
While referring to this mother, Mosese tells Jere, “once every year she slaughtered a cock to mark the birth of Christ” (pg 28) Christmas is alluded here.
After Adika’s burial following his killing Nina says that his death has made them blind and left them in blindness. This words ‘blind’ and blindness symbolize the state of hopelessness or disillusionment of Doga and Nina.
Reference is made to the word ‘potato’. Nicodemo asks Kabito “did you get the potato?”
Potato refers to the university tender.
Kabito insists on knowing their terms of service and Nicodemo proceeds to ask the size of potato per hour they are entitled to (pg 53) This is in reference to allowanced due to them.
“Potato” symbolizes corruption that is rampant in Kafira.
Boss orders an Askari to untie the hands of Mosese and Jere (pg 70) The act of untying the two symbolizes their freedom and by extension salvation or the citizens of Kafira.
Askari is a symbol of oppression. Political prisoners like Jere and Mosese are mistreated while in prison. The brutality of the regime is evident when askari says of Mosese ‘……when they brought him in last night , he was all questions. We calculated that two mature strokes would ease the tension (pg 19) He informs Jere that he has once killed a man in that very cell.
The gun is a symbol of power. The moment the askaris surrender their guns to Jere, Mosese and Jusper, power shifts from Boss to the three. Mulili, Boss and Tumbo are at the mercy of the three.
The reappearance od Doga and Nina at the end of theplay after the killing of Mulili is a symbol of change in Kafira, their reappearance at the graveside which now is for Mulili shows that the social order of injustice and misrule exemplified by poor advisors like Mulili has been done away with and now they expect a new Kafira with better leadership and justice.
The writer has employed humour in his play. He portrays Mulili humorously. His broken English and barely comprehensible talks ease the tense moments that keep building in the play. Some of the funny statements he makes include:
“The green grass in the snake” instead of “the green snake in the grass” to refer to hypocrites.
“Sometimes I wonder why you possession that thing between your legs”
“You must apology to me this, now (pg 57)You play with fire you goat!”
Mulili’s attempt to communicate in English is laughable. “Who you call child eeh? Jere you tell him. Tell him what I does with stubborn old mens” (pg 8)
“Big coward. Why you doesn’t let her get on with it. How many I have seen and I am still Mulili with my two eyes, natural? Look, no goggles” (pg 9)
Mulili’s disjointed English is a pointer to his limited education. This is an indication of Boss’ leadership which regards individuals not on the basis of their qualifications but on the basis of blood relationship and perceived loyalty.
Mosese says he has no front when asked by Askari, “What do you think you are doing showing us your back?’ (pg 18)
While responding to Tumbo’s question whether Jusper drinks, Regina replies, ‘there is no brand of beer he hasn’t tasted.’ (pg 41)
In a bid to cover up the heinous crime he has committed Mulili says, “I also ask that, people say his breath smelled full of spirits. That hard stuff” (pg 63) When cornered by Nicodemo he says, “Who said breath, I said his body smelled whiskies.” Humour here is used to portray the
wicked and cruel nature of Mulili and clearly points out his direct involvement in the killing of Kabito.
On realizing that tables have been turned in his cousin Boss and the guns are now in the hands of Jere and Mosese, Mulili says, “I go for short call” (pg 72)
Jusper refers to Regina as girlfriend number one (pg 6). Here humour is used to relieve the tension building up following the desecration of Adika’s grave.
It is ridiculously funny how Tumbo confuses Wole Soyinka a renown-ed writer, for a Prime minister and a politician.
Proverbs are pithy statements that are mainly employed to give advice or to caution. Several instances of proverbs are evident in the text.
The writer has used proverbs to illustrate the wisdom of Doga and his realistic nature. He says, “a mouse does not share a bowl with a cat.’ (pg 3) which implies that they cannot share mutual relationship with the sub-chief whose brother, Chagaga, is responsible for the death of Adika
When Nina suggests that they should report to the sub-chief what has just happened to the grave, Doga uses a proverb to explain her failure to see the futility of her actions. Thus he says, ‘….when dry thunder tears the sky before our eyes, do we forget the storm of yesterday?” (pg3)
Doga insists that the shaving ceremony must go on regardless of the obstacles that they face.
He uses a proverb. “A cloudy sky does not always cry rain’ (pg 3)
Kabito tells Nicodemo, “the tree climber begins from the bottom, not top’ (pg 53). Through this proverb, Kabito wishes to be informed the terms of service of the committee before their meeting. The potrayal of Kabito is that of a materialistic, greedy and self-centred individual.
A foreshadow is a premonition that something is going to happen. Authors use words, signs or events to prepare readers for something that is just to occur.
Doga foreshadows Mulili’s death when he says ‘Empty words will be your downfall. May you die the way Adika did’ (pg 10) His words come to pass when Jusper shoots Mulili.
After his parents are murdered in exchange for his release, Jusper says, “I will get my revenge someday, even if it means going alone” (pg 33) His words are fulfilled when he shoots Mulili dead.
While reacting to Tumbo’s insistence that she must personally see Boss to secure her brother’s release , Regina says, “I have this funny feeling that something will go wrong’ (pg 45) Her fears are justified when later on Boss forcefully tries to get her and she is only able to escape by jumping out of a ten foot high window.
Mulili foreshadows the arrest and imprisonment of Jere when he threatens him; “Hey you…..you shall pay for it” (pg 15)
Boss foreshadows his near death when he says, just before the rehearsal; ‘In four out of five cases I had to die for little, mistakes that were not my own…..”(pg 66)
The reappearance od Doga and Nina at the end of theplay after the killing of Mulili foreshadows the change in Kafira, their reappearance at the graveside which now is for Mulili shows that the social order of injustice and misrule exemplified by poor advisors like Mulili has been done away with and now they expect a new Kafira with better leadership and justice.
PLAY WITHIN A PLAY
The play written by Jusper is entitled Betrayal in the City and captures the event of the palace coup so aptly, In this play prisoners stage a palace coup and exposes the villains in the government who are finally gotten rid of.
Tumbo, the inefficient government official is ordered out of the centre of power and Mulili, the embodiment of evil is killed.
Boss’ life is spared even when he offers himself to be shot- as a sign that there is hope for change in Kafira.
USE OF SONG
The writer has used a song on pg 8;
When we walk with the Lord
In the light of his way…
……But trust and obey.
This song and the subsequent prayer indicate that the couple can only turn to God for solace after all else has failed. Generally, it is their hope in life because under the Kafira government, they can only trust and obey.
It portrays them as religious despite the challenges they are facing. They are seeking for answers through divine intervention.
The song and the prayer summarize their total sense of loss and their deep religious devotion
This style is used in reference to individuals talking about different things in the course of their conversation without realizing it.
The first incident of cross purpose is when Doga, Nina and Jusper appear not to communicate and their statements overlap. When Jusper is at cross purpose with Doga and Nina. Jusper
appears not to communicate with his parents and their statements overlap. When Jusper is referring to a murder he committed at night, his mother thinks that he imagines killing his father. Doga tells Nina not to detain Jusper and instead allow him to go for he is a nuisance.
Jusper responds, “he can’t go he is dead’ (pg 6) Jusper is referring to Adika;s murderer (Chagaga) while his mother means that Doga is dead.
Jusper and Nina also speak in cross purpose on (pg 7) when Jusper asks “…shall I go and confess idid it?” to which Nina answers, “Yes my son, go and put on a clean shirt and then you can confess” Nina thinks Jusper is talking about the ceremony whereas Jusper is talking about confessing that he had killed Chagaga.
Mosese and Jere talk at cross purpose. (pg 30-31) While Mosese in his reverie, seems to be talking to imaginary persons. Jere’s questions punctuate his reverie. In his attempt to understand Mosese’s talk, he finally concludes,
When the madness of an entire nation disturbs a solitary mind, it is not enough to say the man is mad. (pg 33)
BETRAYAL IN THE CITY ESSAY QUESTIONS
- The Elites play a major role in salvaging countries marred by poor governance.
Explain the truth of the above assertion with reference to Francis Imbuga’s Betrayal in the City.
- The government of Kafira is a dictatorial regime that doesn’t mind the suffering of the masses. Explain the truth of the above assertion with reference to Francis Imbuga’s Betrayal in the City.
- Revenge is a vicious cycle that needs to be stopped since it hinders development.
Explain the veracity of the above assertion with reference to Francis Imbuga’s Betrayal in the City.
- Kafira is an epitome of corruption in the developing countries. Explain the truth of the above assertion with reference to Francis Imbuga’s Betrayal in the City.
- Deceit reigns in situations of poor governance and with them comes conflict. Explain the truth of the above assertion with reference to francis Imbuga’s Betrayal in the City.
- A state can be brought down if its leadership thrives on cronyism and poor advisors.
Explain the truth of the above assertion with reference to Francis Imbuga’s Betrayal in the City.
- Kafira’s woes can be attributed to the inefficiency of its leadership. Explain the truth of the above assertion with reference to Francis Imbuga’s Betrayal in the City.
- Betrayal in the city is a perfect satire of the ills in third world countries. . Explain the truth of the above assertion with reference to Francis Imbuga’s Betrayal in the City.
- Bad governance creates room for economic opportunism. Write an essay in support of this statement drawing illustrations from the play Betrayal in the City by Francis Imbuga.
- Mulili is an embodiment of evil attributes. Write an essay in support of this statement drawing illustrations from the play Betrayal in the City by Francis Imbuga.
- Many people in Kafira are traitorous. Write an essay in support of this statement drawing illustrations from the play Betrayal in the City by Francis Imbuga.
- Strikes come with many adverse effects. Write an essay in support of this statement drawing illustrations from the play Betrayal in the City by Francis Imbuga.
- Write an essay explaining the relevance of the title BETRAYAL IN THE CITY from the play Betrayal in the City by Francis Imbuga.
- “THE OUTSIDE OF THIS CELL MIGHT AS WELL BE THE INSIDE OF ANOTHER” from instances in the play write as essay justifying Jere’s assertion drawing illustrations from the play Betrayal in the City by Francis Imbuga.
- Oppression breeds misery and conflict. Write an essay in support of this statement drawing illustrations from the play Betrayal in the City by Francis Imbuga.
- The situation in Kafira has bred despondency amongst its citizens. Write an essay in support of this statement drawing illustrations from the play Betrayal in the City by Francis Imbuga.
- Many eventsand actions in Betrayal in the City are triggered by the need for revenge.
Write an essay in support of this statement drawing illustrations from the play Betrayal in the City by Francis Imbuga.
THE CAUCASIAN CHALK CIRCLE BY BERTOLT BRECHT
Bertolt Brecht was a German poet, playwright and theatrical reformer. He was born in 1898 and became one of the most prominent figures in the 20th -century theater. Bertolt Brecht was concerned with encouraging audiences to think rather than becoming too involved in the story line and to identify with the characters. Bertolt Brecht was born in Augsburg, the son of Beltold Brecht, the director of a paper company, and Sophie Brezing, the daughter of a civil servant. His father was a Catholic, and his mother a Protestant. Both parents hailed from Achern in the Black Forest. Brecht began to write poetry as a boy, and had his first poems published in 1914. Between 1919 and 1921 he wrote theatre criticisms for the left-wing Socialist paper Die Augsburger. After military service as a medical orderly, he returned to his studies, but abandoned them in 1921. During the Bavarian revolutionary turmoil of 1918, Brech wrote his first play, Baal. From this period also dates his poem, ‘Legend of the Dead Soldier’. It was cited by the Nazis as one of their strong reasons to deprive him of German citizeship in 1935. Like several other poems, it was set to music by the author, and sung to the accompaniment of his guitar in a Berlin cabaret. Brecht’s works have be en translated into 42 languages and sold over 70 volumes. The Caucasian Chalk Circle was written in 1944 in
Hollywood. Drawing on the Greek tradition, he wanted his theater to represent a forum for debate hall rather than a place of illusions. He aimed to take emotion out of the production, persuade the audience to distance from the make believe characters and urge actors to dissociate from their roles. Then the political truth would be more easy to comprehend. Once he said: “Nothing is more important than learning to think crudely.Crude thinking is the thinking of great men.” Brecht formulated his literary theories much in reaction to Georg Lukács (1885-1971), a Hungarian philosopher and Marxist literary theoretician. He disapproved Lukács attempt to distinguish between good realism and bad naturalism. He died in 1956.
The Caucasus is a region that bridges Europe and Asia. The Caucasus is divided by the Caucasian mountain ranges into two regions:
The northern slopes of the mountains reach into Chechnya and other border states of the former Soviet Union. On the southern side of the mountains are the modern-day countries Georgia, Armenia and Azerbaijan. Grusinia, where The Caucasian Chalk Circle takes place, is a fictionalized version of the modern day countries; Georgia and Azerbaijan towards the end of the WWII in 1944.
The play was translated to English by Eric Bentley.
The play is a comedy, with a happy ending.
The play is based on communism i.e. whoever can make the best use of resources in order to provide for others deserves to get the best of the resources.
Brecht shows communism through three stories:
- i) The ownership of a piece of land between goat herders and fruit farmers. In the end througharbitrators, the fruit farmers get the valley because they will use the land better.
- ii) The story about Grusha the kitchen maid, through the use of Solomonic law: Solomon and the baby (from the bible). Grusha gets the baby because she deserves him.
iii) The story about Judge Azdak. His fair judging in favour of the peasants made him very popular especially among the poor.
The Caucasian Chalk Circle is derived from a circle Judge Azdak orders Shauwa to draw, “………….get a piece of chalk and draw a circle on the floor.” (pg 97). Its purpose is to determine Michael’s real mother. Both Natella Abashwili and Grusha Vashnadze desire custodian of the child.
Shauwa is directed to place the child in the circle and the mother to hold him by the hands and pull him out. Whoever pulls him out of the circle would retain him.
It is ironical that Natella, Michael’s biological mother, is denied custody of the child when she pulls him out. Grusha declines to tear the child and consequently ends with the child. The title symbolically signifies the possibility of surrendering what might be rightfully yours for better utilization.
The play infers from both a Chinese play (Circle of chalk written in 1300 AD) and a biblical story (The judgment of Solomon- 1 Kings 3: 16-28)
In the Chinese story, a young girl, HAi-tang, bears a child as the second wife of a wealthy man. His first wife claims the child is her own. However, the second wife is judged the true mother when she refuses to pull the child apart in the test of the Chalk Circle.
In the biblical story, two women live in the same house and both bear a child. One baby dies in the night and its mother swaps him for the living baby. Both claim the living child is their own. Solomon orders that the child be cut in two and each half be given to each mother. The real mother of the child gives up the child rather than see him harmed and is judged to be the true mother.
The agriculturist and herders are seated in circles as they negotiate and in the end the herders agree to surrender their claim on the valley of Rosa Luxemburg since they would put it to better use.
The Caucasian Chalk Circle begins with a prologue which captures a dispute between two communities; the fruit growing and the goat farming one. The clash is over who should own and manage the valley. The Goat Farm Commune Group is the original owner who had relocated due to the advancing Hitler’s army. The fruit growing Commune has demonstrated interest in the piece of land. A delegate from Tiflis-the capital of the Soviet State of Georgia-has been sent to settle the dispute.
The Fruit Growing Collective Farm has made elaborate arrangements of irrigating the valley so as to make it more productive. The delegate awards the land to the fruit growers because they have plans to use the resources better despite the land originally belonging to the goat farming group.
Act one begins when the city of Grusinia has been taken over by the iron shirts and the governor, Georgi Abashwili, is beheaded in a coup that has been planned by his brother, the Fat Prince and his head fastened on a wall. The governor’s wife Natella flees and in the process abandons her child, Michael.
Fortunately, the kitchen maid Grusha salvages the child from the soldiers and the Fat Prince and escapes with him to her brother’s place in the Northern Mountains, pursued by soldiers. She endures
great suffering in the way, including hostile and uncooperative people. She finally gets to her brother’s place but he (the brother) insists that she must be married to an almost ‘dying’ man by the name Jussup. Jussup has faked illness to avoid taking part in the war. When it is announced that the war is over, Jussup miraculously recovers. Grusha is stuck with a husband she did not want. When Simon (Grusha’s lover) returns from the war, he discovers that Grusha is married and suspects that Michael is her child. Later, the child is taken away from her by some soldiers who claim that he belongs to Natella and he is taken back to the Caucasian village.
Through a flashback, the writer explains how the Grand Duke is sheltered by Azdak, later to be judge, soon after he escapes the bloody coup. However, Azdak is not aware that he is hiding a dangerous fugitive and fearing he might be branded a traitor he presents himself to the soldiers to be tried and soon wins their favour and is installed as judge.
Azdak judges four very weird cases, ruling in each case in favour of the poor. He soon gains reputation for supporting the poor. He serves for two years as a judge, befo re the return of the Grand Duke. He is arrested for being a ‘traitor’ and as the soldiers are about to kill him, he is saved by the Grand Duke who recalls that he saved his life. He reappoints him to be the judge.
The major case that Azdak handles is that of Grusha and the child. The governor’s wife wants Michael back because without him, she cannot take over the former Governor’s wealth. However,
Grusha wants to keep the child because she has raised him for the past two years. Interestingly, even Simon offers to support her in the trial. When Azdak listens to the case, he orders a Chalk Circle to
be drawn, after he learns what Grusha has done to the child. The child is placed in the middle and orders the two women to pull saying that whoever can pull him out of the circle will get him.
The governor’s wife pulls whereas Grusha lets go. This is repeated and finally, AZDAK gives Michael to Grusha. The governor’s wife is ordered to leave. Michael’s wealth is taken and made into public gardens.
The message the author is passing across is that resources should belong to those who make better use of them- the child to Grusha, just the same way the valley goes to those who will take care of it.
In the end, Azdak divorces Grusha from Jussup, paving way for her to get married to Simon. Azdak disappears never to be seen again.
Summer of 1945
The play begins with a prologue (an introduction to a play) that captures a conflict between members of two collective farms both who claim a stake in a disputed valley. The two rivals are: Goat Farm Rosa Luxemburg and Fruit Farm Galinsk. The two are neighbours.
The goat herding commune claims to be the original owners of the disputed land until Hitler’s armies forced them to relocate. The fruit growing commune has laid down an elaborate plan to irrigate the valley for agricultural purposes. They intend to use a dam across the mountain lake and water seven hundred acres of infertile land and plan to plant vineyards and orchards there
A delegate from the State Reconstruction Commission from Tiflis-the capital city-has been sent to arbitrate on the dispute. He intimates that Goat Farm Rosa Luxemburg occupied the valley before moving East on orders from the government.
The Goat herding commune is now dissatisfied with their new grazing land which they claim is not palatable to their animals. They claim that the valley belongs to them from eternity and the law attests to that. However, members from the Fruit Farm Galinsk explain the reason why they deserve to own the valley.
An amicable solution is finally reached when the land is awarded to the Fruit growing commune and the two groups settle down to eat and drink. Entertainment soon follows when a legendary singer Arkadi- is invited to perform an old Chinese song entitled, The Chalk Circle. This song is about two stories which have a bearing on their resolved dispute.
The prologue serves several functions; first, it gives the play a unique structure, secondly, enables the playwright to pass on his/her key message and the moral of the play to the reader or audience before
he or she watches or reads it. Bertolt roots for communism, that whoever can make good use of something should keep it.
THE NOBLE CHILD
This part opens with Arkadi- the singer narrating a story about Georgi Abashwili, the governor in Grusinia and a rich man who owns numerous horses and soldiers. He is married to Natella and they have a son, Michael.
On the morning of the Easter Sunday, the governor’s family goes to church. At the gateway, he is confronted by many beggars and petitioners. Mothers hold emaciated children as people with clutches and petitions beg for money. They complain of high taxes, starvation and bribery. The governor ignores them and soldiers whip them with thick leather whips to keep them away.
Michael-the governor’s son and heir- is brought along and the crowd sees him for the first time. He is carried in a decorated carriage and is attended to by two doctors. Even the mighty Prince Kazbeki bows before him at the church door.
Natella informs the prince about the Governor’s plan of bringing down the slums to pave way for his garden. The governor has lost interest in the affairs of Grusinian people in spite of the raging war that is taking place. The governor even dismisses a messenger from the cit y bringing some confidential papers for him saying he can only attend to him after the service. Later the adjutant (an officer who acts as military assistant) informs the messenger that the governor does not wish to receive military news before dinner.
Grusha Vashnadze- governor’s kitchen maid- does not attend the service as she has to get a goose for the family’s banquet. She is seen talking to Simon Shashava, a soldier, who reveals that he often hides behind a bush to watch her dip her legs in the river as she washes her line.
Before the awaited dinner and a talk with the architects can take place, the palace is surrounded and the Governor arrested. George Abashwili is executed and the city is in bloodshed. Natella’s life is in danger. Servants rush out of the house trying to frantically salvage what they can. A scuffle erupts between the two family doctors over who should attend to the governor’s wife who has fainted.
Simon comes looking for Grusha. He aims at wooing her. The two have to part ways when Simon is ordered by the adjutant to guard Natella on her way to safety. He gives Grusha a silver chain that his mother had given him. She promises him that she would wait for him and remain faithful till their reunion.The adjutant is seen trying to save Natella from danger but she is reluctant to go without her most valued essentials. The adjutant forces her on a horse back amidst complaints that she has left her wine-coloured dress. She leaves her child Michael behind who falls into the custody of Grusha the kitchen maid. As everyone flees, Grusha decides to hide the child under a blanket and keeps the baby company throughout the night. The following day she flees with the child from the Ironshirts who together with the Fat Prince are looking for the baby, “It’s a pity they took the brat along, though, I need him urgently.” (pg 28)
THE FLIGHT TO THE MOUNTAINS
The Singer accounts Grusha escape from the city to the Northern Mountains to save Michael from the Fat Prince and his soldiers. She is carrying Michael in a sack. She journeys along the Grusinian highway on the Northern Mountains after singing “The song of the Four Generals.” As lunchtime approaches, she has to look for a meal to feed the child. She buys milk from a peasant at two piasters, an equivalent to a week’s pay.
Having spent most of her money Grusha keeps on moving towards the north as the Iron shirts who want to kill Michael pursue her. The singer tells us that she then arrives at the River Sirra and with the burden of the child weighing on her; she decides to keep him at the doorstep of a farmyard after realising that the peasant woman has some milk. She anticipates the peasant will feed him and goes to hide behind a tree in order to watch what would happen.
When the peasant woman finds Michael at her door, she takes him into the house. She suggests to her husband that they keep the child but her husband tells her to give him to the local priest. As
Grusha hurries off in the opposite direction she bumps on Ironshirts who demand to know where she is coming from. She lies that she is going to meet Simon Shashava. The ironshirts demand the whereabouts of Michael. Grusha gets scared and rushes back to the cottage where she had left the child and pleads with the peasant woman to hide it.
Initially the woman agrees to hide Michael but is immediately frightened by the presence of the soldiers. She reveals to the corporal that Grusha left the child on her doorstep. In desperation, Grusha seizes a log and hits the corporal on the head until he loses consciousness. She then grabs Michael and runs away.
In her flight from the Ironshirts, she finally reaches the foot of Janga-Tau Glacier after journeying for twenty-two days. She adopts Michael. She removes his silken shirt, throws it away and wraps him in rags. Finally, she arrives at the bridge on the glacier still pursed by the Ironshirts. One of the bridge’s rope is broken and half of the bridge is hanging down the abyss.Despite the danger, Grusha is determined to cross the bridge. Luckily they get to the other side of the bridge despite fears and warning by the merchants on the impending danger. She laughs triumphantly to her freedom as the
Ironshirts pursuing her cannot cross the bridge. Finally, she sings “The Song of the Child” (pg 41)
IN THE NORTHERN MOUNTAINS
After journeying across the glacier for another seven days, Grusha finally arrives at Lavrenti’s (her brother) house. She expects to be welcomed warmly but this is not the case. Her bother has to cook up a story to convince his religious wife that his sister is on her way to her husband’s place at the mountains.
To have Grusha leave the house, Lavrenti comes up with an idea of getting her a husband. He (Lavrenti) organizes to get her married to a “dying” man – Jussup at a fee of 400 piasters. The mother-in-law realizing there is a child demands for an additional 200 piasters for the wedding to proceed. The mother-in-law has hired a cheap monk to unite the two.
After the wedding, neighbours who came to witness the marriage ceremony are served with cakes as they gossip. From the gossiping visitors, news indicates that the Grand Duke has assembled an army to fight the princes that rebelled against him the previous year. When Grusha hears that the soldiers are coming back now that the war is over, she is in shock and drops a cake pan. Her worry being that Simon will come back and find she is married to another man. Once Jussup hears the war is over, he miraculously recovers.
Jussup gets out of bed and the visitors are shocked to see him. He orders them out of the house before kicking them out. Grusha finds herself in a tight position as she discovers she has a husband yet the man she loves is on the way. Furthermore, Jussup demands that she becomes more intimate with him and accuses her of not performing her wifely duties. With time Simon face grows dimmer and his voice becomes fainter.
In a play within a play, we see as Grusha washes linen by the stream accompanied by Michael, she advises him to go play with the other children. As they play they enact the beheading of the
governor- Michael’s father. However, instead of playing the part of the governor like the other children want him to do; he insists that he be allowed to behead the fat boy, who represents the fat prince. This foreshadows the beheading of the fat prince later.
As the children play, Grusha turns and sees Simon Shashava on the other side of the stream. After some talk, he sadly learns that all is not well with their relationship. Simon notices the child, Michael, Simon asks, ‘Is there a little one already?’ (pg 61) Grusha admits there is a child but not hers. The singer who speaks for each of the the two character’s thought, reveals much of the information to us. Simon demands that she gives him the silver cross back, but she declines.
Grusha hears the other children calling. She finds the ironshirts taking Michael away. When asked whether the child is hers she responds by saying that she is indeed the mother, something that makes
Simon leave a dejected man. The iron shirts take away Michael back to the city.
Grusha follows them to the city but dreads to lay claim on the child. The Singer ends the act with questions about Grusha’s future: “Who will decide the case? To whom will the child be assigned?
Who will be the judge?…” (pg 62). The matter will now be handed over by Azdak, the city judge, to determine the rightful owner of the child.
THE STORY OF THE JUDGE
Rewind to the day of the coup, the day Grusha took the child. The village clerk(scrivener), Azdak, has been poaching in the woods and comes across someone he believes to be a refugee. He shelters him for the night only discovering after the man has gone that it was the Grand Duke himself, who escaped the clutches of the rebellious princes.
Rather than risk being found out Azdak hands himself in, expecting to be punished. When he gets to the courtroom he sees the hanging bodies of authority figures and mistakenly interprets the revolution as a people’s revolt. His shouts of joy are interrupted by a soldier who tells him he’s got it all wrong: it’s not a people’s revolution but a military coup. An uprising by the rebellious carpet weavers resulted in all the hangings and the soldiers were brought in to suppress them. Azdak is nearly hanged by soldiers.
The Fat Prince brings his nephew(Bizergan Kazbeki) to be installed as the new judge (the old judge had been killed by the carpet weavers). Azdak suggest that the candidate’s knowledge in law be tested. In a play within a play, Azdak plays the role of the defendant. The soldiers, after test ing the nephew in a mock trial in which Azdak accuses the Fat Prince of profiting from the Persian war, makes Azdak judge instead.
Over two years Azdak, with his trusty assistant Shauva, travels the country turning justice on its head, accusing a rape victim of being a rapist herself, sympathising with an old woman clearly guilty of theft, doling out law as he sees fit. Finally the Grand Duke comes back, the Fat Prince is beheaded and Natella Abashvilli returns from exile. Frightened that his behaviour over the last couple of years will land him in trouble now that order is restored, Azdak promises to help Natella get her son back.
THE CHALK CIRCLE
The Singer introduces us to the Act by saying it is “the story of the trial.” The trial is about determining who is the true mother to Michael and in this regard, Grusha has come back to the city to face the law for having taken the Governor’s son.
As they wait for the judge to come, Simon appears and swears he will say he is the father to the child. Then Grusha spots the Ironshirt whom she clobbered and this makes her regret why she came to Nuka. The corporal leaves cursing as he fears exposing Grusha because he would be admitting that he ran after the child to kill it.
The governor’s wife, Natella, arrives, in her characteristic style, she cannot hide her contempt for the low class and the underprivileged: “At least there are no common people here, thank God. I can’t stand their smell. It always gives me migraine.” (pg 88)
Azdak having been declared an enemy of the new regime( for having worked with the Fat Prince) is stripped of his judge’s robes. The Ironshirts and the farmers tear his gown and beat him. He is about to be hanged when a messenger arrives announcing the Grand Duke would like Azdak to remain asjudge, as a thank you for saving his life that Easter Sunday.
Azdak presides over a trial in which he must judge who gets Michael – Grusha, who has cared for him and put herself through hell for him; or his natural mother, Natella, who abandoned him. A heated debate ensues on who is the rightful owner of the child. The prosecutors explain that Grusha has stolen Natella’s child and refuses to hand it over. They advance their case by saying that Grusha does not have any blood relations with the child. On the other hand, Grusha lays claim on the child by saying that she brought him up and always found him something to eat.
Hearing both arguments, Azdak is unable to decide. He adjourns the court to hear the case of an old couple who want a divorce. He tells them he’ll think about it. Returning to Michael’s case, Azdak invokes the ancient wisdom of the Chalk Circle: Michael is placed in the centre of a circle and whoever is strong enough to pull him out must be the right mother. Grusha won’t pull, she cannot hurt him. Azdak orders the women to repeat the trial. Grusha again cannot pull.
Azdak judges that she must be the right mother. Natella faints. Simon and Grusha thank Azdak, who signs the divorce papers – not the divorce of the old couple but Grusha’s divorce from the man she married in the mountains. Everyone dances. Azdak disappears. The Singer explains that the child has been given to the mother who will be best for it – and, reminding us of the prologue, that the land should go to whoever is right for it.
CORRUPTION/GREED AND MATERIALISM
Corruption mainly refers to lack of integrity or honesty and is mainly manifested by accepting bribes.
Corrupt individuals use their privileged positions they have been entrusted with to make illegitimate gains, thus undermining their moral integrity. They are usually driven by greed. Forms of corruption
vary and can include bribery, extortion, nepotism, and general embezzlement of mainly of public funds.
George Abashwili is materialistic. As he makes procession to enter the church fort Easter service, many beggars and petitioners try in vain to reach out to him. We learn through his wife Natella that the governor plans to tear down the slums to create room for the garden of the East Wing of palace.
“All those wretched slums are to be torn down to make room for the garden.” (pg 15)
After the coup and the beheading of the governor, we see Natella in a hurry to collect her dresses and shoes. She abandons her son Michael as she runs for her safety. Later we learn that the main reason she is claiming her son Michael from Grusha is to get inheritance of the vast governor’s estates.
The Ironshirts are corrupt. They use their privileged positions to execute others and in the process make illegitimate gains. One Ironshirt says, “…This morning they strung up the city judge. As for us we beat them to pulp. We are paid one hundred piasters per man, you understand?” The iron shirts follow Grusha and Michael since a good price is offered.
Azdak, the judge, is overly corrupt and his greed unstoppable. He openly takes bribes in the court before listening to a case. He begins by saying, “I accept,” meaning that he is willing to be bribed.
As Azdak executes his duties, his deeds do not measure up to the expected standards. He makes controversial judgements that put his integrity into questions. He sits on the statue book when delivering justice. A pointer to his contempt for what is just. He also takes wine in public as he executes his duties.
ABUSE OF POWER
The governor, George Abashwili, is said to be as rich as Croesus. He has so many horses in his stable and yet there are so many beggars on hisdoor step. This shows that he amasses so much wealth for himself at the expense of his subjects. They pile along the gate carrying thin children and holding petitions. They cry for mercy and reduction of the high taxes. (pg 14).
The governor has hired two doctors to look after his son Michael-the apple of his eyes. (pg 15). This is in contrast to the starving and suffering common men who push and shove to see the governor’s heir.
The governor plans to tear down the slums to start building the East Wing garden for his son
Michael. It does not matter to him that those slums are people’s homes. The soldiers also abuse power. “…soldiers push the crowd back lashing at them with thick whips.” (pg 14) When the crowd pushes to have a peep at their heir-baby Michael- the crowd is pushed back by the iron shirts using thick whips.
The Fat prince abuses power when he conspires and overthrows the governor from power. He (The Fat prince) then orders the governor to be beheaded and his head hanged at the entrance of the palace for all to see. He then orders the iron shirts to follow Grusha and get Michael back; he intends to kill him too. The fat prince also abuses power by practising nepotism, where he intends to have his nephew, Bizergan Kazbeki, to be bestowed as the new judge. “………….so I’ve bought along my dear nephew Bizergan Kazbeki, He’ll be the new judge, hm?” (pg 71)
The judge, Azdak abuses power openly by accepting bribes. Before considering any case he utters a short statement- I accept- to mean he is ready to take a bribe. All the cases he judges are in favour of the suffering poor. He fines the wealthy like the farmers heavily, in this way he abuses power to help the poor.
The playwright explores the theme of love and friendship through various characters in the play. This is mainly portrayed through the parental love between the governor and his son Michael, Grusha, the kitchen maid and Michael, Grusha’s romantic love with Simon Shashava and finally between Grusha and her brother Lavrenti Vashnadze.
Michael does not experience the motherly love from his biological mother Natella Abashwili.
Fortunately, his father, the governor of the Caucasian City bestows on Michael fatherly love.
Michael is attended to by two doctors who never mover from his side to keep him in good health.
The Fat prince also notices the child on their way to church and comments that, “And little Michael is a governor from head to foot!” (pg15). Natella, Michael’s biological mother, is jealous of the attention Michael is given by his father. She says it is impossible for them to live in the slum but her husband would build the East Wing for Michael since he is the apple of the governor’s eye.
“…will only build for little Michael…Michael is all…(pg 18-19). Finally, she abandons him.
Grusha loves Michael. She has to overcome a strong tide of opposition from the other servants before she rescues Michael. The groom tells her, “Better put him down, I tell you. I’d rather not think
what’d happen to anybody who was found with the baby.” (pg 27) The older woman tells her, Grusha, you’re a good soul, but you are not very bright, and you know it. I tell you, if he has plague he couldn’t be more dangerous.” (pg 27). Grusha watches over Michael the whole night and by morning as the writer puts it, the seduction between Grusha and Michael is complete, “…till morning the seduction was complete…she crept away,”(pg 29). She also saves the child from being killed by several iron shirts. Just like a mother who loves her child, she makes several sacrifices. She is forced to buy him milk at an exorbitant price using her meagre weekly pay. She risks her life to save Michael by hitting a corporal with a wooden log and crosses over to the Northern Mountains using a broken bridge. She has to marry a “dying man”- Jussup- for Michael’s sake and thus risks her engagement with Simon Shashava.
The climax of Grusha’s love for Michael is shown at the trial scene. Grusha defends for her love towards Michael by saying that she brought him up and that she married because of Michael. When Azdak, the judge, asks for Michael so that he can choose his true mother, Michael’s love for Grusha is seen when he smiles at her. After drawing the Chalk Circle, Azdak orders the two women to pull the child out of the circle. Meanwhile, Grusha refuses to pull portraying her motherly love and finally she says, ‘I brought him up! Shall I also tear him to bits? I can’t.” (pg 98)
As Grusha flees to the north, she comes across a bridge on the glacier. She is determined to cross but the merchants caution her against risking her life and that of Michael, The merchant woman tells her,
‘But you can’t take the child on that bridge. It’s sure to break. And look! (pg 41) The next man warns her to think of the baby, “I think of the baby. Risk your life not a child’s (pg 41). This shows their
love and compassion for Michael.
The love relationship between Grusha and Simon is romantic. It is already sealed through an engagement. They exchange intimate words and inquire about each other’s background. Simon
removes a chain from his neck and tells Grusha, “…my mother gave me this cross…please wear it.” (pg 22). Grusha promises Simon that she would wait for him. She says, “Simon Shashava…it is
just as it was.” (pg 23). Grusha is introduced to the idea of getting married to Jussup due to the illegitimacy of the child. However, deep within her, she loves Simon and wishes that the union would not last long so that she may re-unite with her fiancé whom she thinks would willingly take care of Michael. This turns out to be true.
True love unfolds when Simon testifies at the court that he is Michael’s father. “I am the father, your honour.” (pg 93). The climax of the sincere love for each other is portrayed when Grusha informs Simon that, “Now I can tell you: I took him because on that Easter Sunday I got engaged to you. So he’s a child of love. Michael, let’s dance.” (pg 99). This she does after the judgement where she wins the child.
When Grusha runs to the North and arrives at her brother’s house, her brother sympathises with her and gives her a roof and even makes arrangements for her to get married to the “dying” man, Jussup.
After the marriage, Jussup takes in both her and the child without asking questions, It is her compassion for Michael that makes her to agree to be married yet she is engaged to Simon.
NEGLIGENCE OF DUTY /IRRESPONSIBILITY
Negligence refers to failure to give somebody or something enough care or attention. It also refers to failure to perform one’s duty which impacts negatively on others.
Georgi Abashwili is the Governor and therefore responsible for the welfare of those under him.
Although he is rich, he has so many beggars from the gateway, holding up thin children, crutches and petitions. Although they have come for help, he does not attend to any. It is Easter and therefore one
would expect he would be compassionate enough to listen to their grievances. They complain of taxes being high. One petitioner laments: “The child is starving in my arms (pg 14). Although there
is a servant collecting their grievances and another distributing coin s from a purse, none of their petitions is attended to and eventually they are driven back with whips.
Despite being in a high position and being responsible for the welfare of the people, we are surprised to learn that, he knows nothing about the approaching war and therefore no safety measures have been put in place. When asked about the war, he indicates lack of interest.
The Governor has ignored the plight of his subjects. There are so many of them in the slums. To make matters worse he has decided to tear down the slums to make room for a garden for the East Wing he is about to construct. People are complaining of hunger, yet his child has two doctors, The two doctors are also irresponsible in that none wants to take responsibility over the discomfort o f the child. They blame each other over lukewarm bath water used to bath the child.
The governor is informed by his Adjutant that an injured young rider has come as a messenger from the capital, bringing him confidential papers. He neglects his responsibility to see him and after waiting in vain the messenger mutters a curse and leaves. We are not surprised when we learn that the plotting against the Governor by The Fat Prince happened in the capital therefore we can guess that the messenger comes to warn him. Eventually, the governor loses his life.
It is strange that the Governor refuses to talk to the wounded Rider when he appears again but prefers to confer with the architects. The Adjutant says of him, “The governor does not wish to receive
military news before dinner- especially if it’s depressing (pg 19). Because of his irresponsibility in choosing his priorities, he is caught unawares and is beheaded. That is why the singer laments over
the blindness of the great who, “………..go their ways like gods….sure of hired fists. Trusting in their power. But long is not forever.” (pg 20)
It is the height of irresponsibility when Natella Abashwili takes her time choosing the dresses and shoes to carry. She finally leaves and forgets her child whom she had directed to be laid on the floor.
She is busy rummaging through clothing when the Adjutant is busy pleading that they should run for their lives. She does not care about the many people she is exposing to danger by her delay, Maro, a
servant, realizes that, only beasts can leave children behind. She says, “They left it behind, the beasts” (pg 26)
Lavrenti, Grusha’s brother, is irresponsible and neglects her when he fails to look after her. He marries her off to a total stranger and “a dying man” it becomes a double tragedy when Jussup does not die and Grusha does not know what to do with a total stranger who is unaware of her plight and yet she cannot marry her lover Simon. As an older brother of Grusha, Lavrenti fails in his responsibility to support her.
The monk hired to officiate the wedding is irresponsible. He agrees to join a girl to “a dying man.”
We are surprised that, the monk, a man who should be a role model is upholding morals in a society is called from a tavern. He is drunk.
DECEIT, RELIGIOUSITY AND HYPOCRISY
Religion refers to having or showing belief in and reverence for a deity on the other hand hypocrisy is deception by pretending to entertain on set of intentions while acting under the influence of another. In “The Caucasian Chalk Circle” cases of religious hypocrisy are common.
Act one of the play begins with Governor Georgi Abashwili going for Easter mass. He is accompanied by his wife Natella, and Michael, their child. Although he would like to pass as a devoted Christian, his regime has oppressed the people it serves. As they enter the church, beggars and petitioners cry over all sorts of problems that bespeaks of a people who have been living in an oppressive regime. They lament, “Mercy! Mercy, your Grace! The taxes are too high. –I lost my leg in the Persian war….The child is starving in my arms….the water inspector takes bribes…… (pg 14)
As for the Fat Prince, hypocrisy reigns supreme. He attends church, wishes the Governor a happy Easter Sunday and bows before Michael. He tickles the child after commenting, “I love a gay sky…..little Michael is a Governor from head to foot!” (pg 15). He also tells the governor there is good news after so much bad. This is total deception that he is loyal to the Governor’s family. Plans to behead the Governor and end Michael’